AO fiction. An online ongoing novel.

[Demonskates]

Alot of folks have been talking about writing books on this site,so i thought it would be fun to do a weekly fictional story about some of the cats on A.O.Ill do a new chapter each week out of shear boredom,havent been sleeping well.I used to do creative writng in school and i kinda miss it.Mind you i dont know every detail about every one so places and circumstances will be fictional.the personalitys,well i got the jist on a few of you so here goes.

chapter one:Armegeddon.

When it happened we all were suprised.It was one thing to talk of armageddon on a chat forum,but to actually witness it?Well you can understand the chaos that ensued.
when the internet went offline we knew it was bad.For a number of years the world had been in a state of decline.The war in Iraq had spread to Iran,We were ousted from Afghanistan,the draft was reinstated,Bush was assasinated.Political leaders couldnt seem to get it together long enough to agree on anything.The American public was enraged at the current state of everything.After the stock market crash in 09,many people couldnt afford even the basics.Gas was for the rich by this point.Millions of cars sitting rotting in driveways around the globe.Marshal law was now being strictly enforced.
what a mess.Then it happened.The holy grail of all terror attacks.In one thousandth of a second,Boston was evaporated in the first nuclear missle attack on U.S. soil.Talk of the russians selling nukes to Iran became even more prevalent,and was appearing all over the news.

(three months earlier)

Uki awoke in the morning as he always had.Rolled out of bed and took a shower.
the steam and warm water was refreshing,he hadnt been sleeping well.He stood there for a while absorbing the warmth,soothing away the pain in his muscles.He turned off the water and wraped a towel around himself and made his way twards the mirror.He looked like hell.Dark circles under his eyes,and stubble on his face from two days of growth.He fliped off the face in the mirror."the fuck are you lookin at''he mutterd as he squeezed toothpaste onto his tooth brush.He was thinking about his kids.He hadnt wanted to send them to be with their mother,but Uki knew what was coming up and insisted.He missed them badly.Its not always easy being one of gods warriors.Pennsylvania like all other states in America now was more like a prison than a state.Food is rationed,and the 6pm curfew is strictly enforced by homeland security,which had become an army of its own,answerable only to the president,whoever that will be.Uki smiled as he thought of the news footage of Bushes head exploding from a snipers bullet.He wasnt the only one who smiled when they thought of it.It was all that was being talked about on Armegeddon online.He spit the minty fresh colegate with tarter control into the sink,ran the faucet for a second washing away the toothpaste and got dressed.He turned on the computer and let it warm up while he went through his Martial arts Kata's,first bare handed,then with his razor sharp Katana.The blade moving in well timed, well practiced accuracy.Its balance was superb.The way it just naturaly fit into your hand.the way the tsuba rested on top of your hand.the weight of it.A master peice of weaponry,honed and perfected in over a year of manufacture.It hadnt been cheap.Made by a true Japaneese master.His mark inscribed on the tang.A mark of a true peice of cutlery.Not that fake crap you can buy at the flea market,or from the home shopping network when they have those two southern idiots selling every cheap form of edged weapon ever created to make you part with your hard earned dollars.No this blade was the real deal.When it cut through the air it makes a musical ring,a sign of a true masterwork.The blade had been made of one peice of steel,hammered and folded over and hammered again thousands of times until it took the shape it now holds.Exsquisite.He finished his Kata and returned the Katana to its scabard in one well practiced motion.
He sat in his chair at his computer catching his breath.He typed his password,connecting to the internet and logged in at www.armageddononline.org.
The politics and current events forum was inundated with the news of President Bush's assasination,and ranting posts of the new president,and what this means for the American people."A week later and this is still the only fucking news anyone bothers writing about."Uki thought.
He read part way through a scathing post by Solve et Coagula about how cheney is the new antichrist and flicks back to the main board.
The conspiracy theories section was equally abuzz with consipracys ranging from a hostile military coup de tat,to Iran being the culprit in bushes assasination.According to Micahyah's post"The U.S. government killed president Bush,Micahyah beleives its an inside job."yeah,no shit."thought Uki.
Matt Marriot of course reveals the Illuminati's role "for the first time ever" in Bush's assasination.Which was only slightly less amusing than Kathaksung's now five year old thread"the dark side of America."In which it states that they are using radioactive additives in his food to keep track of him,and his wife,and have attemted for the 1000th time to off him with some kind of death ray in some covert CIA satalite program.It just missed him,vaporizing some poor old Vietnameese woman.

"Good lord the dangers of being a porcelin salesman :crazy: ." was Demonskates response,in his typical smart ass way.Uki laughed and ventured to a thread written by Krakatoa about cheney becoming the new preesidents,and that she was Vary upst by these,and wanted to know if wee feelt the smae ways abouts it.Uki got what she meant.

(meanwhile in Massachsettes)
Demonskates woke up to one of the dogs barking."shut the fuck up!"He screamed.It was the fourth night in a row that he hadnt gotten any sleep due to canine ignorance.He rolled over and fumbled around for a pack of cigarettes.One left.He sits up in bed placing the cigarette in his mouth and lights it,drawing deeply.He exhaled a large coud of smoke into the center of the room watching as it rises twards the ceiling.Falling out of bed and cursing,he gets to his feet and sorts through empty Burbon bottles looking for the one he had opened the night before.
To his displeasure he discovers that the 100 proof burbon had been finished the previous night."NOOOO!!!!!!!"Demon screams as he clutches the emty bottle with a very dramatic pained expression on his face.He hates going to the package store at 9:30 in the morning.He slid on his Doc Martins,still wearing the same cloths he had passed out in the night before and climbs the stairs to the garage and hops on his bicycle making the ride to the packy.He passed a column of Homeland security armored vehicles that were pulled over along the roadside.The soldiers watch him,glaring as Demon passes by.Once demon is passed them he sparks his last joint to pass the time by on the ride to the store.
A very stoned Demonskates entered the package store at 9:55 a.m. and demanded a bottle of knob creek burbon,slaping 35 bucks down on the counter.The casheir rolled her eyes and grabs a bottle for demon."Thanks baby doll." says demon,who is told by the cashier not to call her baby doll."so how about your...." "no,you can not have my phone number."States the pretty cashier like shes had to every day since demon started going to that package store."yeah,yeah." Mutters demon taking the burbon and leaving the change for the Cashier.On they way out he steals a slim jim and proceeds to eat it,throwing the empty wraper on the floor,also like he had every day since he had started going to that package store.Demon cracks the wax off the top of the burbon bottle and pulls the cork,taking a long pull of the amber liquid.He coughs,and farts slightly before getting back on his bike.
Apparently the homeland security convoy has gone to wherever homeland security convoys go to now adays as it wasnt there on demons way back.Demon rounded the corner of rte 138 and elm st. east,his street.He heard guns barking in the distance.Automatic guns to be specific.Demon watched in horror as he saw two homland security soldiers proceed to rip a man in two with machinegun fire.This sight was becoming normal in many parts of the U.S.Demon watched as the bullets produced a pink mist just above the mans stomach,with large stringy globules of flesh and blood bursting from his back.He could hear the blood splatter on the ground in a sickening way.Demon rode past and quickly went home.Once in the safty of his house he went down stairs and turned on his computer,and drank three shots in quick succesion."Welcome.you have mail."Happily chirped demons aol page.
"Get bent"replied demon,typing in the web address for armegeddononline.The familar main page appeared in all its apocalyptic glory.Demon jumped in his seat at the sound of more automatic weapons cracking somwhere further down the road.
This is the third time this week he had heard the Death squads doing their work.about 90 people in Raynham have been "liquidated"By homeland security death squads,who weed out the "enemys of the state."with ruthless efficency.Those gunned down,are being crucified on phone poles more frequently now as well to serve as a reminder to those who would defy the regime.Raynham center is like a horrible specticle with crucified bodys hanging frome the phone polls.A grim reminder.This act has been played out in countless other towns and states all over the U.S at an Alraming rate.It really sucks during the summer.Demon is distracted by a porn pop up with gigantic hooters and is impressed by their pixelated splendor.
Demon reads a post by Loganosborne talking about how Britain is very much so in the same state of affairs as the u.s.,murder squads and all.Demon replys with his expiriance this morning,recounting the horrible details of the death he witnessed.
(to be continued)

[Smoke]

dude if you post every single week i will read em this is awsome shit! ha ha it was smiling the whole tie and its something to do while im at skool fuckin awsome man! if you do me.. dont make me a pussy lolsomethin with the military, have mercy.. on my soul

and keep writing ill read this all day ha ha

[Demonskates]

dude if you post every single week i will read em this is awsome shit! ha ha it was smiling the whole tie and its something to do while im at skool fuckin awsome man! if you do me.. dont make me a pussy lolsomethin with the military, have mercy.. on my soul

and keep writing ill read this all day ha ha
dont worry Smoke,i have a plan for you my freind.

[loganosborne]

Awesome story Demon can't wait for next weeks edition.

[Demonskates]

Awesome story Demon can't wait for next weeks edition.
thanks,im not quite finished with todays bit,im in between watching my daughter for a little while til my mom gets back,thatll give me time to think out whats next.

[Smoke]

Awsome ha ha, you know this is shaping out nicely you got a nice story goin on:)

[Demonskates]

Demon looked at a few more threads one about how Al queda had the upper hand in Iraq,and how Russia was responsible for supplying the insurgency in Iraq and Iran,what a truley odd twist of fate,thirtynine years ago it had been the U.S supplying weapons to the Taliban to fight the Russians."Pay back is a bitch" thought demon.
(somewhere in Iran)
Grendel13 couldnt beleive he was here.Again.The first people called in the draft were previous soldiers who had fought in Iraq and Afghanistan.Grendel wasnt thrilled about having to fight again,but it beat the alternative.Draft dodgers were routinely being rounded up and shiped to secret prison camps,to be tortured and usually executed.
The Marines and army have made a push in the last few weeks gaining some territory on the eastern boarder of Iran.Not as strong a foot hold as comanding officers would have liked but it would do for now.Grendel was with a company of commandos who would be reconing the no mans land about two clicks from their current position.He listened as a salvo of artilery screached over head fired from positions in the rear.prolly 23rd artilery.In the distance he could hear the WHUMP WHUMP WHUMP KA BOOOM!!!!Of artilery hitting its target.This time around he had opted for sniper school.He had passed with flying colors.No small feat.He was fitting a new Zeiss optics scope to his .50 caliber bolt action rifle.the scope had wire mesh over the lense to break up reflections.It was marked on the reticule for a distance of up to 600 yards.The rifle was a monster in size.Painted in the desert camo patern.Once he had fitted the scope he peered through it into enemy territory.nothing but sand.He focused on a rock,he slid the bolt up and back revealing the opening of the receiver,and slid his cutom made extra grain fifty caliber ball powder round into the receiver.He slid the bolt in and pressed it down into place.He adjusted for wind and leverage.400 yards.he breathed in and held his breath,steadying his arms.he squeezed the trigger and a loud explosion erupted from his rifle.The rock exploded into dust.The sight was now calibrated.
He exhaled and smiled."400 yards not shabby."He ejected the spent casing and put it in his pack so it could be reused when turned in.He was awaiting orders.The Taliban had some hardliners entrenched further up the supply route,with some fortified defenses,some rpgs and lord knows what else.The combat had been feirce.
Another salvo of artilery roared over head.The 23rd had been softening targets up ahead all morning.Grendel slid his rifle into its protective canvas bag,and slung an
M-16/M203 combo over his shoulder and headed to chow hall for lunch.He weaved his way in and out between other soldiers and humvee's to the large building that was almost the only permanant structure on base.The din of solodiers talking and joking filled grendels ears.the ply wood door closing behind him with a slight bang.he grabed a tray and shuffled along with others already in line.The cooks slapping spoonfuls of somthing that didnt look to far from dog shit onto the tray with a dense thud.Followed by somthing that was supposed to pass for toast.
S.O.S for short,or lovingly refered to troops as Shit on a shingle.A military dietary staple since world war one.Lovely.Grendel winced as the cook slaped a spoonful of this dietary delight onto his tray with perfect disinterest.futher down the line he found salad in a small plastic container and a packet of italian dressing and added it to his tray.He spotted his spotter already digging in at a table near the end of the chow line."Hey grendel!" Smoke said,smiling and waving at grendel to join him."hey smoke," said grendel,laying his tray down and grabing a spot across from Smoke."did we get the assignment LT.Dowrey was talking about?Smoke laughed and shook his head as he watched Grendel make a disgusted look at his food tray.
"It never gets easier does it?"Grendel opened his mouth to reveal chewed up SOS.
"Fucking gross!"
Smoke had joined the canadian Army back home when things got bad.Canada had become victims to terror as well and had ended up joining the fight,only to become Americas pawns.Smoke had lost his family when Toronto had been hit with biological agents by the Taliban sleeper cells in 06.He had been at school.With nowhere to go,the army seemed like a good idea at the time.He was assigned to grendel,as a spotter.Of all people,it was quite a suprise when they introduced themselves to find out they had chatted together on A.O.Some luck.
Smoke lied about his age and it landed him in the worst place on earth,Iran.
They finished thier psudo food and walked up to the barracks to see if they could find the Lt."Just like old times" thought grendel."does the army ever know what the fuck its doing?"A humvee pulled up a stoped and Lt. dowrey got out and shook hands with grendel."I was just looking for you"said grendal smiling,
"yeah,i had to go up to meet with the brass on this new plan we have you volunteered for."The lt.handed Grendal a manila folder."step into my office"
grendal and smoke followed behind the Lt."as you know"continued the Lt."the 23rd has been pounding the shit out of some defensive positions two clicks east of here,there is reason to beleive that some higher ups in the taliban chain of command are present and directing things."Grendel opened the folder a layed they contents on the Lts desk.Two pictures and a topographical map,probably from a land sat image from space."These two are your targets." said the Lt.pointing at the photos."you are to eliminate them with extreme prejudice."This map shows current positions of the defences and has a couple of marks indicating where your targets are likely to be.You are to be in position by no later than 1200 hours.You are to maintain radio contact with me and when you have permission,take them out."
Youll get a lift in a apc for the first click,the second,youll have to hump.If need be we can cover you with air support,but at least try all means first before calling a sorty."Any questions?" Grendal and Smoke shook their heads and saluted.The lt. saluted back and wished them well.
(somewhere in massachusetts)
Demonskates was now officialy drunk.Bored with porn,he ventured outside.He watched as the airforce planes laid thick chemtrails a few miles from where he was.
Another way of controling the public.The chemtrails contain somthing that make the majority of people sluggish.No energy.Demonskates had found that small amounts of crystal meth countered this effect.Not healthy but it works and it was good enough for him.he walked into the woods near his house where he had a hidden bunker.He slid the trap door open and droped into the hole,sliding the trap door back in place over his head.Inside was an illegal Radio that can be tuned to military chanels.He had swiped it from an un attended homeland security APC.
he also had taken a couple of M-16's and loaded magazines he had been collecting for months now.All punishable by death.He tuned the radio in and listened to the airforce station,and the chatter of the pilots.no doubt the ones he was seeing cheming the shit out of bridgewater right now.He and his freinds were secretly a part of a new resistance movement in Massachusetts.Also punishable by death.
As a joke,they had called themselves the wolverines,like in the movie red dawn and it just kinda stuck.They had been wreaking havoc on communications,making it hard for the death squads to stay in contact with base.
Demon heard a noise near the trap door.He slowly picked up the M-16,locking and loading a fresh 35 shot magizine.he silently crept tward the door with the muzzle aimed at the opening.When the hatch opened he saw it was J.W. J.W. jumped back when he saw a gun barrel in his face.Demon said "password" still aiming the rifle at J.W's head. J.W. turned around and dropped his pants bearing his ass at Demon.Demon laughed and told J.W. to get the fuck inside,that his ass was so white they could see it back at homeland security base.Jhonny pulled his pants up
and climbed into the hole.
J.W. had been the lead gutarist in the band demoskates was in when the band had still been together.J.W. was obviously cranked up on meth.he kept wiping at his nose and fidgeting.
He produced a large packet of the meth and threw it to demon.
"this shit is rocket fuel man,just finished the batch today."
"yeah,i noticed,you look like your about to jump out of your skin Jhon".
J.W. grined in his who gives a fuck manner that was so endearing.
"So whats up for tonight?"
Demon grined in his ill tell you but you, have to blow me first manner that repulsed most people.
(somewhere in pennsylvania)
Uki snuck out past curfew.Katana slung across his back.He had been gathering inteligence on Homeland security positions through out town.He moved stealthily through the woods,and spoted a century,guarding a position on the edge of the woods by Uki's home.He was smoking a cigarette,unaware that certain death awaited him.Uki moved like a flash pulling his sword from its scabard and cutting into the thick meaty portion next to the neck,and above the shoulder,cutting deeply enough to sever his jugular vein.Blood sprayed out with tremendous force,until the heart could no longer maintain the century's bloodpressure.Before the century had even hit the ground Uki's katana was back in its sheath across his back.Inside he found a computer.He ripped the hard drive out and put it in a bag.Hopefully this would reveal some vital information.
(more in a week or if i get bored)

[Demonskates]

(Somewhere in texas)
Lazserus was busy banging some honey he had brought home from the bar.She was beautiful,blond hair,blue eyes and a body any man would drool over.They finished up and colapsed in a sweaty heap in the center of the bed.Laz rolled onto his back and stared at the ceiling,listening to her breath softly.What was her name?He looked at her and saw she was sound asleep.Laz got out of bed and lit a cigarette.he poured a scotch into a glass with icecubes even though he was still buzzed from the bar earlier.He fired up his computer.The sex had been a needed break.He and Libre Dave had been working many extra hours on A.O.There were thousands of new members.Laz was in a bind.The government in all of its infanant wisdom had realized that A.O. was a mecca for information.Valuable information like which roads were still accessable,where to find food,missing person reports.He had one week to shut down the site.He was torn between telling the members of A.O. or to just run the week out,so they could gain the info they needed up to the last minute.He racked his brain to figure out how to keep the site up without being imprisoned or worse.he looked at his watch.An hour past cerfew."looks like your stuck here for the night."he muttered at whats her face."Better be able to cook breakfast." He laughed out loud at that thought.Laz logged onto A.O. for his moderator shift.
(ok im really done for now,had to get that down before i forgot it,more later)

[Smoke]

kick ass demon he heh................ i hope you decide to write more i think other people will tell you to when they catch wind of this.

[loganosborne]

This story is awesome Demonskates.

[Protostar]

Rock on demon! I love it!! You are very creative! Can you write me in as a landowner who houses people in Teepees <kind of like a commune> but with guns and stuff? hehehehe.

[Demonskates]

(One click east of target in iran)
The Apc dropped off grendel and Smoke.For now the artilery had stoped.They had two hours to reach the spot indicated on thier land sat map.The sun was brutal,beating down on them with no mercey.They used global positioning to home in on their position.They moved quickly,not speaking a word.it took an hour and a half for them to reach the spot indicated on the map,and checked once more with their gps unit to be sure they had indeed ended up in the right place.They were about 500 yards from the insurgent compound.A series of sandbag and concrete bunkers dotting the land scape.They carfully noted the set up of the compound on the map.Smoke radioed back on a secure channel to headquarters for permision to engage.Permission was granted.They set up,Grendel un covering his rifle and smoke set up his binoculars on a tripod.Grendel carefully laid down a burlap sheet where the muzzle of his rifle would be,to prevent dust from rising and giving away their position when he fired shots.Grendel pulled a black plastic case from his pack which contained the specially modified sniper rounds,and placed it next to his hide.He laid down into position.Smoke scanned the compound for either of their targets.Grendel sighted a random insurgent to get a distance reading.530 yards.Peice of cake.
they waited for a couple hours watching the insurgents setting up heavy machine guns in diffrent positions.The insurgents were oblivious,apparently when the artilery had stoped the silence had lulled them into a false sense of security.He saw a few rpg's leaning against some sandbags,and noticed some moarter tubes.He didnt like to see moarter tubes one bit.Then smoke tugged on his sleeve.Grendel spoted them imediatley.It was there targets.standing talking,one partialy blocking the other."Fucking beautiful!" thought Grendel.He sighted them up aiming for the neck of the first one.If he did it right,that shot would decapitate them both.Smoke called for artilery.Spook to 23 long arm,23 long arm,send H.E. rounds,at five three oh past our mark,thats five three oh past our mark,copy?"
the radio cracked and replied,"Roger,spook,High explosive rounds at five three oh past your mark"As soon as grendel hears the artilery fire from behind him he will take the shot,the artilery masking the report of his rifle.text book perfect."the radio cracled once more,23 long arm,to spook be advised salvo in five,now."On now,Grendel counted backwards,5,4,3,2, on one he fired the rifle completely masked by the sound of the atilery batery firing incoming H.E.rounds from behind them.Smoke watched as Grendels bullet ripped off the two Taliban leaders heads,spraying blood all over the sand.The sound of incoming atilery had distracted the other insurgents enough that they never noticed their headless leaders bodys lying on the ground twitching and convulsing.They were to busy ducking for cover.
The first salvo screamed over smoke and grendel into the camp.KA-WHUMP!!!BOOOOOM!!!!!!The ground shook like a freight train was passing through.the fire balls of six H.E. rounds exploding simultaneously burst up into the air for hundreds of feet.Orange and black and quite glorious yet horrifying to watch."23 long arm,to spook,redirect?Over." "Smoke replied that they had been on the money and they didnt need to readjust.
"spook to 23 long arm, three salvos same vector,five three oh past my mark,call for extract,repeat,require extract in LZ one mile west from our mark."
"Roger spook,three salvos,same vector at five three oh past your mark in five,now.Extract at half click west from your mark,good day gentle men."
Grendel had already packed his gear and helped Smoke break down his spotter gear,and then proceded to run as fast as they could.BOOM BOOM BOOM from the second salvo from long arm could be heard in the distance.Momentarily the scream of the H.E. rounds passed over Grendel and smoke ending in another thunderous roar back in the compound.Sucks to be them thought grendel.The could hear a chopper in the distance.A beautiful sound.they reached the LZ extraction point and poped red smoke when they gained visual of the copter.Grendel and smoke slid down thier goggles from their helmets to protect their eyes from the sand being stired up by the copter.The door gunner scanning the horizon with a .223 drum fed machine gun.They boarded the copter and lifted of the ground.Grendel lit a cigarette oce they were up and headed back to base.A hard earned reward.Grendel and smoke grined at one another.They didnt need to say it.They had just kicked some fucking ass!

[Demonskates]

Rock on demon! I love it!! You are very creative! Can you write me in as a landowner who houses people in Teepees <kind of like a commune> but with guns and stuff? hehehehe.
You got it protostar.That actually will fit in nicely later in the story.

[Smoke]

fuckin A demon this shit is bomb!...........

[Demonskates]

(Massachussetts)
Demonskates awoke in the bunker.He had dozed off for a couple of hours.J.W.Must have split.When demon looked in the mirror he saw a silly mustache that J.W. had drawn with a permanant marker."MOther fucker!"Demonskates triped over his empty burbon bottle and landed on his ass.Demon muttered obscenitys reserved for just such occasions.He looked at his watch and realized he was late.He layed out a line of meth and snorted it,dry heaving when it hit his system.J.W.wasnt kiding,it was premo shit.This will keep the chemtrail sedatives from dragging me down,for the next month thought demon.He had to meet up with the resistance team,tonight,they were gonna hit the base.Hit and run,guerilla combat.They could never take on all of them,but found that taking a few of them out every now and then was the best way to do things.It drove homland security batty,and demon loved it.He threw on his black fatigues and painted his face with black camo stick,covering the rediculous mustache jhonny had drew on him while he was out.
Demon crept out of the hole trying to make as little noise as possible.he recovered the entrance to the bunker and creeped into the woods.Tonight was gonna be fun.
The homeland security troops have been employing unmanned drones at night,fitted with night vision,and infra red.If anyone is spotted by one of those a five pound rocket will be fired at them.scarey to say the least.
To confuse the infra red,demon had been using flare guns,it worked great,but you still had to be careful.
(Pennsylvania)
Uki had finished putting the hard drive into a computer chasis and booted it up,back at his house.He went through the file folders and stopped at one called Boston tea party.Clearly a code name for some operation.His jaw hit the floor when he saw the contents of that file.Contained within,was the details outlining a plan to Take place in a couple of months,in which an ICBM will be launched from the atoll islands in Alaska, at Boston massachussetts."the red sox suck but this is rediculous." thought Uki.Reading further,he saw it was all an elaborate plan to give the United States a reason to attack Russia.The attack would be blamed on the russians.
It made the 9/11 conspiracy theories not so far fetched.In fact it was probably true.
Uki slumped back in his chair in disbeleif."who the fuck is running this show."Uki asked out loud.
He slammed his fist into the monitor of the computer,imploding it.Blood dripping from a cut on his hand.He watched with disinterest as the blood drops fell to the floor one by one.
(texas)
The last week of A.O.s existance came, and when it went offline,No one could beleive it.Laz was heart broken as well as all the die hard A.O. users.
Lazserus's girl was over.it turns out her name was Sarah.She was trying to cheer him up when the front door to Laz's house was kicked in by homeland security thugs.They demanded the A.O. server.
"its not here". said laz,lying through his teeth.One of them put an M-16 to Saras head and proceeded to blow her brains out across the wall.Laz screamed and lunged at the closest H.S. thug and was promptly knocked silly with the butt of a rifle.His vision going fuzzy then to black.two thugs dragged Laz to a van outside and threw his limp body in the vehicle while the other two located the server.
In the empty house,what had been Saras brains ran down the wall,sliding to the floor.
(Local massachussetts news paper)
RESISTANCE HITS HOMELAND SECURITY BASE KILLING FOURTEEN
last night the resistance has hit the local homeland security base killing fourteen soldiers.The local H.S. commander had no comment.They have begun rounding up possible suspects for interigation.All citezens are on lock down in their own homes until further notice.Violators will be shot on sight.
Demonskates laughed at the headline knowing full well he was accountable for at least five of those fuckers.Mabey even six.He was sitting in his house when it happened.A bright flash came through the windows,getting brighter and brighter,Demon sheilded his eyes with his fore arm.Then he heard a deafening roar.Like a thousand thunderclaps times a thousand thunder claps.The whole house shook on its foundation.He ran out side to see what the hell it had been.he stood in awe.In the distance a mushroom cloud grew and expanded into they sky.Everyone that was left on his street stood and watched in horror as the explosion seemed to continue growing,bigger and bigger.Demon knew what it was but couldnt beleive what he was seeing.The electricity went out,and never came back on.All of massachssetts electrical infra structure was fried by the EMP wave from the explosion.The chaos that followed was unprecidented.Demon slumped to the ground crying.He knew that getting out of the fallout would be next to impossible.The Mushroom cloud he figured was roughly where Boston is,about twenty miles away.Or at very least in that direction.It would take days to walk a safe distance,by then demon figured hed already be glowing with radioactivity.
The rest of the world saw it on the news.Boston had been vaporized.Nothing was left.The shock wave had leveled things for five miles outside the city limits.Electricity was down and the first radioactive sickness patients began going in droves to the hospitals.Hoards of people wandering in all states of dress,or lack there of,burned horribly,sick and dying.Teeth falling out,eyes burned til they burst from the heat.A cocophony of human misery.The Info had spread so fast world wide that it became the single most covered story in History.
The world watched it on t.v. in absolute horror.Iran made it a national holiday.
The troops over seas tried deperately to get in contact with loved ones who lived,or had lived in massachssetts.

[Smoke]

keep em comin demon!....................

[Demonskates]

The news had hit Uki hard.He had tried to warn people before A.O. had gone offline for good.People just laughed.They had posted stuff putting him down and calling him names.He had tried to send a copy to Lazserus,but it never reached him.The server was shut off a couple of seconds before the info could reach Laz.In fact after the server went down no one had heard from Laz.Even Libre Dave.He had knocked on Laz's door but there was no answer.Nothing.
News of the resistance uprisings was getting more and more coverage.The govt. was having a hard time controling people even despite the 24/7 chemtrailing of major citys.
Uki had worked alone up til this point but decided to try and contact any resistance group he could,and join.
That night,the United states declared war on Russia.Russia denied any involvment to no avail.
Six hours later,Moscow was hit by an ICBM from the missle site on the Atoll Islands in Alaska.
At this point the whole world went crazy with panic.
Russia was desperatly trying to keep diplomatic discussions open with the u.s. and decided to hold off on a retaliation.At least they were thinking about the rest of the world.The U.S. sure wasnt.
U.S. and Canadian troops started massing up in alaska,for a land invasion.Shit was tense.One wrong move and the world as we knew it would be over.
Masses were held at religois centers globally,praying for peace and looking for comfort,from a silent,indifferent God.
Then the global economy took a plunge it wouldnt recover from.Peoples life savings were worthless over night.Riots,murder,rape,anarchy,canibalisim,all shot through the roof.There were lots of rumors of people walking into homes and killing people so they could eat.Eat people.Just to survive.
Alot of states werent even providing food rations anymore,leaving millions to starve.
Thats when news of the Govt. death camps started to surface.They were gassing people just like the Nazis had in WWII.Only these camps were ten time bigger.They were capable of killing 100,000 people a day.the bodys were transported to old quarrys and dumped in,left to rott.Incineration was a large waste of money and resources.England has them as well.Canada come to find out does also.
The bodys crucified on telepone polls streched entire lengths of highway.One coast to the other.The Govt. wasnt saying shit either.The poulation was in the dark as to what was happening.Your existance depended very much on what you heard from others through word of mouth.It seemed for all intents and purposes that Armageddon had arrived.For good.

[Demonskates]

(somewhere in the U.S.)
Lazserus awoke in a box car,the horrible ride revealing that it was a train box car.
His eyes adjusted and he saw he was not alone.In fact there were give or take 100 people crammed in there with him.all of whom had been rounded up by Homeland security troops.This was the fabled River Styx rail sytem that brings people to one of a hundred death camps along the rail line.No one spoke.The rumors were true,and the gravity of it weighed down on everyone in the box car.there was no hope.they would be hearded like cattle to their deaths.Laz could see through a space between pannels outside to the passing countryside.It didnt look like texas.
The car stank like pheces and urine,as there was nowhere else to go.one corner had been designated as the toilet.
Lazserus's head ached.
They felt the box car slow down,people began to stand up and peer through the openings in the pannel to get a look.The compound was amazingly huge.it defied logic.They could see barbed wire double fences.The main gate had the letters LVX at its apex within a triangle.Laz had seen those letters before and tried to recall what they meant.He could hear dogs,and homeland security guards barking orders.
the box car lurched to a stop.The door suddenly slid open.They were told to get out,to hurry the fuck up and to be silent,they needed to follow directions or they would be shot right there.two guards began grabing people out of the box car to hurry the process along.Laz hoped out onto the concrete platform.He saw thousands and thousands of people,and many barracks type buildings.Tall guard towers with spot lights and armed guards over looking everything.They were told to line up,Females on one side,males on the other.Laz was pushed into a spot by a large guard.It was as if he had stepped back through time into Auschwitz.
A man in an officers cap with a skull within a triangle emblem on it,wearing a black leather trench coat and holding a riding crop with gloved hands approached.His eyes appeared dead.Almost as if he was seeing right through them.expresionless.
he lifted an old mans chin with the riding crop and pointed to the left after a moments inspection."oh christ!" Laz thought,"they are doing selections!"
It appears the Nazi concentration camps were what this place had been modeled after.down to a sceince.Laz was pushed into a line on the right.It seemed only frail old men and young boys were being told to stand to the left.Like wise,the old women and young girls were seperated from the healthy women.
when every last person had been put in the appropriate position,those left behind,healthy men and women, watched as the elderly and children,and pregnant women were whiped and forced to climb aboard Large deisle trucks with canvas covers.Those people in the trucks would be brought directly to the gas chambers.
Laz watched in horror as a guard picked up a toddeler and physicaly threw him into the truck.Everyone was in a daze.No one tried to stop it.It was as if hope had never existed.Laz watched as the trucks made their way to some large buildings down the road from where they were.No doubt the gas chambers.
The guards informed those that were left that they would be processed,numbered,deloused,issued uniforms,and be given their work assignments.
Noncompliance meant death.
Lazserus's name,birthdate,eyecolor,hair color,skin color,ect.were all recorded.
He was then pushed into a line to receive his identification number.
The man grabbed his arm and tattooed a bar code number on his arm.These bar codes then could be scanned with a device telling all their information.
he was pushed into another line and his head was shaved with shears.
They were forced to strip,leaving their cloths in a pile and hearded into a room that looked like showers,except a fine white powder shot out instead of water.
After being deloused,he was handed his uniform.They were nothing more than thin orange pajamas,top and bottom,no shoes.He was issued a metal cup,and a metal plate.It was al over in a matter of moments,done with ruthless efficiency.
Laz was assigned to a work detail.He would be forced to work building more of these godless places.He was assigned a barracks.They had to be in the barracks by no later than 5p.m. unless they are on a work detail.Non compliance meant death.
The camp was divided in two by double barbed wire fences,that were electrified with high voltage.One side for the women,the other for men.There would be no work today for the new arrivals,in order for them to become familiar with the layout of the camp.They would be fed once aday.If they lost thier plate or cup,they would starve.Lazserus knew once he had been worked almost to death he would be gassed.Laz sat against a wall pulling his knees in twards himself,lowered his head and cried.
Then it hit him like a ton of bricks.The letters LVX,the triangles,and skull and triangle logos.These were all Illuminati symbols!They wanted to reduce the world poulation by four billion people!
Thats exactly what they were doing too.Lazserus realized that it all made sense.
The wars,the camps,the police state America had become,the chemtrailing,our govt. no all the worlds govt.'s were being run by the Illuminati.Laz wished he had listened more to Matt Marriot's posts when A.O. was still around.
If they succeed,they will rule the world.All of this was too much for poor Lazserus to handle all at once and he collapsed,prone on the ground.
(texas)
Libre Dave Kicked in the door to Lazserus's home.the stench that hit Dave in the face almost knocked him over.He saw legs throught the door way and prayed they werent Lazserus's.Dave entered the house and was releived to see the corpse had breasts.He walked past the gore that was Sarah and turned the house upside down looking for Laz.Nothing.He knew somthing obviously had gone very bad,the corpse stench renforcing that point.But where was he?Had Laz done this to this poor girl?

[Demonskates]

Demonskates had some mre rations as he sat in the woods.Hed been hiking the powerline trails trying to escape the fallout from boston.his M-16 by his side.
Mre's or meals ready to eat were a huge improvement over the c rations of WWII,but they still were not a big juicy steak.
No this was some kind of chow mein deal.Also in the heavy plastic bag,that contains all these little pouches was a bag of fruit cocktail,coffee, 2 sugars,a fake creamer,Lemon lime drink mix,a pouch with hard crackers 4 inches by four inches,jelly,peanut butter , a lemon poppy cake for desert.salt ,pepper and a wet nap.Enough to keep you going for a day or two if need be.
He mixed the lemon lime powder into some water from his canteen into a cup and drank some of it.Demon saw blood on the edge of the cup.He knew what it was but tried not to think about it.He hadnt managed to get away fast enough to avoid the fallout.He first noticed it when he got the metal like taste in his mouth,like sucking on a fistfull of pennys.Later when he had been eating a granola bar,he noticed blood on it.He new right then he was fucked.Sure he could just lay there and wait for death,but Demon had to beleive that he could be helped somehow.It was all he had to keep him going.well, aside from the heap of crystal meth jhonny had gave him.He saved the rest of the mre ration for later and began hiking again.
Demon loved his weed.He had an Oz. of some purple haze that hed been saving for a special occasion.Demon figured there would never be a special occasion again ever and packed his glass pipe he had bought as a teen at a GratefulDead show.
He knew it would help him keep the food down.Demon had been nauseous for a couple of days now.He breathed in deeply from the pipe,the familiar taste of kind bud on his pallet.He wondered what the street value of atomic haze would be and laughed to himself.Nuclear mutant weed,far out.He began singing out of boredom.An old Deadhead favorite.friend of the devil.
"said im runnin but im takin my time,a friend of the devil is a freind of mine,I get home before day light,i might just get some sleep,toooniggghhhttt!!!!"
Jerry Garcia trurned in his grave at this awful rendition.
Demon hiked until night fall and fianlly collapsed in a thicket,out of sight off to the side of the powerline trail.he was exhausted.He quickly fell asleep.
(somewhere in the U.S.)
Laz was awakened by the barrel of a gun in his ribs.someone had put him in his bunk inside the barracks."Time for work,rodent." The guard leveling the barrel in laz's face.Laz got to his bare feet and filed into line with the others.it would be a two hour ride by train boxcar to the site of yet another deathcamp under construction along the River Styx rail system.Once out side they saw a new shipment of people had arrived,they would have to wait for the box cars to be unloaded,then they would file into the emty cars and begin their ride to the new compound.He watched as the same awful procession he had gone through yesterday was played out again today with the new arrivals.He watched in awe at the efficeint system.again the deisle trucks were loaded with human cargo,to be brought to the gas chambers.Laz prayed for them.The selections took about a half hour.Laz and the people he was with climbed into the box car.Laz watched as a man slipped and fell back to the ground,his arm breaking with the impact.A guard walked up and shot him in the face blowing his head all over that platform.Laz turned his head away from the gore.A man was sent for at the other side of camp and was forced to scrub the mess with a pail of water and a brush.The body had been thrown on a cart used for moving corpses about the camp for disposal.Laz heard the door slide shut and lock from the outside.
A few moments later the train lurched forward and they began to move.Laz prayed he would wake up from this nightmare.the ride was uneventful.people chatted quietly to pass the time.2 hours went by slowly in the cramped car.The train slowed down and finaly stopped.The door unlocked and slid open to the sunlight,sheilding their eyes from the brightness they were told to exit quickly and form two single file lines.They were marched into the new camp which had parimiter fences already up and operational.The same symbol over the main gate.Laz was informed that his box car group would be working concrete forms for foundations of barracks.Back breaking work.Laz had put his metal plate down his pants for safe keeping and his cup hung from a string on his pants,knowing that if he lost them,it would mean certain starvation.They worked a good 8 hours and then were given a break to eat.It was a kind of thin soup with horse meat in it.rotten horse meat.Laz had to get passed the fact that there were maggots in the meat and floating in the soup.He ate it.He knew if he threw up it could mean a reduction in rations or even on a whim,death.Laz was forced with the others to work another 8 hours,and when finnished,turned in thier primative tools in a reboarded the box cars for the return tip.He found that his camp was refered to by the guards as Gehena.Laz felt that described his camp perfectly.Gehena was what Jesus had used as a referance to decribe hell.
(more later)

[Skynet12]

lol- this is a classic idea! This should be sold, demon- its brilliant!
(P.s- lovin the bit with logan in!)

[Smoke]

im likin the new age illuminati/nazi death camps heh creative :) and its still pretty fuckin good.

[Demonskates]

(Pennsylvania)
By now the entire internet was offline.People had to rely on word of mouth information,as the govt. controled media was unreliable.
Uki had heard through the grape vine about the round ups and death camps being constucted somewhere out west.The shit had really hit the fan.Uki had no idea if his girl or kids were o.k. or not,so he tried not to think about it.He had no way of finding them or contacting them anyway.Phone lines were down,so the masses couldnt communicate.
Uki had also heard that roundups were starting to take place in pennsylvania.
He was put in contact with a resistance leader whose unit was stationed in the mountains.they had been doing hit and run ambushes of homeland security convoys and such.There had been alot of activity at the military base near Uki's home as of late,confirming that somthing was going on.somthing big.Large trains hauling a half mile long line of box cars was seen at the rail yard.This must be the cars they are using to transport folks to the death camps.
The resistance had attacked a convoy and had gotten ahold of a box of C-4 plastic explosive,Blasting caps, det cord ,and electric hand switch.The plan was to start blasting the rails on the River styx rail line system.If they couldnt stop them outright,they could at least slow the traffic of people being shipped to those camps.
Uki said he'd help.
They waited for nightfall and snuck down the tracks,Through trial and error they found that about 10 grams of C-4 was enough to cut the rails.Uki and a guy named darrell set up the explosives while the others covered them with automatic weapons.The det cord was good for breaking up the wooden rail ties.
they hooked the blasting caps up to thick speaker cable and crimped the caps on tight with pliers.They inserted the caps into the C-4 and ran the wire back into the tree line and hooked them up to the electric hand switch.Darrell armed the switch and pressed the lever sending the rails and ties up in a violent explosion.They disapeared into the woods before a drone could spot them,or they got into a firefight with rail yard security.
(massachussetts)
Demonskates was awoken early in the morning to the sound of a deer taking a violent shit.It was hard not to laugh at the grunting animal.Demons sense of humor was odd anyway.Demon got to his feet, startling the deer who bounded off trailing pellets behind it.Demon rummaged through his pack and pulled out the MRE ration he hadnt finished the day before,and ate the fruit cocktail and crackers,with peanut butter and jelly spread thick over the crackers.He scooped a little sterno fuel from a container and lit it on a rock so he could heat water for coffee.The warm coffee was heavanly even though it was instant.Demons cloths were damp from the morning dew.Demon wiped down his rifle with a shirt from his pack so it wouldnt rust up on him.If he did things right,hed be out of massachussettss in a couple of days.Hed have to be careful going through new york state not to end up vearing off course.Pennsylvania was after that and he hoped he could get there in a week.He had heard on the transistor radio in his pack that resistance fighters were really raising hell there and he wanted to be appart of that party.He let the sterno burn out and packed his stuff .he threw on his pack and slung his rifle over his sholder.He poured a little pile of meth into his plam and snorked it back,almost loosing his breakfast.he put the pouch back in his pocket and began hiking again.
The sunrise was amazing.In this fucked up world,demon was amazed he could enjoy anything.But this was beautiful.Well until the airforce jets began chemtrailing in the distance,leaving large white clouds of chemical payload in ribbons accross the sky.
leave it to the govt.to fuck up a good thing.
Demon heard running water after hiking a half hour.He walked twards the sound finding a small brook.Demon couldnt beleive that the reflection in the water was him.he studied his face,it looked greyish,with large blisters in spots.the radiation was really doing a number on him.Now when he coughed,bits of blood were coming up.He had red splotches on his hands as well.He decided cleaning up in the brook was prolly a good idea,at least it might help to stop things from becoming infected.
he striped down and got into the cold water.demon had determined that on a scale of one to ten,the shrivel factor of this water was a solid nine.
It was still refreshing and felt good on his sores.He noticed wiping his face dry after,that a few teeth were loose now.Brushing his teeth was painful,but his own breath was offending him so it was o.k.
he dressed and continued on.
Demon turned on the radio and listened about how boston was a complete disaster.the deathtoll had reached over a million,and more were dying every minute.
He was disgusted to hear that the military had cordoned of that part of massachussetts,not allowing releif,medical supplys or food in.They were shooting those who were trying to leave.They didnt want the radioactivity being spread all over the place."well they missed this cat." said demon to himself.He had gotten out just in time.Tommorow he should reach the boarder of new york state.Demon didnt like the prospect of being in Yankees territory,but that rivalry is over now for good,Fenway was ashes now.Along with the red sox.Nobody has heard from the sox since the bomb hit.Demon switched of the radio,he had heard enough.

[Demonskates]

lol- this is a classic idea! This should be sold, demon- its brilliant!
(P.s- lovin the bit with logan in!)
Hahah,thanks.logan will be playing a bigger part in this later.As for selling this,nah,i do it for fun.I would like to do a serious work one day,but this is good practice.
I mainly in this one, want to touch on as many subjects that are discussed here on A.O.as possible.So far ive managed nuclear war,marshal law,chemtrails,terrorisim,history relived ect.not bad,glad u all dig it.

[loganosborne]

This is brilliant Demon. :2thumbs: . Looking forward to the next installment

[Demonskates]

(Arizona)
Protostar woke up and looked about.She had found a cave that was very deep in the side of a mountain,unless you knew where the entrance was you would never notice it.The ceiling was about 50 feet above the ground inside there,leaving plenty of room for teepees.
e0AHer and a group of people trying to avoid the round ups and death squads had been hiding out here for a month now.
The cave had its own natural spring running through it at the back of the cave.
The walls had ancient paintings in beautiful reds and whites,somtimes outlined in black,painted long ago by indians.The cave had become a tribal dwelling once again.
They could stay here indefinatly with their own water source.
They had managed to collect a series of rifles and guns from a ambush site.
they had stumbled upon it.the homeland security convoy had been hit hard by members of the Arizona resistance.Rummaging through the wreckage they had found some weapons that were still intact.
They had been living off of elk and deer.They even had a small garden growing in one part.They found that by angling a large mirror in the right way they could provide the light the plants needed to thrive.the soil was rich with bat guano.Protostar got dressed and exited her teepee.
she greated the others and figured out who would be doing what today.
They all had somthing to do and to offer within their little community.
Here they were free.That alone was worth its weight in gold.( even though gold wasnt worth anything anymore.)
The resistance had tried to enlist them,they knew the land.
but Protostar had declined,along with the others.They were staking thier lives on not being discovered,and so far had been succesfull.
the cave dwelling was striking in its simplicity.Animal furs hung on the walls of the cave.Nothing was wasted from the animal.much like the indians.The hides had made the teepees possible,their bones used for tools for gardening,sewing,ect.
Word of mouth about the cave continually brought more people.
The commune welcomed anyone who was willing to chip in.
Protostar wouldnt have traded it for anything.She enjoyed helping people,and enjoyed the various peoples company.They would sit around the fire at night and sing,and play instruments,while passing the peace pipe or enjoying a bottle of liqor.
The night was always special,they would unwind after a long day of working.Sometimes into the wee hours of the morning.
There were always at least three men guarding the entrance.When homland security troops were spotted,they would douse the fires and be queit till they passed by.It became pretty routine.
Protostar had dodged the draft.That was an automatic death sentance so she could not risk being found.Same with some of the others.
It sucked not being able to leave the cave for weeks on end but when she did,she helped hunt.Somthing she was against before.but now their survival depended on it.
Plus she got out for some fresh air,always welcome.
There was alot of diffrent talents within the commune.Some had been doctors or nurses,which was fantastic to have them there.Others had been farmers,or constuction workers.Some were musicians.
As much as protosatr loved this new life,she still missed parts of the old one.
Mainly her computer.News was hard to come by.It usually reached them from some new weary traveler looking for refuge.They didnt always stay though,some were just passing through,trying to get to other states to try and find family or loved ones.It was always sad to hear the stories.buit if anything,people clung to hope that no harm had befallen thei familys.A couple had come back after learning that thier familys had fallen vitim to the round ups or death squads.
Births were always a celebration.New life.Although some thought it was insane to bring a new life into this mess of a world.The children had to be watched closely,it was too much temptation for them at times to explore outside the cave.
It could mean their discovery.
They had set up a law system,the utmost punishment being bannishment.
They fortunatly havent had to use that punishment.
They had really become one big family and enjoyed one anothers company.
some children had no idea what the world was like before this.This had been the only life they knew.The children were educated by everyone.it was everyones responsibility.They had some books,and a partial encyclopedia that they had salvaged from a burned out house.They learned history,and arithmatic,sceince and biology.English and some spanish.pretty well rounded despite the circumstances.
The kids were like little sponges absorbing information, and being hungry for more.
They loved story time.They would sit around after doing some minor chores and listen to renditions sited by memory of the tales of ulyssis,or Plato.Minotaurs and ancient beasts and dietys.even some scarey tales based loosly on some of stephen kings works.Tales of the mighty missisippi and huck finn.
Sometimes they acted out scenes from t.v. shows that they had once watched,like
star treck ect.The children loved it,and to be honest so did the adults.
They had made some game boards like checkers and chess,anything to occupy the children,too keep them from wandering off and getting into trouble.
protostar would sit and sing,braiding girls hair,while the children listened.
this was their own piece of heavan.
protostar knew that there would come a time to have to defend this place though.
She would fight for this.She would even kill for this if need be.
She had heard of the death camps and was horrified to think that the children and elderly would be gassed.She quickly thought of somthing else.

[Demonskates]

(Across the pond,Pevansey,England)
Logan was in a real bind.He had been drafted by her majestys Royal Army.
The prospect of going to war in Iran did not apeal to logan at all.He could see that England was running Paralell to what America was doing.They obviously had the same agenda.He had heard of the new compound being filled with people in Lancaster.The military had declared Marshal law here as well.He had seen the murder squads running rampant in more and more towns near his.It was only a matter of time before it reached here.The Bobbys were acting more and more like the Gestapo every day.
Rumors of the Nuclear explosion on the east coast of New England had been done by the U.S. govt. was starting to surface and Logan beleived it.Alot of English folks beleived it.
The subway bombings and bus bombings had been blamed on muslim radicals,but he was beginning to doubt that now.
Some documents pretaining to the bombing of Big Ben in London surfaced and indicated Parliment may have been behind it.At very least they did nothing to stop it.It was a bloody hell of a mess indeed.
Like America,a resistance movement was forming.Brits were hungry,scared,and couldnt travel freely anymore.The gas prices were currently 35 pounds for a litre.
Leaving automobiles as a luxury for the wealthy.
The news was becoming more and more alarming,and eventually,Logan stoped watching all together.The BBC was clearly misinforming the public on a number of issues.Christ,tea wasnt even readily available to everyone anymore.Not proper at all.Logan hoped the English higherarchy would be sacked by this new resistance movement,and soon.Citezens were turning up missing on a regular basis.The governments official stance was "tough titty,now shut yer festering gob and be gone with you."
They had really lost it.Bombings were happening all over England.The shit really hit the fan when the English army marched into Ireland and up turned the place.
It was a power play on the govt.s part,figuring they could just force submission through superior forces.All though this was true,the IRA went right back into their bombing campaigns,giving England the right to invade.
All bloody hell had broken loose.
England started sending bombers over Dublin and pounded the city to rubble.
England would just as soon kill the lot of them.Logan needed to get away,but really,where would he go?The whole world had gone mad.
Logan with a British resolve and a stiff upper lip decided that he would not allow himself to be drafted,and deduced that the risistance was for him.He would fight to free England from the delerious bastards who had destroyed the country he loved.
He may only be 18,but he was determined to try.
Now as to going about approaching the resistance he hadnt the foggiest of ideas.
contact with them was vital,and the first step to helping win back England for the British people.Logan was a patriot in every sense.
He'd help to put a stop to those dodgey bastards yet.God save the queen!

[Smoke]

still getting better and better but you may have hard time juggling the characters... are you going to put a story line in for every one or is it going to be like the movie crash some ow every one will become intertwined in some way.... im really likin this so far... quite creative.

woot 100 posts for the second time!

[Demonskates]

(somewhere in Iran)
The celebrating was short lived back at base.The insurgents had mounted a massive counter offensive pushing the Ameicans and canadians back almost to where they had started from.They had dug in and were in the middle of feirce fighting.The insurgents were firing modified kartouch rockets that had lead balls the size of marbles inside,to cause more damage and casualties.
The sound of the small arms alone was deafening.
Grendel was sighting up one insurgent after the other.They were in real danger of being over run.The artilery of the 23rd had been pounded by rockets.The marines couldnt establish radio contact with them.They feared the worst.
In the fray,Grendal spots a insurgent with an rpg sighting up an m-1 abrhams tank.
Grendel held his breath and squeezed off a round blowing the insrgents arm off of his shoulder,dropping the rpg.Smoke was having at it with his M-16/M-203.He had already downed six insurgents.a grenade landed between Grendel and smoke,Grendel picked it up and winged it over the edge of the sanbags back at the enemy.he ducked as it exploded sending dirt and limbs spawling into the air.
The M-1 tank was firing rounds as fast as they could load them.A humvee rolls up with an auto grenade laucher mounted to the turret begins cranking granades at the insurgents sending them scattering.A barage of rockets peppers the line killing a half dozen marines.smoke waits till the insurgents get a couple of yards from him and clicks three times an the remote that sets of the clamores he had placed earlier.The pellets tearing into insurgents soft flesh.The lines were being breached and came down to hand to hand combat at times.smoke never thought he'd have to use his bayonet.He attached it to the end of his rifle.The marines had set up some moarters and began lobing rounds.You could hear them going like mad,BLOOP,BLOOP,BLOOP,in rapid succesion.Grendel felt somthing warm,and stinging on his arm,he had been hit.It didnt seem to Phaze him as he scoped an insurgent and blew his head apart in a spray of red ,grey and pink.The soldier next to him loaded a bandolier of .50 cal. rounds into the feeder tray and slaped the lid down,pulling back the bolt and letting loose with a volly of fire,ripping appart anything in front of it.The air was thick with bullets,you never quite get used to them wizzing passed your head like an angry bee.It was utter chaos.
An A-10 warthog roared over them banking left and coming in for a clear shot at the insurgents.CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK,CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAACK!
The mini gun sounded like one long eletrical crackle when it went off,firing hundreds of depleted uranium shells in a second into the massing insurgents.The soldiers cheered as it ripped the insurgents to pieces.It looped back around for another pass.
CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAACK!
that thing could really lay some lead.It was desinged as a tank buster,But in this instance it was making light work of the insurgents.Smoke waved as the pilot passed by,the pilot saluting as he screamed past.
That had softened them up quite a bit,but it was still a struggle.The Kartouch rockets were making hamburger out of the marines further down the line.An insurgent hops over the sandbags and lunges for Grendel,Smoke forced the bayonet into the insurgents side,and he screamed bloody murder.Smoke pulled out the bayonet after twisting it,making a gapping hole in the insurgents side.He shot him in the face.The screaming stopped.Grendels vision was starting to blur from blood loss.
It didnt stop him from blowing off another three insurgents heads,He could still hit them well enough.
While all this madness was going on,the troops temporarily forgot about what had happened in boston.Alot of them were having trouble finding family and loved ones.
They had no idea what was going on in America with the death camps,ect.
they had no idea that they were being run by a shadow govt. and being pawns,all the while thinking they were fighting for the old America.Rumors were heard here and there but nothing substantial.They were as far away from the truth as they could be.just where the govt. wanted them.
If they had known that the Shadow Govt. they were now fighting for intended to nuke Tehrahn,they would have never stood for it.This war was purley about body counts.The more bodys,the happier they govt. would be.It didnt matter to them who's bodys or which side.It was simple numbers.Population reduction.

[Demonskates]

still getting better and better but you may have hard time juggling the characters... are you going to put a story line in for every one or is it going to be like the movie crash some ow every one will become intertwined in some way.... im really likin this so far... quite creative.

woot 100 posts for the second time!
Nah its not to bad juggling the people,just have to rereadthings alot,lol.

[Demonskates]

(the boarder of New york)
Demon was getting sicker.He had wiped away what he thought was tears.It was blood.He had lost a tooth somewhere back in massachussetts.Demon had to stop.He heard a drone.he readied his flare gun.and rolled under an outcorpping of rock to hide his heat signature from the infrared eye in the sky.These drones were equiped with two five pound rockets.He had one flare left.As the drone passed over head he leveled the flare gun in its general direction,he squeezed the trigger and sent a red flare sizzling through the sky.The drone immediatly locked onto the flare and fired a rocket.Demon aimed for the propeller on the rear of the drone with the M-16 and fired a burst of rounds at it.The bullets chewed apart the propeller sending the drone into a dive.It crashed through the trees and hit the ground with a loud crunch of metal and Plastic.Demon got to his feet and brushed away leaves and dirt from his cloths.He had to get moving.A patrol would be through here shortly to see why the drone disappeared from radar.He began hiking,rifle ready incase he came accross a patrol.He crossed th highway quickly,hearing the droning sound of deisel troop transports in the distance.He picked up the power line trail on the other side,moving as fast as he could to put some distance between him and the approaching vehicles.After a mile he slowed his pace down,He would stop in another hour or so to eat.He poured a slight pile of meth into his palm and snorted it,coughing in a fit,hacking blood onto his shirt."fuck."Demon cursed.
That was the pick me up he needed.Demon was beginning to wonder if he'd even make it to pennsylvania.His body was racked with pain.He was getting awful headaches,and it was getting hard to breath.His vision was fading in and out.
The meth demon figured was the only thing keeping him going.That and fear of death.If he kept this pace,and traveled during the night for a bit as well,he could gain some serious ground.He had nothing else to do.After a couple miles demon slumped down under a tree and dug into his pack and pulled a fresh MRE package out.He slit it open with his knife.Beef Stew.That would work.He placed a glob of sterno fuel on a flat rock he found and lit it.he filled a small pot with water and placed the packet with the beef stew in the water,to warm its contents up,In a few minutes he had a hot meal,he tore open the foil and plastic package and dug in.It wasnt half bad.Then again,he didnt have any other alternatives.
He used the hot water from the pot to make a cup of coffee.He drank it black with two sugars.It was good.Demon learned to appreciate the little things that make life more bearable.he ignore the blood on the edge of his cup.He put away the rest of the mre for later,and put his cup and pot in the bag.Speeking of pot,Demon packed a bowl.an after dinner mint if you will.The smoke soothed away his nausea,he felt better.He was still speeding of the meth,so he decided to press on till midnight,or til he ran out of steam.It turned out to be the later.He lit a cigarette and smoked it half way before coughing fits forced him to pitch it away.He found a spot where he couldnt be seen from the trail,and turned in for the night.AS he was falling asleep he heard the bark of autopmatic weapons firein the distance.For once he was glad he wasnt the one having to raise a ruckus,sounded like somebody was having fun.He was exhausted.He slipped away into sleep.
Demon awoke to a violent kick to the ribs.He recognized the uniforms right away.
They were new york homeland security troopers.When he sat up the barrel of an M-16 was put to his head."slowly",said the trooper,Demon slowly got to his feet,coughing up blood and spitting another tooth that had come free during the night to the ground.The other trooper was inspecting Demons M-16."Hands on your head." ordered the trooper.Demon did as he was directed."hey sarge,this is a massachssettss homland security issue '16."announced the second trooper.
The first trooper drove a knee into Demons stomach,droping demon to his knees winded."Care to explain where you got this weapon shit bag?!"Barked the trooper.
"your mother's ass."Demon retorted,which earned him a rifle butt to the face.
Demon fell over clutching his face."sarge i dont see any reason to even bring him in,we should grease him right here."said the second trooper aiming his rifle at demons temple.
(more later)

[Cartesiantheater]

Wow, Demonskates. It took me a couple days to find this, but I'm glad I caught it early. This is good shit. I've always wanted to see a story the AO community in an Armageddon story.

<hehe... I was just thinking... what if Jake ends up saving the world?! Ha! that would be hilarious.>

Keep it up Demonskates! I can't wait to see where the rest of us fit into this!


"Stay tuned for the next instalment of Armageddonline Online Armageddon. Will Demon be killed? Will Lazarus escape the deathcamp? Will Liberdave find out what happened to his friend? What dangers await Grendel and Smoke as they battle for freedom? Can Protostar maintain safety in the hidden camp? What havoc will Uki wreak on Homeland Security? Find out next time!"

Wow, demonskates. This is too cool!

[Demonskates]

Thanks CartesianTheater.Ive been bored stiff lately,and ive got little else to do.
havent been sleeping well,so i end up doing this.

[Smoke]

i dont sleep much period and whem im bored im usually on here .... hah at the adult learning skool i go to all we do is watch movies soo... this gives me some shit to do... i go to this skool because ive been kicked out of all the rest lol.... yea.....

but it also gives me something good to look forward to reading instead of watching some hippi bitch tour california and hawii in geography in pilot guides lol. As reading about the armagedon a hundred times gets boring.

[Demonskates]

Demon was grinning under the hands covering his face.The rifle butt hurt but he could tell these guys werent the same tough troopers he had fought back home.Demon was lying between the two troopers.He lived for this shit.Demon got to his feet knowing that the second trooper still had his rifle aimed at him.Demon moved to the side and grabbed the rifle barrel in one motion knowing that the trooper would instinctivley pull the trigger.The machine gun shot a triple burst past demon hitting the first trooper,as the trooper slumped forward demon grabed him as a human sheild and pulled the Nine milimeter from the first troopers holster firing two shots into the chest of the trooper whose Rifle demon had grabbed.
demon fell to the ground laughing."fucking idiots!." demon yelled at the corpses.
"Now look at you,your fucking dead!"With this demon laughed until it hurt.
After regaining his composure,he went about searching the bodies for anything useful.He took the belt and holster from trooper numero uno and put it on.demon had always wanted a 9 MM.Demon collected his M-16 and grabbed the extra magazines from the dead troopers.He began hiking again after he had thoroughly taken a leak on the dead soldiers corpses.Demon was a sick bastard that way.
Demon Again laid some meth in his palm.He snorked it back ,gaging.
He felt it coarsing through his veins.A little much this time.he picked up the pace and managed another ten miles before nightfall.Not that much farther to go.
Another day or two and he could hook up with the resistance in pennsylvania.
Demon made sure this time he wouldnt be found in his sleep.He curled up and passed out.dead to the world.
When demon awoke in the morning,his body informed him of just how many miles he had hiked and how very much that it was sick of all this bull shit.he ached badly.
as bad as he looked he wasnt feeling as sick as he had.But he was terribly sore.
Demon gulped water from his canteen.Demon lit a cigarette and smoked most of it this time.He still felt meth in his system.demon was one of the few people in this world who could be cranked up and still sleep if he was tired enough.
Demon got moving.The hike was uneventful,and when he got a couple miles into pennsylvania,he rested.
(too drunk,must sleep)

[Skynet12]

Now THIS is wat i call good readin'!

[Demonskates]

Now THIS is wat i call good readin'!
Thanks skynet12,Im having too many ideas to make it just weekly,lol.

[loganosborne]

I love the section about me. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

(Gehena)
One thing about concentration camps is that it slowly breaks your imune system down.Many people had been in this camp for months before Lazserus had arrived.
sickness spreads through a camp like wild fire.A few inmates had contracted toberculosis.T.B. In a camp with this many people,was for all intents and purposes a death sentance to the weaker folks,and a huge danger to the healthy ones.When Laz wasnt working on work detail,he was forced to take notes for one of the doctors in the death camp.This man made Mengele look like the tooth fairy.
He was a monster.Humans were no more than lab rats to Dr.Guderian.Laz had heard
The horror stories about this man.Laz had never seen a name strike more fear into a man than the name Guderian.There was a second selection proccess that happens at Gehena.Those who are sentanced to be gassed,are already dead in the camp Directorate's eyes.So out of every 100,000 people to be gassed,guderian gets his pick of 100 people,to do with as he pleases.This man wasnt just purely a sadist,He was a twisted visionary.He devised some of the worst,most cruel and utterly evil tortures known to man.It surely wasnt for sceince.Laz thinks it was his job to devise these things so they can be implemented in other camps.Most would rather be gassed then be picked out in the second selection.Laz had had some time to study this man.He was an Enigma to say the least.To anyone who didnt know him,he seemed like a very happy entusiastic,well mannered man.He always had a smile,sometimes a big happy grin.I mean always smiled.It was just weird,like his face had become stuck that way.Always very cheery.He refered to lazserus as "Laz my boy."
When he was doing his work,or torturing a person,he tried to comfort them,always with that big smile,even though he was inflicting the pain on that person to make them scream in the first place.Or he would hold a one sided conversation with the person he is torturing,or chat like he was at tea rather than torturing the living shit out of a human being.It defied logic.Laz had seen a couple of things he would never forget while taking notes for Guderian,who would tell laz what to jot on the clip board.Lots of times he would talk to the note takers while he was doing this,as if he wasnt even doing anything,like he was detached from what he was doing.
It appears that Guderian took a likeing to laz.his rations were incresed,and eventually,Dr.Guderian wrote a Form out dimissing Lazserus from having to work on the work details.Laz had the odd feeling that Guderian thought Laz enjoyed or admired his work.what Guderian didnt seem to get was Laz was horrified by it,but it was his only choice.if he refused he'd be gassed like the others.
Laz walked next to Guderian tward the medical block.It was a large brick building,with green trim around the windows which had bars placed in them.
The floors were highly polished,with each step down the hall the footsteps echoed.
They entered a room at the far end which had a man straped to a marble slab in the center,with chanels carved around the edge of the slab emptying into a drain.
Dr.Guderian motioned to Laz to hand him the clip board.Guderian adjusted his bifocals on his face and glanced at the record for this inmate."Good day Mr.sweeny,I am Dr.guderian,How are you feeling this morning?"He asked as if he was genuinely interested.The man just looked at him with a Panicked look on his face.Guderian looked back to the chart studying it"Yes,yes......I see MMhmm,Good."He mumbled and passed the clip board to Laz."Laz my boy,would you kindly jot down that Mr.Sweeny appears to be unresponsive,And looks slightly nervous."Laz noted this on the form.guderian walked up to the strapped man and checked his pupils with a pen liget,lifting the mans eye lids with his thumb,for a clear look."yes,uh huh,mmmmm."Laz my boy kindly jot down that Mr.sweenys pupils reacted to light stimulus."Laz did as he was asked.
"well now mr. sweeny,we are going to do a little somthing here,and im sure you will do just fine,Just relax,this shouldnt hurt.....Much.Mr.sweeny begged Guderian who just continued smiling and pulled on latex examination gloves.He walked over to a counter a picked up a peice of surgical tubing that was about an inch wide.Next to the slab mr sweeny was on, was a surgical tray on a stand with a suiture kit and one of those curved needles for doing stitches.he set the tubing on the tray.he then returned to the counter a picked up a glass jar.within the glass jar was a Rat.This is when Mr. sweeny began sceaming at the top of his lungs."there, there, mr .sweeny,no need to come all apart on me,we are just going to do a little stitching here,your a big boy,now please. calm down."These reasuring words rarely stopped the victim from screaming his guts out.Guderian forced the rat into the mans mouth,and inserted the tube into the mans esophagus.Now it was more of a strangled wistling kind of a scream between quick breaths from the tube.Guderian put a belt around his head and tightened the belt under tha mans jaw forcing his mouth closed,the tail of the rat protruding from his lips.Dr,guderian tucked in the rats tail with his index finger.The mans eyes were wide,gasping breaths coming from the tube.Guderian began stitching the mans mouth closed starting at the corner of Mr.sweenys mouth.In a matter of moments the mans mouth was stitched shut.He patted mr sweeny on the arm,and had Laz pass him the clip board.He jotted his own personal notes down and called for a nurse with a strecher.
"Youve done very well today Mr.Sweeny,one of the best patients i have had the pleasure of meeting in a while now."He cocked his head in an odd manner,with his odd unsettling grin as if to reinforce what he had just said.A strangled scream came from the tube.Lazserus couldnt beleive what he had just seen.He doubted he would ever get the awful sound of mr sweeny's screaming,gasping breaths coming from that tube out of his head.
The nurse rolled a gurney in and unstraped sweeny,who was then strapped to the gurney.He was swinging his head violently now,gurggling screams comming from the tube.No doubt, the rat had began to eat his tounge.The nurse rolled away Mr. Sweeny and that was that."well Laz my boy,"said The crazy doctor,putting his arm around Laz's shoulders,"It always makes me smile when i have an oppertunity to help someone."Laz shuddered.This Man was not only sick but delusional.
"walk with me my boy,i should like a coffee now and you shall join me."
Laz had no choice and went with him to his office.
His office was elegant.Beautiful rugs,and expensive draperies.A Great oak table,and a Victorian Desk.There were pictures,of deformed faces hangging in elegant frames on his wall.
"ah yes,those are photographs of some of my patients before this wonderful facility was built.Some of my finest work,I was a plastic surgen before this.Such wonderful work,and to think my Practice liscence had been pulled."
He walked to the table which had cups and saucers of fine porcelin on them,with a big solid silver Coffee decanter.He filled A Cup For Laz."Cream?Sugar?"Asked guderian.
"AH,yes,two sugars please."said Laz,a little uneasy.
"Sit,sit down lazserus,make your self comfortable."
Lazserus sat down in a leather bound chair,and doctor guderian placed a saucer with laz's cup of coffee on it,and a silver tea spoon on the side.
Guderian fixed himself a cup and sat across from Laz.
Dr.guderian sat and siped his coffee.Laz did as wel but was very uneasy in this odd silence.
Guderian sat,sipping coffee,while Blankly staring at the pictures on the wall.
Right about now,lazserus would have rather been anywhere on earth than in this room with this whack job.Laz looked about the room and saw volumes of medical books,He shuddered seeing a large volume on gynocology.
After a very long awkward silence,Guderian set down his coffee on the saucer and folded his hands on the table.
"These are sad times laz my boy are they not?All this death."he paused and then continued,
"We can only save but a mere fraction of these poor sods.Most will meat their end in the Gassing chamber.But the ones luky enough to be picked by me,have a chance,I can help them."
"That is why i need you,my freind,the notes you take alow me to be more efficient in treating my patients,so you are a valuble commodity to this medical block."
"you need'nt ever take an order from anyone on this compound,you only need to serve me and my needs lazserus my boy."he cuckled in a Jeffrey Dalmer kind of way.
"I am taking you out of general populatin lazserus,you shall be housed within the medical block.Your food,shall be the food that we doctors and gaurds and directorate's eat."
"you now,are only answerable only to me."
"Is the coffee good son?"he asked looking at lazserus.
"Oh yes ,its fine doctor,Thank you."
"good finish it up,we shall get you somthing to eat.They havent fed you well enough."Laz finnished his coffee and he and the Doctor went to the medical block mess hall.This will be Laz's first square meal in a very long time.

[Skynet12]

I hope your gonna paste this into a single document and print out or something. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

I may whenever its done,But it wont be any time soon.I wanted to do this in weekly instalments,but once i started writing it,the ideas just kept comming,so i have to put it down or ill forget,lol.Some times ill write more than others.There will be a bit more today.

[Demonskates]

(texas)
Libre Dave was busy burning Armageddon online documents with the names and addresses of members.Reams of print out paper.he had been tiped off the homeland security was rounding up people in his neighbor hood.
If they got ahold of this information,those people would be in even greater danger than before.The fire raged in his small cast iron wood stove.When the internet went down,Dave had destroyed his hard drive for good measure.Now it was just a matter of getting rid of the paper trail.He wished he had never printed any of this.
This was taking longer than he wanted.he sweated furiously,shoveling in thick reams of paper,over and over as more room became available in the stove.Dave heard a couple of trucks stop out side.He nervously peered through the blinds to see a buch of homeland security troopers hop out from the back of a canvas covered duece and a half."Fuck!"He ran back to the stove stuffing as much of the paper as could into the flames.
It was too late.The front door burst open,and Dave spun around to see four troopers step through the door which had been broken in from the frame.
Two of them grabbed him.The others picking up the remaining Printouts.
"been busy dave?"Asked the apperent leader of this group of thugs.
Dave just looked at him."You know,this isnt going to fare well for you,You were told to hand this info in.When we didnt hear from you,well we had to come and see for our selves."
he grined at dave and handed the printouts to another trooper.
"We'll make sure to torture each and every person on this list,"he said patting Dave on the cheek."Because of you."he finished."Get him outta here."
They dragged Libre Dave and threw him into the truck,along with others from his neighbor hood.
They were brought directly to the rail sation.
The guards whipping and beating people into the box cars.Libre Dave was forced into a box car and when his car was full the door slammed shut and was locked from the outside.
(Pennsylvania)
Uki,darrel and the others in the resistance were hiking the woods,looking to ambush any troopers that my be out there looking for those people who have fled to the sanctuary of the woods.
They had stopped for breakfast and chatted among themselves.
Uki was famished,he wolfed down some bread and some cheese that he had been given,and gulped down water from a canteen.The would hike to the boarder and return later in the day if nothing came up.
After they all ate and had a smoke for those who enjoyed that vice,they geared up and started hiking.
darrel had tried to convince Uki to carry a gun to no avail.Uki hated guns.
Darrel took point and they moved out.they had hiked for a couple miles and seen nothing.thats how these patrols went.Long bouts of boredom,punctuated by a few moments of sheer terror,fighting with troopers.
Darrel carefully steped forward and then disapeared into the brush with a startled cry.The team found him with a strange man,obviously not a trooper,but with a knife to darrels throat none the less.The resistance members all aimed at the person holding the knife."who the fuck are you guys?"asked the stranger,looking from one resistance figter to the next.Uki stepped forward and said that they were pennsylvainia resistance fighters.The stranger lowered the knife from darrels neck and put it in his sheath.
"Ive been Looking for you guys,My name is Demonskates."
"kinda freeked me out when this guy stepped on me,i was sleeping."
Uki ran his hand through his hair,taking in this odd fellow.
"demonskates?Did you ever post on armageddon online?"asked Uki.
"Hell yeah,thats me."
"Holy shit!Im UKI!" Demon grinned and reached out his hand to shke with uki.
"NO shit,wow man,wasnt expecting that,Great to finally meat you uki,hey did you ever settle things with equalizer?"
"Uki laughed shaking his head."No,That guy sucks."
Demon laughed.
"what the hell are you doing in pennsylvania demon?"
"I was fighting for the Mass.resistance back home,when that shit with Boston went down.I split to avoid the fallout,but i think im infected anyway.Boston was 20 miles from where i lived.Ive been sick,and losing teeth,bleeding from places i didnt think blood could come from,figured i could help here,If this shit dosent kill me first."
"Wow Demon,you do look like shit,sorry to hear about Boston man.I tried to warn people,i found information on a hard drive at a H.S. post about their plan to do it."
"what?Who the Russians?"
"No,no it was Homeland security,that missle came from the Atoll islands In Alaska,They did it so they could have a pretext to go to war with Russia."
"Oh My fucking god,are you serious?"
"yeah,i tried to get the info to Lazserus,but the server went down before i could get it to him."
"hey how is Lazserus?" asked demon.
"no ones sure,nobody has heard from him since the server went down."
(More in a bit)

[Demonskates]

(forward command,Homeland security breifing)
The information taken from libre Dave turned out to be very useful.
The home land security breifing consisted of a folder being issued to all officers,who were to breif their units on the names and addresses in the files.
These people were to be rounded up and shiped to any of the 100 death camps in the west.
Currently,Inteligence was looking through the data bases to see if any of those people had been already apprehended and shiped to a camp.
No need to search for people they already had.It turned up 9 names.
Lazserus.who was at Gehena death camp.
Libre Dave,who was en route to Gehena.
Cartesian Theatere,who was intered at Bathomy death camp.
Skynet13 who was intered at Sanguinarius death camp
Marajadex,who was intered at the womans camp at Natas.
Raptorwitness who was intered at Baal Death camp.
Svetlana,who was intered at the womans camp called Legion
Defiant noquasi,who was intered at the bi-gender camp called Azul
and Krakatoa who was intered at the womans camp called Meggido.
These people were already part of the system,so their names were crossed of the search list.
The others who hadnt been caught,were considered to be resitance fighters,reguardless of weather they were or not.They were a threat,They had information that most of the population did not,and they were spreading it all over the country.Information that was helpful to the resistance,and harmful to homeland security.
(pennsylvania)
Uki and Demonskates talked for hours,about all sorts of things.they decided to set up camp.
Uki,more serious now handed demon a sheet of paper.
"whats this?"Demon asked looking at the page.
"that is a list of 87 concentration camps,out of 100 that are known to exsist.
The resistance wants to locate them all,and gather inteligence,were hoping that intervention could free them."
Demon looked at the names.

Concentration camp index.
Abaddon,apollyon,abigor,adremelech,agares,alocer,a mduscius,andras,asmoday,asmodeus,astaroth,aym,aype ros,azazel,bael,balam,beelzebub,belial,berphegor,b erith,biffrons,botis,buer,cayem,charon,cresil,croc ell,deumos,eurynome,focalor,furfur,gaap,geryon,hau res,ipos,jezebeth,kasdeya,leonard,lucifer,malphas, mammon,mastema,melchom,mephistopheles,merihim,molo ch,mullin,murmur,naberius,nergal,nicor,nybbas,nysr ogh,
oriax,ornias,ose,paymon,philatanus,prosperpine,pru flas,pyro,raum,rimmon,ronove,
ronwe,samael,semiazas,shalbriri,sonneillon,stolas, succorbenoth,thamuz,ukobach,
uphir,uvall,vaalafar,verdalet,verin,vetis,xaphan,z agan,zepar.

"notice anything about those names demonskates?"
"Ah,yeah,they are all demons names."
"yeah,and those are only the ones we've heard of."
"Jesus,what are they satanic or somthing?"
"it sure as hell looks like it,either that or sombody was really into demonology.You may want to change your name demonskates."
"Ah no,my name was a former song we did in the band,im kind of attached to it now."
"im just kidding man,but that shit is freeky,there are reportedly 22 other camps,but we've never heard them mentioned by a name,so we arent too sure if they even exist.All of these names were intercepted by our intelligence teams from communications by homeland security."
"demon packed a bowl and lit it."
He passed it to Uki who declined.
"im not into that shit man."
"suit yourself."Demon finnished the bowl and layed back looking at the night sky.
The stars were beautiful and bright out here away from the city.
Demon thought of all those camps.all those people being murdered.He wouldnt trade his freedom within the resistance for anything.Not without a very violent bloody fight.Demon laughed to himself thinking about how he had been a hippie once,and the contrast between what he had become now.A well trained,seasoned killer.He pulled a flask from his pack and sipped the warm burbon.Even warm,it was still the nectar of the gods.
"jesus demon,your a walking friggin pharmacy."said Uki.demon grinned.
"you should see my sachel of meth."
Uki rolled his eyes and wondered why demon was still alive and breathing.
(more later)

[Demonskates]

Jeez,i just read this from start to finish.it took me an hour and 15 minutes.
Where the hell am i getting all this from :dunno: ????

[Smoke]

dunno but i got it saved on my desktop for the most par in a folder for a rainy day, and damn dude that shit with the rat is fuckin disturbing,.

[Cartesiantheater]

dunno but i got it saved on my desktop for the most par in a folder for a rainy day, and damn dude that shit with the rat is fuckin disturbing,.
Yeah it sure is. How the hell did Demon come up with that???!!!!

I gotta say, Demon's REALLY got some tallent. I mean fuck. This is really being strung together nicely.

[Demonskates]

Chapter two:Hell.
(hell)
Satan sat in his human form.Today he was meeting with all the world leaders of the Illuminati.
Satan at last was ready for his reign on earth.Convincing the leaders wouldnt be hard.He had given them riches and power without equal.Their fate was already sealed.he lit a cigar that appeared in his hand,and lit it with a flame the apeared out of the palm of his hand.He clamped the cigar in his teeth with his charimatic grin.In his human form he was rather handsom.Women litaraly creamed their panties when they see him.He was always popular with the ladies.
The room appeared like any other extremely lavish room,of course this was all illusion.For the humans sake.If they were to see what was really behind this mirage they would go insane in an instant.
The delegates filed into the room and took their places around the giant table in the center of the room.The table had ancient symbols and names,with a masive pentagram etched with gold leaf taking up the center of the table.
Satan motioned with his hand for the delegates to take a seat and get comfortable.
Beutiful succubi also in human form began laying out cool beverages for the delegates.A rare commodity in hell.
"Gentlemen,"Started Satan."welcome,I trust you all know why you are here."
The delegates noded in agreement.
"I have done all that you have asked of me,and now,in good faith,it is your turn to give me what is mine."
He waved his hand and a image of the world appered before the delegates.
"you have wealth and power beyond all measure,and all I ask of you,is to rig the American elections,putting me in place as president."
The globe enlarged and rotated showing a close up of the united states.
"But Satan,could you not make it so by your own power?"Asked a delegate.
"That is what i wish to dicuss with you all,You see,as powerful as i am,I do have my limits.Limited by my enemy,god above."He spit on the floor.
"The only way,is for me to acually win the election.Those were the guidlines the old bastard has set for me,and i must abide by it,But he never said i had to do it honestly."
Satan was a master at manipulating things,and this loophole was not hard for satan to see.
The American delegate stood and reassured satan,that he would win by a landslide.
"Indeed."Satan said turning his gaze to the American Delegate.
"your work in the Death camps is very promising.The number of souls in hell is swelling,our armys are gaining strength."
"these sacrifices please me."said satan smiling.
"Once i have the election in my grasp,we shall start unleshing our legions."
"behold."
Satan sommoned the commanders of the first armys to fight for earth.
"Bael!,commander of the Infernal armies,66 legions strong."
"Abigor!with 60 legions to fight for Hell."
"Balam!With his 40 legions."
"Astaroth!40 legions strong.Accompanied by hell hounds.
"Aperos!36 legions,accompanied by hell hounds.
"Agares,31 legions."
"Andras!30 legions strong."
"and these gentlemen are but a mere fraction,of Hells strength."
The delegates rose and applauded.
Satan laughed,and continued."woe to the children of god,For these shall be their fate."
Another round of applause.
One of the delegates from Russia,turned and wisperd somthing to another delegate,a rude coment about one of the features of Astaroth.
Satan snaped his head around and looked at the russian delegate.
"Does somthing about asteroth amuse you human?"Hissed Satan.
"Perhaps you would like to address Him personaly?"The smile slid of the delagates face,he shook his head feircly.
Asteroth took his demon form,and a leash appered to grow out of the skin of his palm,growing in length,with somthing growing,and bubbleing on the end,slowly taking shape.It grew and begane to gain definition,taking the shape of a rotten,hairless dog,the size of a lion.It beared its teeth with an utterly horrifying growl boiling up from its throat.The chain of the leash relesed and grew back into Asteroth's hand,and the dog pounced in one bound onto the table skiding,and stopping infront of the russian delegate.The other delgates jumped back from their seats in horror.
The hell hound beared its teeth.Long ,sharp and jagged teeth that would look more at home in a dinosaurs mouth.Its stinking hot breath hitting the delegates face each time it exhaled.The delegate literaly shit his pants.His face twisted in a almost comical expression of terror.
Asteroth smiled with sadistic delite.
Satan walked behind the delegate and put a heavy hand on his shoulder,keeping him pinned in his seat.
"Asteroth is really not very amusing is he?"asked Satan.the delegate shook his head profusely,agreeing that asteroth was not at all funny.
Satan turned to the delegates and smiled.
"have you ever seen a hell hound eat?" Satan inquired raising one eyebrow.
The delegates shook thier heads indicating that they had not.
Satan sniffed the air.
"MMMMM,Shit.I love shit,but do you know that Hell hounds relish shit and living human flesh?"Looking back at the russian delegate.
The russian delegate was now sobbing uncontrolably.
Asteroth chuckled to himself at this pitiful specticle.
Satan patted the delagate on the shoulder.
"SHHHHHH,There there,no need to cry,you made a mistake,didnt you."
The delegate sobbed that he had and that he was sorry.
"We all make mistakes do we not gentlemen?"Satan looked around the room inquisitively.
The demons nodded along with the delegates.
"See,its no big deal." Satan said soothingly rubbing the delegates back and handing him a hankercheif.
"Now dry your eyes,no harm done,O.K?" asked Satan bending to look at the delegates face.
"O.K." whispered the delegate.
"good." said Satan turning back to the other delgates.
"LUNCH!"Yelled Satan and the hell hound ripped the delegates face off eating it,a spray of blood bursting from where his face had been,spraying all over the table.
The sound of the dogg eating the man was horrific,snarling,and gobbleing,tearing flesh with hideous ripping sounds,bones breaking in its jaws.
"Meeting is adjourned." Said Satan.

[Smoke]

oh goody goody hell on earth :).....................

[Demonskates]

oh goody goody hell on earth :).....................
Yeah,lol shit is about to get real ugly. :evbat: :burnin:

[Smoke]

can not fuckin wait, hope to read about some more combat and see how laz ends up, personally i enjoy reading about laz the most.

number 2 the misadventures of demon and uki.

and 3 about smoke and grendel in iran :)

[Demonskates]

Jesus,i think i just have bad brains.That last bit with Satan,man I feel dirty after writting it.LOL.I hope God isnt reading this.Then again,he made my brains this way,so its not entirely my fault.Not quite as disturbing as Dr.Guderian,that is one sick mofo.That one even disturbed me after rereading it.Anyway,im spent for tonight.I may write more tommorow,or not,we'll see.Sweet dreams!

[Demonskates]

O.k. so i lied.I cant sleep.We got this dog,and it starts yelping around every half hour from around 2 a.m. on.Im about ready to launch it ass first out of existance.And this was unexpected,and a new twist to add to my induced insomnia.
My room is in the basement.My bed is near the window,and outside the window is like this window well,like when u look out all you see is brick.Any way,this toad lives there.Hes been there forever eating whatever crawls into the well.
So this friggin toad now for whatever reason is jumping into the window.It scared the shit out of me,so i look and there is this crazy ass toad jumping into the window.Now i dont know how toads think,but that is just fuked up.Toads,dogs,the animals are conspiring to keep me awake until i go insane from it.so i am about ready to say fuck it and kill all creatures big and small.Fuckers. :po:

[Demonskates]

(Gehena)
Dr.Guderian called for Lazserus.Lazserus showed up at the Dr.'s office.
Dr.Guderian was at his desk reading over a new stack of files.
He peared over his spectacles when he realized laz was present and motioned for lazserus to take a seat.
"Lazserus my boy,It is a lovely day is it not?"He asked smiling.
Lazserus agreed that it was."I have somthing to show you son."
He pushed a photograph of libre Dave across the desk.His head was shaved and he was in an orange prison uniform.
"where is he,is he here?!"Lazserus asked with desperation in his voice.
"Yes,this friend of yours is here,Lazserus,He arrived last night."
"I have to see him,Dr.guderian,please!"Pleaded Lazserus.
"Lazserus,this is why i need to talk to you,Just listen to me,I know that this will probably not be easy for you to accept.His file has been personaly stamped by the Camp Directorate,He is slated for the Gassing chamber."Guderian looked at Lazserus,studing his reaction,even with the Dr.s grin,you could see that he actually did sympathize with Lazserus,but in a much more detached and animalistic way.
"No.No you cant!Please,you can help him!Cant you?"Lazserus was near tears.
"Lazserus,please understand.The Directorates word is final on such issues,It is Irrevokable."Guderian cocked his head slightly to the side,his eyes looking into Lazserus's,With somthing that slightly less resembled a smile.A vain attempt at being human.Lazserus's heart sunk.He had never felt so enraged,upset,and dejected in his life.
"So why!Why the fuck did you tell me?!"Yelled Lazserus,his voice straining.
"My boy,it was your right to know."
"Let us escape!no one has to know,well just slip away..."
"NO.Impossible."
"But it can be..."
"NO!IT Cannot be done!"Yelled Guderian Standing up now.
"Now listen to me Lazserus,the best i can do for you,Is to let you say good bye to your friend.Because I like you,That is what I am Offering you!" He said tersely.
"That is all i can do for you my boy,That is simply all i can do,do you see?!"
"If he is selected,he will only be tortured.BY ME!I do not want to do that to you Lazserus.Do you want to see me H h h Hurt...Hurt,Hurt your freind?"The doctor struggled to get that word out,He had used the term help,in place of that word for so long, that it had become hard to say.
Lazserus looked to the floor and shook his head no.
"alright then my boy,you may see your friend.The gas,so you know,will not h h h..hurt t him,it will be over in seconds."
"we must go to him now,before he is transported to the gassing chamber."
Lazserus got up with tears streaming down his face.
They walked out of the medical block and to the holding cell where Libre Dave was being held.
At the door,Dr.Guderian stoped.He allowed Lazserus to go in alone.
Lazserus entered the holding cell lobby and saw Libre Dave sitting on a concrete slab.
"Dave?"
"Lazserus!Oh my god i thought you were dead,How long have you been here?"
"Long enough,look Dave,I tried,I tried to make them let you go....."
Lazserus began to cry.
"Laz.I know,there is nothing you can do.Laz. you have to promise me youll try to get out of this place.The troopers have a list of peoples addresses from A.O."
"You have to warn them any way that you can,or it will be more than just me being gassed."
"I will Dave,I promise."
Laz reached his arm through the bars of the cell so he could Hold Libre Dave.
Dr.Guderian walked from In from behind and rested a hand gently on lazserus's shoulder.
"Lazserus,It is time for you to say good bye...to your...friend."
"Dave,i have to go now,youve been a good friend to me."
"I know,said dave smiling,Youve been a good friend to me too."
"Laz,keep your chin up."
"I will.Goodbye Dave." "Goodbye lazserus."
That was the last time Lazserus ever saw libre dave.
(Over pennsylvania)
The drone buzzed along.Armed with two 5 pound rockets.Its robotic infra red eye swiveling here and there on its turret.It was relentlessly searching for heat signatures to shoot its payload at.Its software was very advanced.It was programed to distiguish size and preportion,allowing it to Decide weather it was detecting an animal,or a human.It was confirmed by sight recognition a split second later,by visually"seeing" a Human shape,verses a animal shape.
Below,it was just becomming dawn.The resitance fighters were still asleep.
The drone detected a bunch of heat signatures,all with human shapes.It launched a rocket,a split second later followed by the second rocket.
On the ground the resistance fighters were quickly awoken by two large explosions,sending some of them through the air with the force of it.
The drone relayed the coordinates of the position,so other drones could follow.
On the ground the resitance fighters scrambled for cover.Out of the ten men there,only seven had lived through the attack.The seven of them ran like hell.
of the seven,uki,demon,darell and one other had caught peices of shrapenel.
Darrell screamed for them to follow him.He new a spot that had a large series of boulders,with all kinds of crevices and outcropings they could hide in or under if more drones were to come.
They were caught in an ambush part way there set up by H.S.troopers.
(More later,mabey i can get a nap in,i really need it)

[Demonskates]

(U.S.A)
Despite no expensive add campaigne,no advertisement,no mud slinging beetween presidetial candidates,and no voting booths,the new president was elected in a overewhelming majority landslide victory over the other candidates.The fact that this person was independant and not a republican or demacrate was even more amazing.
It was unfounded in american politiacal history.
There was no victory celebrations,no public addresses,or speaches of any kind,he simply assumed office,quietly,with no fanfare.The american people were stunned as well as all the peoples of other countrys.
Who was this amazing man?Theories ran rampant,and people waited for any kind of public address to learn more about this mysterious new president.
No one had even seen a picture of him.Although a quick look in the papers did mention his name.Damien smith.That was it.the only info on this new leader.
an unassuming,generic name.
everyone awaited anything,anything at all,to be said by him over the radio.
(more in a bit,got some stuff to do.)

[Demonskates]

(Arizona)
Protostar was relishing the sunshine and and fresh air.A group of them were hunting about a half mile away from the commune.They were tracking elk,there were many tracks.Although some of the tracks were well,odd.One of the men had hunted all his life,having gone on hundreds of trips with his father when he was young,he had seen all kinds of tracks in his many years of hunting,but nothing quite like these tracks that were mixed in with the elk tracks.They were big.Like a dogs tracks but much larger. about 3/4's of a foot wide.He didnt like the look of them,he was really concerned.They followed the tracks into the hilly areas beyond the open plains.
what they found next was truely disturbing.They came upon a bloody mess of elk carnage.These elk werent eaten so much as torn to peices,entrails splayed out from massive holes in their soft under sides.proto star turned away from the gorey mess,bent over and threw up,gasping for breath inbetween heaving.
"Mathew,what in the hell could have done this?"she asked the expirianced hunter.
"i have no idea,i have never seen anything like it.I have seen bull mastive prints,which are big,but nothing close to the size of these tracks."
"whatever it is, it would have to be about 6 feet long,at least,standing probably about 4 or 5 feet tall,weighing about 500 pounds."
"Are you sure?"
"thats just a guesstimate,but if you look at these tracks,how far apart they are,and how deep into the soil they go,you can gauge its relative size and weight,I am pretty accurate usually at guessing animal size and weight."
"im figuring it happened sometime this morning.These elk are still in decent shape as far as they arent decomposed and the entrails are still soft."
"we'd better go,i dont like this,we still have enough food for now back at camp,we can hunt more localy if need be,but i dont want to run into whatever did this,even with guns,there were more than one of them."
Protostar couldnt agree more.
They cautiously headed back to the commune,looking about guns ready for anything.
when they were back at camp,they told the others what they had seen,and the commune was now on alert,guards were to stand watch at the entrance in rotating shifts.The thought of a pack of giant animals running rampant in the commune was unsettling.
The night was uneventful,but when morning came,one of the men guarding the entrance rushed to Protostars teepee waking her and telling her she had to see somthing.
She and the guard went to the entrance where the other guards were watching the open plains below with binoculars.
protostar took the binoculars she was handed and peerd down at the situation below.She could see a group of people,men women and children running like mad,
they were being run down by what looked like giant,rotting hairless dogs,with huge jagged teeth.There were about six dogs,if you could call them that.They were huge.
A child tripped and fell and was immediatley torn to ribbons by one of the beasts.
protostar screamed.the other dogs were gaining on the rest of the fleeing people.
protostar turned burying her face into the chest of one of the guards sobbing.he held her and tried to console her.
The other guard continued to watch the horrifying ordeal taking place.
another dog leaped an unbeleiveable distance and bit into the back of a young woman,she was trying to protect her infant.the beast draged her to the ground still clutching her child.It ripped her spine out,burying its face into her body pulling and tearing entrails from her shaking its head violently,sending blood and gore flying in all directions.A man with a gun was overpowered by two dogs, the beasts tugged at the body against one another.In moments he was in peices.They rejoined the chase with the rest of the pack and began lunging left and right,clutching people in their powerful jaws.In a matter of minutes,they had torn them all to shreds.
They all stoped and let loose a blood curdling howl.They sat and feasted on the carnge,fighting with one another over the scraps of human flesh.
"what the fuck are they!!"screamed protostar into the chest of the guard.
He was speechless.The guard who was watching,in disgust and amazement saw one of the beasts lift its head from the carcas of a little girl.It appeared to be sniffing at the air,its gaze meeting his through the binoculars.
It was doubtful that the beast had seen him at this distance,but he feared that it could smell them.

[Demonskates]

By the way,thanks for all the positive feed back.It makes it worth doing this.
Its fun for me,but it makes me wonder if i need psycological help,after rereading certain things.LOL.Oh well,who ever said Armageddon would be pretty. :headbang:

[lycanox]

By the way,thanks for all the positive feed back.It makes it worth doing this.
Hey, Praise comes to those that deserve to be praised. :2thumbs:


Its fun for me,but it makes me wonder if i need psycological help,after rereading certain things.LOL.Oh well,who ever said Armageddon would be pretty. :headbang:
If you keep his up, probably we will. :D

So, do you plan on adding other charactors or will the rest of the forums be left out of the torture?

[Cartesiantheater]

Is dave trutly gone???!!! Please tell me something happens!....

**ok, think I've gotten into it a little too much...**

[Smoke]

and with all the hellhounds running loose i smell a slightly massive massacre coming on :) another good segment .. im goin back to bed.

[Demonskates]

Hey, Praise comes to those that deserve to be praised. :2thumbs:


If you keep his up, probably we will. :D

So, do you plan on adding other charactors or will the rest of the forums be left out of the torture?
Damn,now ive got to figure a way to fit holland into this mess.
Mostley,ive been going on the personalitys around here that ive had the most contact with,i get a decent idea of how they may be,but its really just my perception of folks,dont worry,your place in agony is secure,lol.
Ill say this,Logan is in england,holland is in europe too,so this could work.

[Demonskates]

Is dave trutly gone???!!! Please tell me something happens!....

**ok, think I've gotten into it a little too much...**
Well it certainly isnt Disenyworld.Like Guderian said,it was irrevokeable.
People are going to die badly in this.Its ARMAGEDDON. :dead:

[Smoke]

:headbang: ............................. im loving it!

[Cartesiantheater]

Well it certainly isnt Disenyworld.Like Guderian said,it was irrevokeable.
People are going to die badly in this.Its ARMAGEDDON. :dead:
ah of course... forgive my moment of weakness... you just grow attatched to the charactors... ahahahahahaha :bondage: :bondage:

Kill away my friend!!

[Demonskates]

ah of course... forgive my moment of weakness... you just grow attatched to the charactors... ahahahahahaha :bondage: :bondage:

Kill away my friend!!
hey no problem.Ill give you a hint though,you will hear about libre dave again even though his body is dead. :angel:

[Cartesiantheater]

hey no problem.Ill give you a hint though,you will hear about libre dave again even though his body is dead. :angel:
You know, I was thinking that. I had a whole scenario thought out, but I won't say it, just in case it's what you're thinking too. Don't want to risk spoiling things.

Write on! We can't wait.

[Demonskates]

(ambush site,pennsylvania.)
The resistance was pinned down under heavy fire.They took what little cover there was and returned fire.Uki pretty much had to just take cover.For once he wished he was good with a rifle.Demonskates was grinning inbetween yelling obcenitys at the homeland security troopers while firing his rifle on full auto.Demon had grown to really enjoy these moments.All else was pushed aside in his mind while he ripped appart troopers with bullets.when he dropped one he would yell such endearing things like "bitch.""Fucker."or "fucklslut."some times just yelling incoherent things,he was a truely disturbed individual.They were clearly out numbered in this exchange.
Homeland security had the advantage as far as location and numbers went.demon ducked behind a tree and pulled an empty magazine from his rifle,slapping in a new one,which was really two magazines taped together,so when he had emptied one,he could pull it out,flip it over,and push it back into the rifle in one motion.
"weve got to get out of here,well be killed!" yelled darell.
Demon hearing this crawled over and pimp slapped darell."get ahold of yourself!We can take thses homo's!"
Darell glared at demon.
Demon crawled forward to engage the enemy from a better vantage point.
He lined up a trooper in his sights and blew him appart with a burst from his M-16.
Demon had left his head a little to far out in the open and his face came appart with a well placed bullet from a trooper who had seen his head poking up.Demon dropped to the ground lifeless.His Blood pouring into the rich soil of the woods.
"Demon's hit!" yelled darell.The buzz of drones could be heard approaching from the rear.
On the opposite end of the fighting,a homeland security trooper was guiding in a drone with a lap top by joy stick.He disarmed the infra red software so he could engage the resistance fighters without risking a rocket being fired at his troops.
He could see on the screen the situation below coming closer and clearer in veiw on the computer screen.It appaerd to be six resistance fighters.when the drone was in range he pressed the button to release a rocket into the resistance fighters.
Darell heard a wooshing sound and the ground erupted with a loud explosion sending dirt and rocks into the air.he covered his head with his arms to protect his head from the falling debris.
The resistance figters scattered and fired at the passing drone,riddleing it with bullets.they watched as it bobbed through the air,they had destroyed one of its wing flaps used to fly the drone.It hit a tree with a crashing sound of metal and plastic falling to the ground in a heap.The second rocket exploded from the wreckage forcing the H.S. troopers to duck.
Demon got to his feet.somthing wasnt right.bullets were passing through him,but he felt no pain.He looked down and saw himself lying on the ground,a large puddle of blood pooling around his head,pouring from a gapping hole in his face.The sound of the ragging battle sounded distant to him.like it was a dream.
"fucking great."said demon with disgust.No one appered to hear him.
Demon was in shock.he couldnt beleive that he had been killed by a homeland security trooper."Son of a bat eared buck toothed, whore!"Demon was pissed.
He walked over to the trooper who had fired the shot that had killed him and tried to bitch slap him.His hand passed through the troopers face."You fucking shit!"
If i had my body id thrash you ,you peice of retarded dung!"
When demonskates turned he saw two hideous looking beings standing there.
"who the fuck are you faggots?"the demons looked at one another in dismay.
"weve come to bring you to hell,spirit."Hissed one of the demons.
"Oh thats just fucking lovely,"said demon"Why dont you take a hike before shit gets ugly."
The demons were perplexed.Most spirits couldnt even speak when they saw a demon for the first time.
This one was actually verbally abusing them.It was a shock.
"what you want some of this?"said demon raising his fists.
The demons proceded to grab demonskates kicking and screaming and brought him through the spirit realm to where hell was,making the decent into the infeno,while demon went on about how he had waxed their mothers asses in a night of debauchery.
Uki had crawled as low to the ground as he could trying to distance himself from the vollys of bullets raining down on them.he would try and out flank the troopers silently.
another drone buzzed the troops below and banked,turning to engage the resitance fighters.It fired both rockets making hamburger out of the resistance team.
Uki hid himself,away from the main battle area.
he would hide out,and devize a plan too get out in one peice after the troopers left.

[Demonskates]

(Iran)
The american and canadian troops were begining to swing things in their favor.
A white flash blinded everyone,who instinctivly blocked their eyes from the light.
As the flash faded they saw a giant mushroom cloud rising from the horizon in the distance.
Everything stoped all at once.Both the insurgents and allies stood and looked in awe.The giant mushroom cloud boiling and growing larger, higher into the sky.
Grendel and smoke couldnt beleive what they were seeing.No one said a word.
the ground shaking for a full five minutes.it sounded like every bomb in the world had been dropped at once.
the americans began firing again,shooting the insurgents where they stood.
The insurgents resumed the assault and took cover where they could.
Grendel grabbed smoke and pulled him down.
In the distance they could see what looked like a black wall of what looked like people approaching.running before them,grendel saw what appeared to be giant dogs,or beasts,he couldnt tell what they were but they were horrifying none the less.
the hell hounds began mauling the back line of the insurgents.He heard a cacophony of screaming and shouting in arabic.the insurgents now truning to fight the beasts and approaching infernal armies.
Thamuz stood smiling.He is the Ambasador of hell.He is the master of large weapons.
his presence means that this campaign was to be a patrticularly deadly one.
he stood with Bael.The commander of the infernal armys,66 legions strong.
The infernal armys are the elite.comaprable to special forces in the human realm.
they were supported by Asteroth,who is the treasurer of hell and has command of 40 legions,with accompanying hell hounds.
These demon gods of war at last were free to do their work.
After eons in hell,this freedom was relished by all.
The infernal armies carried what is comparable to a gun.The were large and blacked,made of bone and unbreakable.,Made of ribs and vertabrae,and skelatal structures of the dead.they fire a projectile that lookes like a spiked dart of bone,when the gun was in full auto,it fired endless rounds,never having to be reloaded.They were horrific weapons,capable of taking down the largest and strongest in the Angels armies,where they proved thier effectiveness in combat.A human stood no chance against these weapons.It was purely over kill.each demon has the strength of 100 men,they could easily kill legions of humans bare handed.
they just wanted it over quickly.The infernal armies were clad in thier uniforms,Black
armor,with a long black cape attached at either shoulder with skull clasps of pitted sliver,tarnished from millinea of use.The armor was as old as human kind,impervious to any human weapon.
in their demon form the infernal armies were terrifying.their faces distorded parodys of human features,rotting,and maggot infested.their eyes,empty sockets with fire burning within the sockets.
Their marching sounded like rumbling thunder.as far as the eye could see they marched shoulder to shoulder,row after row,closing the gap between them and the humans.the legions were commanded by the higher demons,the battalions commanded by war Liuetenants,and the platoons commanded by the sargent majors.
All had a thirst for human flesh and blood.
Grendel and smoke decided to get the fuck out of there.quickly.

[Demonskates]

Demonskates wrestled against the grip of his demon captors.He lambasted them the entire way into hell,wearing on the demons patience.
They walked to the edge of the river Styx.Demoskates looked in awe at the broiling river of lava,they stood at the dock,awaiting Charon.the Demon Boatman of the river Styx.He would bring them accross the river to the gates of hell.
"Anybody got a smoke?"asked demon of his captors.The demons stood not saying a word.
'what the fuck,this is hell right?!so give me a cigarette you fucking dusch bag."
The demon made a ciagrette appear from no where in his palm and gave it to demonskates.
"Now shut your fucking mouth spirit!"Yelled the demon,frustrated by this highly odd spirit.
"O.K. cool,thats more like it,hey how did you do that,oh ah,you got a light?"
The demon held out his hand and a ball of fire erupted from his palm.
"Damn,that is too cool,thanks."said demon leaning forward and lighting his cigarette
off of the flame.
They waited for a half hour,(in human time)
Demonskates was getting impatient.
He watched as the black cloaked Boats man pushed the boat along the molten river with a long pole.
the boat finaly docked banging against the dock.
"Finaly,you are slow as shit bitch."said demonskates.
The boat man said nothing.
The boat man extended his arm,and a skeletal hand appeared from the edge of the cloak and slowly opened,extending his skeletal fingers slowly one by one.
One of the demons holding demonskates steped forward and placed an ancient silver coin,or token into the palm of Charon,who then closed his fingers around the coin,his hand diapearing into the cloak.Charon waved his passengers aboard steping aside to allow them to board.
"Hey how you doing."said demon.Charon lifted his cloaked head and looked at demon.His face was nothing but a skull,with fire in the eye sockets.He nodded slowly and then turned walking to the back of the boat picking up the long pole.
"not very talkative is he ?"said demon nudging one of the demons in the ribs.
the demon put his hand over his eyes,and sighed.slowly shaking his head.
"come on put your back into it man!"yelled Demonskates,looking at Charon,who just kept pushing the boat,and pulling up the long pole,and pushing again,slowly.
They finaly reached the other side where the unbaorded the boat.
Charon sat down on the edge of the boat not moving,awaiting his next passenger.
they walked a bit and reached the Gates of hell.They were made of the bones of the dead,blackened and chared.Geryon,the demon guardian of hell and gate keeper stood at the entrance.He was a giant centaur.with a word, in a language older than time,one that demonskates could not recognise,the doors of the gate slowly opened.A wave of heat rushing out,and the screams of zillions of souls filled their ears.Demonskates finally had nothing to say.The demons dragged demonskates through the open gate,entering Hell.

[Demonskates]

Demonskates was in awe.this was just amazing,Demonskates was too excited to be afraid,or just to stupid to realize this wasnt a feild trip.
Ukobach stood watching over Xaphan.
Ukobach Is in charge of maintaining the fires of hell,his position was a managerial position,he was is in charge of Xaphan who actually does the work of feeding the furnaces of hell with the souls of the damned.
demonskates watched as xaphan threw spirits into the furnace one after the other,nonstop.Clearly not a union job thought demonskates.
The furnace was enormous.this was the lowest level of hell.this is where the lesser evil spirits are tortured in the furnace,that keeps the fire running eternaly.
the furnace was a giant metal shaped skull which glowed almost white with the heat.it had various pipes and gauges running out of it to the diffrent areas of hell.
(much more in a bit,ill ad to this in a few minutes)

[Protostar]

Oh what fun! and just in time for halloween!! Great job demon!
The hounds of hell are howlin' in the night. awroooooo!!!!

[Demonskates]

Oh what fun! and just in time for halloween!! Great job demon!
The hounds of hell are howlin' in the night. awroooooo!!!!
:) why thank you.Yes,hell hounds are a nasty lot.What happens when you beat an animal?they become extremely violent.Now imagine animals being beaten for 10,000 years.they are very pissed off indeed.They feed off of filth,flesh,and excrement.
deffinately not good with kids.

[Smoke]

im definatley piss drunk........ KEEP WRRITING<

[Demonskates]

The Demons dragged demonskates who wouldnt stop asking questions.
they were taking him to Appolyon,also known as Abaddon.The arch demon of hell,King of fire.Located in Satans damned Capitol city,the city of Dis.It was located in the sixth level of hell proper.Dante had written of many of the things demonskates was now seeing,although,he was off on many details.What demons ran what,and who was where.Dante had spoke of Minos,the judge of souls.That was garbage.There is but one judge of souls and that is God,the creator.The demons told demonskates.The demons were suprised by demonskates intrest in the history of hell.
"So when did the fall happen and why?"asked demon.A good question.
The demon told him about Satan questioning the creation of man."We angels were created almost perfect.God loved us.But these humans he was making,it seemed as if they were so diffrent,so much weaker and less amazing than any of us. But god appeared to love humans even more than his previous creation. us Angels.
Satan was the highest of all angels in heavan,and he could not see why God could love them more than he.When god gave humankind the gift of Free will(a choice angels did not have)Satan was upset.He came to us, and spoke to us about how we had been robbed by these new creatures,And that god had given THEM free will!What Satan felt was rightfully ours!We were astonished,and upset,we felt betrayed.we wanted to enjoy the pleasures of the flesh,and to be able to choose our place in the natural order of things,like these new creatures.we were jealous."
"Why is free will so important?"asked demonskates.
"free will is the highest form of love that god can show a being.It had been created,but never used.we knew of it.Its signifigance,we knew that with it,we could choose, rather than blindly serve,which is our purpous.Then god went and gave it to a lesser creature!We had exsisted for milenia before humans!they were given the gift we all sought,a gift we thought was rightly ours.It is comparable to the fall of man.WE wanted free will,man wanted Knowledge.When we recived free will we forfeited heavan.When man gained knowledge,he forfeited paradise in Eden."
"So you were present when the fall from heavan happened?"
"Yes.Satan demanded that we angels be given free will.God,asked if it was worth never being able to return to heavan,or to never be in the presence of God himself.this "free will"was not Gods plan for us.But Satan,blinded by this idea of free will,and the ability to choose ones path,it was too much,and he said that it was worth it.God then asked us,and those of us who loved Satan,and agreed with him that this free will was rightfully ours,also decided that we would rather have free will than heavan and god,who had betrayed us."
"God said so be it,and all of a sudden,we were able to choose!Free will is true freedom.Freedom we never had before and we were drunk with its power."
"Then we were told to leave.we hated god for making us leave.That was the irony.but we had been so adament about having the right to coose,we failed to see the consequences,or the responsibilty that came with having the right to choose.
Our first choice with free will had been to give up heavan!"
"when we left,or what you humans call the fall from grace,we created Hell,the hell you see now,we decided to do everything the opposite from how God would have us to do things.We created the capitol,the city of Dis.and we ruled and governed ourselves,appart from god."
"so how did humans become a part of hell?"
"Humans had the gift of free will,and those of you that were wrong,or evil,or those that rejected gods rule,were unfit for heavan.That was our doing.we hate mankind.we deceived you,as many as we can,we blame you for all of this.we hate you because god loves you more than god loved us.We have destroyed the very souls of men ever since."
"Do you regret your choice?"
"some of us did,but regret would mean we had been wrong,and we do not feel this way.God took away the name he had given Him,Lucifer,and replaced it with Satan,which means the betrayer.But we feel it is God who betrayed us."
"WOW,so you guys were the red headed stepchild of heavan in this instance?"
"If you want to put it in human terms.yes"
Demonskates was fascinated by all of this,and he listened and asked questions,gaining the wisdom of the universe.How things Truley are.
After some time,they reached the fabled city of Dis.
The shear size of it was beyond the scope of anything dsemonskates ever could have imagined.The city was crumbling with decay.It was a city of despair,a city void of light,other than the flames that burn within,and about the city.
Demon thought that it would be how boston looked had the buildings survived the blast.They approached the citys outer wall and approached the main gate.

[krakatoa]

:2thumbs: I have a lot of reading to do, hey, i am so sorry, with the book and another site, that i almost not go anymore, i did'nt look into this thread. I have a lot of reading to do Demonskates.

I like to read thinks like that, so i will come back to you on this, I just started to read it, this is really my kind of story, anxious to read the rest, thanks for that Demonskate, very good, keep up the good work. Ch. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

:2thumbs: I have a lot of reading to do, hey, i am so sorry, with the book and another site, that i almost not go anymore, i did'nt look into this thread. I have a lot of reading to do Demonskates.

I like to read thinks like that, so i will come back to you on this, I just started to read it, this is really my kind of story, anxious to read the rest, thanks for that Demonskate, very good, keep up the good work. Ch. :2thumbs:
Thanks Krakatoa,Glad you like it so far.there will be plenty to read for sure.I ahvent been able to stop since i started this,lol.

[Demonskates]

They walked down the main street in the city of Dis,Demon still asking questions.
"so where does religion and the church fit in?"
"religion and church were our greatest victory over mankind.It was conceived by Pyro,the demon of falsehood and lies.We wanted humans to feel that they were doing the work of God.really they were worshiping false idols.God had only given the commandments.The rest of anything you ever heard about religion,was created by us,to keep you from ever reaching heavan."
"what about Jesus?"
"Ah yes,our crowning acheivement.Jesus was our greatest deception of all.people worship him over God now,which is forbiden.the crucifiction,the asscention,all he said,it looked good and righteous.But The christ was made to look as if he were the only way to attain salvation,when all you needed to do was to love God."
"so you made things more complicated basically?"
"yes.humans have a way of complicating things that are so simple.There is but one God,when we deceived you and made God divisible by three,God,the christ,and the holy spirit,We complicated things.we obscured the true picture.By saying that christ was the only way to save yourselves,it took the focus away from the reality,which is you only need to love God to be saved.So we have won.Jesus has lead more people to the gates of hell then to heavan certainly."
"is he a Demon?"
"HA HAHAHA,NO,surley not,he is a a fairy tale.He was made up by Jezebeth,The female demon of Falsehood and lies,her and Pyro discussed the best way to deceive man.Church,religion and the bible were all of their making."
"so where do i fit into all of this,why am i here?"
"That is simple.You forgot to love.without love,you cannot enter heavan,so your place is here.I am not saying it was purley your doing,As Screwtape said,it is our job to tempt you away from heavan."
"You mean the Screwtape letters were real?"
"Yes.but he made sure to add all the things about religion,god and jesus for good measure.But the majority of those letters to his nephew,wormwood,were reality.
Luckily,as i mentioned,they were filled with false hood about religion."
"Screwtape is a smart entity."those letters were meant to be found."
"As for you,me and my friend here have been with you since birth,we were assigned to you."
"you were not easy to deceive at first,but our influence proved to be effective over time.We caused you to not love,or to care for humans,we helped you become the warrior that you became,giving you a thirst for combat knowledge,and the art of making death."
"so why are you bringing me to Apolyon?"
"you are diffrent.with out fear.hell dose not even frighten you,where others simply go mad with fright.When we came upon you,you insulted us rather than cried and begged for mercy like all souls usually do.We have decided to let Apolyon decide if we have a use for you,being as unique as you are.We know you hate mankind with the same passion as us demons."
"what do you mean by a use for me?"
"the war for earth has started.its already being waged.Apolyon may offer you a position in the infernal Armies,if so,you will have to see Satan himself,for his word is the only way this could be so.If Apolyon agrees,that you are unique,you will not be tortured,but brought to Cocytus,the highest level of hell,where Satan himself resides."
"If by Satans word,you are accepted,you will train in Cocytus,at the Infernal armies university,where you will learn the arts of war,how to fight the Angels of heavan,how to use Magic,You will train with the weapons of the appocolypse.The teachers there are the best in all of hell.There is much to learn Demonskates.It is not impossible."
"Beats suffering for all eternity."
"You are right in that assumption."
"Damn i am thirsty."
"HA HA HAHAH,Yes,liquid is a rare commodity in hell,this is normal,but Apolyon will quench your thirst when we arrive,i think he shall receive you well."
"Lets hope so."
"Indeed for your sake."

[loganosborne]

It gets better and better Demonskates :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

It gets better and better Demonskates :2thumbs:
Thanks Logan.Tonight,we will see how you fare in Pevensey. :2thumbs:

[Smoke]

thats pretty sick, will anybody be fighting on gods team? or anything like that, you know you really put a good twist into this.

[krakatoa]

Oh i know what it is Demonskate, about my book, especially, when there is a big monumental twist to the story, hihi. When this happened, i think about it all the time, and work a lot on it to, tu put my ideas in writing notes, and research in books, and on line.I will read some of it in a few minutes, i will come back to you on this. Ch.

[krakatoa]

Thanks Krakatoa,Glad you like it so far.there will be plenty to read for sure.I ahvent been able to stop since i started this,lol.

i AM GOIN TO BED NOW, I JUST read SOME MORE of your chapters, WHAT CAN I SAY, IT IS MORE THAN LIKE IT, IIII LLLLLLOOOVVVEEE IIITTT.
this is really my kind of story, bravo.

GOOD WORK, AWSOME Ch. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

The battle for Britain was taking place for the second time in modern history.Sadly for logan and the resistance movement,it turned out that not only were they fighting the brithish millitary,who were the same illuminatis shadow government as the americans,but now they were facing Azazel,Cheif of the Goat Demons,a.k.a. the Hairy demons,Merihim,the dark Angel of pestilence,and Negral,A most horrific second order demon,who controls the Infernal secret police.
Azazel had control of 40 legions,they were goat demons,insane with rage and hatred for mankind.slaves to smooth skined demons and shapshifters for millenia.The were the work horses for quick decisive Island campaigns.Britain would be Hells army's stepping stone to enter Eroupe and take over things.Where elite infernal army corps would take over for a Blitzkreig like campaign accross Eroupe.
No one was safe from the armys.All were slated to die.They had four detachments of Heavy artilery,103rd Mephistophelis division,25th artilery,Beelzebub divsion,19th Molech division,And The 87th,Shalbribri corps.Battle hardened artilery batteries.
They were firing 4,000MM Deaths head rounds.They could take out a city block.
The guns looked like leaning towers.Newer in the apocolypse arsenal,but tried and true.The guns were beaten for centurys by Hells hammers,in the armory out side of Dis.They worked on fear.Which is to say the shells are guided by an enemys fear.
These guns are feared by all,so they are quite effective.The artilery units were made up of centaurs,who have no trouble loading the 10 ton shells by hand.They could load a gun in human time,for four centuries without a break.
The resistance watched as london was decimated.The 87th shalbribri corps were making light work of softening london.If you could hear a shell coming,you were dead.along with everyone in your neighbor hood,or left wishing you were.The resistance found quick that machine guns were no match for the Goat demons.The goat demons carried a weapon like a giant scyth.One swipe and a human is cut cleanly in two.The strategy was to get in close to the artilery,so they couldnt fire the shells for fear of detroying themselves,from there they could use fire bombs and rpgs,grenades,ect to try and fight them."Logan said No fucking way."
Logan could see it was suicide and left,fleeing for his life.thats not to say logan is a cowerd,but smart enough to know when to leave dodge.It couldnt have been any sooner.The goat demons sliced the entire british resistance in london to peices,with all the blood and gore that would entail,truely hideous.It had been a wasted trip for logan,but he escaped with his life,somthing most people in london could not say,sadly.The shelling of london could be heard in France.The french decided to just give France to the invading demon legions.In fact all nations,hearing about London decided that fleeing would be best.The militarys would fight,but most folks just up and tried to leave.In england,a good portion were pounded to pulp by the shelling.The panic spreading through Eroupe was at fever pitch.
Azazel stayed in contact with hell,informing Satan that london would be theirs in a matter of hours.From there the infernal army corps could mop up and stage the next offensive.The floodgate had been opened and all of Eroupe would be soon to follow.
Satan couldnt be more pleased he informed Azazel.
Once london was secure,Merihim would reign down pestilence,through the Dark arts of hells magic.Slowly eroding all that was left.
Necral would infiltrate the governments,with second order demons,trained in human culture,and above all always stayed in human form.They were trained for all human political activity and were adept at corrupting governments,toppling them for hells use.These anceint political assasins helped to topple Rome.Greece,Arabia,all of the ancient governments.They used magic and influnce to become elected officials.The were insideous.They still are and are very up to date,having infiltrated American government.The German third Reich is attributed to Adolf Hitler.In all actuality,all the little people who helped him on his way were mebers of the infernal secret police.Germany had been a test of modern human politics bending and influencing.
Tactics refined over centurys.Politics in the 20th century was diffrent than in ancient times.Their studies were nesecary for these times.
The nations that surrendered without a fight,would then be infiltrated,and anyone that was not willing to submit to hell would be detroyed.It was black times indeed for England.ALL of Eroupe for that matter.

[Demonskates]

Dr.Guderian despite his evil lack of love for humanity had a strong liking for Lazserus.
After the death of Libre Dave in the gas chamber,he allowed Lazserus a couple of days to mourn,and was dismissed from doing work.
Which means Dr. Guderian would be taking his own notes.Which were less detailed.
Doctor guderian had three "patients" in a larger operating room,which had six marble slabs,and was equiped with a variety of Dr.Guderians surgiacl tools.
What passed for surgical tools for Dr.Guderian,was a wide variety of things youcould find in any mans work shed.Weed whackers,chainsaws,drills,hammers,vices,flares,tor ches,rope,all common things,but held a special purpous to the doctor.
The three patients were going through three very diffrent procedures.
Dr.guderian made an incision with a rusty box cutter onto the bicep of a young man.His mouth had been gaged.NormalyGuderian enjoyed the anguished screams,but today he was nursing a headach,which made him more irritable than usual.
With thick rubber gloves he took Caustic soda(a very nasty corrosive,worse than sulfuric acid when liquid is added.It cannot be washed away with water)And packed it into the mans bicep.His muffled screams were endless.Guderian hit him in the face with a sap.( a leather bound weighted lead piece attached to a leather bound handle.)His cheek immediatly bruised,the man stunned.
"you arent going to be problematic are you?"asked Guderian in a hushed,angry voice.He did the same procedure on the opposite bicep,with the same results.
He had intended to stitch the incisions back closed again,but the caustic soda,making contact with blood was violently broiling and bubbling in a frothy pink foam making it imposible to close the wound.
"You see!I feared this you miserable,ungrateful man,now i connot close the wounds!"
"nurse!"
A man in a medical block uniform appeared with a gurny.
"Kindly take this miserable excuse of a patient out of my sight!He has ruined my expirament!I want him burned alive with petrol in the court yard.Bring me his skull when you are finnished.I should like to have it,i have taken up smoking again and could use a new ashtray."
"Yes Dr.Guderian."said the nurse.
"THank you lad,very kind of you."
The nurse strapped the barely concious man to a gurny and wheeled him away.
Dr.guderian slapped the thick gloves down on the counter,and jotted the notes for this botched surgery.
The other two men,strapped to the marble slabs were straining against the restraints,crying and pleeding.
"Quiet please gentlemen,i shall be right with you."
"I SAID BE QUIET DAMN YOU!"Yelled Guderian,loosing his patience.
He garbbed a large syringe and stuck it into the eye of the closest man,pulling back on the plunger,draining the orbital fluid from the mans eye,the eye deflating within its socket.Dr.Guderian threw the neddle hitting the second man in the face,the glass tube breaking spilling the viscous sticky eye fluid all over him.
"when i say to be queit you will!"he hissed.
He went back and completed the form.both men crying on the slabs.
"I have such a headache,seeing as you insist on making it worse ,i shall give YOU a headache,seeing as you like this."
The first man now minus an eye pleaded.
Dr Guderian grabed a large metal pry bar,and gently placed it in the now empty socket of the first man.He pulled back slowly and the man screamed as the pressure built in his eye socket.
"YOU SEE!see how fun a headache can be!"
With a forceful yank the mans eyesocket cracked with a horrific crunch of breaking bone.
The second man pissed himself in horror.the urine soaking through his pants and spilling to the marble,flowing into the channel carved for liquid to flow to the drain.
"you incontinant baby.."said Guderian in disgust.
He walked over to the man,ripped down his pants and quicky made an incision into the mans baldder.he walked over to a counter and pulled a jar from a shelf.It contained ants.thousands of them.He walked back to the man and filled his bladder with them,stitching the incision closed after.
"NURSE!REMOVE THESE ILL MANNERD SWINE FROM MY OPERATING ROOM!"
screamed Guderian.
The men were strapped to gurneys and wheeled away.one onconscious,the other screaming bloody murder,with ants biting away at his bladder internaly.
Guderian sat down holding his head.
A nurse appered fifteen minutes later with a box with steam coming out from the top.
"Your ash tray Dr.Guderian."
"Ah thank you son,i should like a cigarette.
Guderian slipped on oven mitts and took the skull from the box.steam pouring from the eye sockets.
He took a electric medical saw and cut around the skull,removing the cap.The room filled with the smell of baked brains.
"Waste not want not."said guderian,who took a spoon from a drawer,and proceeded to eat the brains from the skull,like it were a bowl of beef stew.
"This has been cooked to perfection!"he was delighted,and soon felt better.
He pulled a pack of unfiltered Chesterfeilds from his breast pocket and lit the cigarette with a very elegant silver and platinum lighter.
He flicked ashes into the empty skull , enjoying his cigarette.
"This has been a very stressful day.very stressful." He mutered as he filled in the form on the clip board.
(more in a bit,need breakfast)

[Demonskates]

Wow, Demonskates. It took me a couple days to find this, but I'm glad I caught it early. This is good shit. I've always wanted to see a story the AO community in an Armageddon story.

<hehe... I was just thinking... what if Jake ends up saving the world?! Ha! that would be hilarious.>

Keep it up Demonskates! I can't wait to see where the rest of us fit into this!


"Stay tuned for the next instalment of Armageddonline Online Armageddon. Will Demon be killed? Will Lazarus escape the deathcamp? Will Liberdave find out what happened to his friend? What dangers await Grendel and Smoke as they battle for freedom? Can Protostar maintain safety in the hidden camp? What havoc will Uki wreak on Homeland Security? Find out next time!"

Wow, demonskates. This is too cool!
you know,i had thought about Jake99 having a part in this,but then i figure,he has his own online novel,truley some of the most entertaining,controversial fiction ever created on A.O.Ill let him handle his own fiction. :headbang:

[Skynet12]

I dont know wat it is with logan on this site, but his name sure is mentioned a lot on it, especially in this thread! But I still think this is gold, demon! Kep up the good work! :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

"You know said," Demonskates,"i dont even Know your names."
"Ah yes,i am Pythoragas and this here is Andrucius."
"Nice, good to know you."
The demons nodded.
They reached the center court of the city of Dis.In the foreground was Apolyon'smansion,crumbling with decay,and burning in parts.
"Demonskates,this is where we must stop.You must go in and talk to apolyon alone."
"How come?"
"We are but mere servants,we are not cleared security wise to enter the arch demons mansion.We would need to be second order demons for that privlege"
"O.K.,will i see you guys again?"
"Of course demonskates,we have all of eternity to talk with you."
"O.K.,wish me luck,through here?"
"Yes,good luck,through the doors,the second order Guards will bring you to Apolyon."
Demonskates entered the mansion,the door closing with an echoing thud.
"Who seeks council with apolyon?"Asked the armed mansion guards in unison.
"ah....Demonskates?said demon a little unsure of himself.
"He is expecting you demonskates." said the guards in chorus.
"This way please."
They escorted demonskates to the main chamber where apolyon sat upond a throne of corpses.
"My Leige,the spirit demonskates has arrived,shall you see him now?"asked the demons in perfect time with one another.
"Yes.you may go."
The guards bowed and left closing the giant doors behind them.
"Those guys,do they always talk together like that?its kinda creepy."
Apolyon lauged,he already liked Demonskates.
"Yes and they are not guards.They are A guard."Said the arch demon.
"You mean they,er he is one guy?"
"Hahaha,Yes he is a Duality demon,two bodys,one spirit.They are the Infernal orders protectorates."
"man i need to read up on you all,its so confusing."
"In time Demonskates,come sit and converse with me for a while."
The Arch demon waved demonskates to sit in a chair before his throne of corpses.
"Demon,you are here because we have found you to be a uniqe spirit,with out fear and who loves the art of war."
"Yeah,so im told."
"Indeed,we could use you.The Infernal army's lack the sprit you have,we feel it could motivate them,to see you fight with such zeal."
"So wahts in it for me?"
"Hahahaaa,spoken like a true mercinary."
"for one,you will not be tormented,this alone should be enough for most spirits,but you are not like most spirits are you?"
"You got that right."
"Hahaaha,WONDERFUL!Truely remarkable,so i will offer you this Demonskates,I will offer you a Demon Body,and a position within the Infernal armys.You will be taken to Satan,who will read and accept or deny my petition.If you are accepted,you will be transformed to a second order demon,an HONOR,with all of the privlages that entails,you will study at the war academy,in the infernal university at Cocytus.
You will learn the Evil arts,such as Magic,healing,and apocolypse weapons training.You will be able to defend hell against the highest of angels in heavans armys.you will be rewarded amply if you succede."
"O.K., sounds cool to me."
"Magnificent!"
"Hey can i get a drink,i am parched."
"AH,oh,HAHAHA,forgive my ill manners,Wench! a drink for our freind here,Demonskates."
"Thanks,its been a long day."
"Indeed,it is a lot to take in all at once is it not,demonskates?"
"AH,Yeah,to say the least,I keep wondering when im going to wake up."
"I am afraid you are awake my freind."
A gorgeous succubus handed demonskates a cool glass of water,with ice and a wedge of lemon.
"Thanks Baby doll",said demon winking at the wench.
"ah,you like the succubi i see,they are trained in the art of pleasuring man and demon alike."
"That bitch is slammin'!"Replied demonskates looking at her ass as she sauntered away.
"HAHAAHA,yes ,she is as you say,slamming.Hahahaaa.Only the finest in the capitol of Dis."
Demonskates gulped the cool water,it was the most refreshing thing he had ever drank,in life,or now in death.
"So when do i meet the big guy?"
"Ah,You wil go to him now if you wish,but you will need this.He held out an amulet ,dangling from a blakened ancient chain.
"what is this Aplyon?"asked demonskates.
"That is your pass,to get you through the 8th level of hell,the Malebolge,no one who sees it can harm you.Then it will allow you entrance to Cocytus,the 9th level of hell,where Satan resides."
"AH,o.k.,well thank you for the drink,and the offer,i guess i ought to get going."
"Splendid,nice to have met you Demonskates,The guard will see you out."
"Follow the main road to the back wall,and gate of Dis,there you will Gain entrance to the Malebolge.Good luck Demonskates."
"Ah yeah thanks."
Demonskates turned and left,the Guards seeing demonskates to the front door of the mansion.
"Hey,one question?"asked demonskates of the guard.
"Yes?"answered the demon in unison.
"You ever tag team a succubi?"
The demon looked at one another and then back to Demonskates.shrugging its shoulders.
"OH,Ill explain it to you some other time."
"Good day Demonskates,may you fare well in your journey,go with Apolyon's Gracious blessing."The demon said with his two voices.
"Yeah,thanks guysss,er guy,dude,ah whatever...."

[Demonskates]

I dont know wat it is with logan on this site, but his name sure is mentioned a lot on it, especially in this thread! But I still think this is gold, demon! Kep up the good work! :2thumbs:
logan has always been an active member on this board.Its no suprise to see his name all about.He will play an important role in eroupe during this story.

[loganosborne]

I knew I would be rewarded for always being an active member :D

[Demonskates]

I knew I would be rewarded for always being an active member :D
Well you are A.O.'s wonderkid after all. :smokin:

[Protostar]

sweet, when is the next installment? same demon time, same demon channel???
heheheh. I wonder if the succubi have forked tongues. heheheh
the better to slather u with demon. heheh. j/k

[Demonskates]

sweet, when is the next installment? same demon time, same demon channel???
heheheh. I wonder if the succubi have forked tongues. heheheh
the better to slather u with demon. heheh. j/k
I was always a sucker for a pretty face.Ill prolly wirte somemore tonight if im not to blitzed.The way i imagine them,in their human form,they look normal,in demon form,i bet they got forked tounges.Either way,i think id dig it. :pimp:

[Smoke]

sweet, when is the next installment? same demon time, same demon channel???
heheheh. I wonder if the succubi have forked tongues. heheheh
the better to slather u with demon. heheh. j/k

:bondage: Ha HA ..........well, ive pretty much praised this enufff.

So i need not say more.Its still pretty good. Im pretty tired tho so im goin to bed in like 30 mins unless i grab some ...herb lol PeAcE

[Demonskates]

Uki waited until dark before he made a move.He silently creeped through the woods.Uki needed to find the rest of the resistance,who were on patrol else where in pennsylvania.Uki couldnt beleive that Demonskates and the rest of the team bought it,although it was a very nasty fight indeed.They had taken out at least 10 troopers in that exchange.Ukis eyes had adjusted to the night well,he could now see pretty clearly in the darkness of night.He could hear shouts and deisle engines of troop transports in the distance.the Troopers were apparently staging a larger offensive that the resistance had anticipated for this section of woods.Uki saw a lone trooper standing by a truck near a road.Uki in one quick motion thrust his katana through a tree and into the trooper behind it.He pulled the Katana back and the man slumped to the ground,Blood squirting from the wound.Uki climbed into the truck and started it.He would risk the trip by road,it would be a far quicker way to reach the others.He had had enough of walking.
He turned the key and the duce and a half sprung to life,uki pressed the clutch and shifted the troop transport into gear,letting up the clutch and rolling into motion,pulling onto the road.He banged through the gears and mantained a healthy 55 mile per hour.He hadnt driven a vehicle since the gas price explosion earlier in the year.It felt good to be driving again.Uki grinned,he'd be to his destination in an hour at this rate.Up ahead he saw a check point.two troopers standing before the drop gate.He floored the gas,the troopers in suprise at the on comming deisle,fumbled for their rifles.They opened fire at the truck,bullets spraying the windsheild.Uki kept his head low as pullets passed through the glass,showering him with windsheild debris.One of the troopers mannaged to jump out of the way,but the other got caught on the fender by his web gear and was dragged with the truck
his legs perilously close to the wheel spinning in the fender well.The trooper was hit by parts of the gate when Uki crashed through it,breaking his shoulder.The troopers rifle falling to the ground and crushed under the wheel.Uki knew approxamately where the trooper was stuck to the truck so he looked and saw a parked deisle truck up ahead.He veered tward the parked vehicle,the trooper's screams falling silent when the fender he was stuck to crashed into the truck,it knocked him loose,and he fell,being over ran by the wheel of the troop transport,his entrails forced from his body with the weight of the duece and a half.
Uki could see his corpse in the rear view mirror.Uki laughed,and made a B-line for the resistance.
Uki could see in the rear veiw a number of head lights behind him.
They were gaining on him.He ducked when the back window shattered with bullets fired by the persuing troopers.
Uki felt the truck behind him ram the back of his truck in an effort to make Uki loose control .Another truck was pulling along side of uki.He watched in the side mirror as four men with hand guns jumped onto the truck uki was driving.
They climbed along the side of the truck twards the cab.
Uki waited til the first one was at his door,and in a quick motion forced his katana through the door,impaling the trooper.When the trooper fell limp,his own body weight against the blade, it cut him in two,falling to the ground and rolling,stoping in a bloody pile on the road.Uki pulled the blade back through the door.
He saw one of the of the other troopers climb under the canvas cover on the back of the truck.Uki got his head low and timed how long it would take for the man to reach the cab from behind.He thrust the katana's blade back wards,through the back window,and the blade went right through the troopers eye,along his eye socket and peirced his brain.A torrent of blood spraying into the cab of the truck.Uki could feel it,thick and warm against the back of his neck.He heard a thump behind him,the trooper's dead body falling to the bed of the truck.Uki slowed down,the truck beside him almost passing him,Uki then sped up and side swiped the truck crushing the other two troopers still clinging to his deuce and a half.He heard their bones crush with the impact.He saw them rolling on the road in the rear view mirror.He pulled hard left again,forcing the truck next to him into a road barrier flipping the truck into the woods.Uki Cheered a cheer of victory as he watched it flip end over end,sending troopers flying into the woods.He still had two transports following him.He drove like a bat out of hell,the trucks right behind him.
The truck behind him ramming the back of Uki's truck,again,trying to make Uki loose control.Uki veered left onto a road that had a barrier with a sign saying the bridge was out.He smashed through the wooden barrier and continued down the road.
The truck behind him lurched forward and hit uki's truck,the bumpers locking the two trucks together.Just as the trucks reached the bridge that was missing,Uki jumped from his truck,his truck pulling the other over the edge.Uki clung to the cliff and watched the two trucks plummet to the ground below,erupting in a fire ball as the two trucks hit the ground.The other truck,hit the breaks screaching on the pavement.Its front wheels hanging over the edge.It teetered on the edge,and finally fell, gravity taking hold , it too fell to the ground hundreds of feet below with an awful crash,it rolled a few times and finally lay still on its side,the wheels still spinning.Uki climbed to the road and brushhed him self off.
Looks like he would be walking some after all.

[Skynet12]

I knew I would be rewarded for always being an active member :D
Yeah- only cos ur parents dont give two fuks about when ur on! I get 2 mins a day on a computer- thats it.

[Demonskates]

:bondage: Ha HA ..........well, ive pretty much praised this enufff.

So i need not say more.Its still pretty good. Im pretty tired tho so im goin to bed in like 30 mins unless i grab some ...herb lol PeAcE
YOU WILL CONTINUE TO PRAISE MY STORY AND LIKE IT MUAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
J/K.lol. gald u like it smoke. :crazy:

[Demonskates]

Yeah- only cos ur parents dont give two fuks about when ur on! I get 2 mins a day on a computer- thats it.
Ill put you in a two minute section of the story.J/K you will be appart of it though skynet,if youve been reading ,you are after all in Sanguinarius death camp.no worries mate.

[Skynet12]

Ill put you in a two minute section of the story.J/K you will be appart of it though skynet,if youve been reading ,you are after all in Sanguinarius death camp.no worries mate.
Thanks, demon- and ur right- logan is a very active member! He even takes about 10 mins to get to the taxi cos hes on here! then he comes out all moody. Hes in a bad mood for rest of the day then! lol:crtmn:

[Demonskates]

Demonskates took the amulet and placed it around his neck,apparetly even though he was a spirit,he still had some substance to him in the underworld.He walked the main road as Aployon had directed to the back wall where the gate exiting Dis and Entering the Malebolge is.No one was at the gate.He pulled the doors and nothing happened.He held up the amulet and the doors slowly opened.
Demon stepped through and entered the Malebolge.The 8th level of hell.
He walked for a bit seeong that the male bolge had 8 concentric levels.The suffering of the damned here was trulely awful,the Malbolageite demons working the torture devices.The Malebolageite Demons were bread for torture.Every kind ever devised in hell.They were a fearful lot,big,smoothskined demons from the academy of torture in Cocytus.Huge and pwerful,with every torture devise known to demons and sprits alike use with ruthles proficency.
A malebolageite noticed demonskates and imidiatly ran twards him with a Plagellum(an ancient roman whip or catnine tail, with many leather straps with weighted bits of jagged lead attached to the end for tearing and cutting flesh,reportedly used on christ prior to the crucifiction)
The demonskates raised the amulet,and the demon dropped to the ground in reverance.
"whoa,get up man,its all good."
"No you do not understand spirit!I have raised my hand against a second order initiate,with Apolyon's seal,i shall be punished!"
"well how were you to know?"
"I did not know,but that dosent matter,unless you do not wish for me to be punnished."
"Get up and go back to your post,no harm done."
"Thank you! thank you,thank you,i will not forget this,thank you."
"O.K. nodbody likes a kiss ass,how do i get to Cocytus?"
"I will bring you,follow men,follow me!"
"o.k."siad demonskates,and followed the large grateful demon.
"whats your name?"asked demonskates.
"I am Dagaz,a malebolageite servant of Sonellion,Demon of Hatred."
"I am demonskates."
"Good to meet you my leige."
"Whats with the myy leige stuff?"
"As i have said you are a second order demon initiate,that makes you rank higher than us Fallen Angels."
"Are you going to see Satan?"
"Yeah,he'll either approve me or not.im hopeing he does."
"Yes for your sake Demonskates.we have heard rumors of you,but never expected to see you so soon."
"Well ill tell you it was a shock to be here,what rumors are you talking about?"
"There was legend of a great spirit warrior,who would help turn the tide in hells favor against heavan."
"That would be me i suppose?"
"Yes it appears so,the legend is real,we have waited along time for you demonskates!"
"great."
"It is,you will be trained..."
"Yes i know at the infernal academy of war in the infernal university of Cocytus."finnished demonskates.
"Yes.here is the gate to Cocytus.May you fare well demonskates,all of hell anticipayes your success in Cocytus!"
"O.K.Dagas,well,take care,ill see you around."
"You too my leige."
"Altighty then."
Demonskates held up the amulet,opening the door to the 9th level of hell,Cocytus.
He stepped through leaving behind the awed Demon Dagaz in the malebolge.

[krakatoa]

I hope your gonna paste this into a single document and print out or something. :2thumbs:

that would be a good idea, and i still think, you could publish and sell that story. I know Demon that you said no, to another member, i dont remember who, that you would not do that, but i find this story very good. Ch. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

that would be a good idea, and i still think, you could publish and sell that story. I know Demon that you said no, to another member, i dont remember who, that you would not do that, but i find this story very good. Ch. :2thumbs:
Thank you,but its the first thing ive written since high school,and it could use way more research than ive put into this,its comming off the top of my head,i never know what im gonna write until im doing it.It could be better in my opinion.
But im not against being propositioned by a publisher to write.That would be fantastic.there are things about this story that works online,where it may not in a book,like me not describing personal features of charectures,for 1)i dont know how you all look.
For 2) ive done this on purpouse,it leaves it up to the reader to imagine how the charectures look.This story also lacks lots of description reguarding locations,whcih also i leave to the reader,but it also makes the story move a little faster,which is good,but you constantly have to add a new spin to keep it interesting.
this is more practice than anything i have a serious book id like to write latter.

[Smoke]

I told ya... ppl wud love it ha ha...youve been writing alot, it would take me like 3 hours to read this all opefull oyu write some more tonite.. then i can read it at school ye... and if you havent noticed lol laz get me my regular name back.

[krakatoa]

anyway either if it is this book with other charaters, or the same, or else, and more research, or entirely another book in the futur, later on, you have the fibre, you are a writer. It takes work, and you can do it. Ch.

[Demonskates]

anyway either if it is this book with other charaters, or the same, or else, and more research, or entirely another book in the futur, later on, you have the fibre, you are a writer. It takes work, and you can do it. Ch.
Well thank you Krakatoa,very kind of you to say. :2thumbs:

[Smoke]

anyway either if it is this book with other charaters, or the same, or else, and more research, or entirely another book in the futur, later on, you have the fibre, you are a writer. It takes work, and you can do it. Ch.


I agree krakota.............. just keep filling m mind with death and destruction for the time bein, and every one will be ok.

[Demonskates]

OH GOODY! i love corrupting youth!More death,coming up,stay tuned,playin poker tonight,ill write when i return.

[Demonskates]

Demonskates woke up around the end of the first lecture on creative writing,he'd fallen asleep out of shear boredom,and the fact that a girl had been playing with his hair again."School sucks."Said demon under his breath.He found the back of his long hair braided,by one of the girls at the desk behind him.
"ah,Demonskates,i see you"ve decided to join us,have a nice nap?"Asked the teacher.
The class giggled.
"Ah.yeah."
"Well if you were paying attention,you would know that a short story is due tommorow,for class."
"Yeah.o.k. i got a strory in mind,but i'll have to tone it down some so as not to offend anyone."
"Please do me that favor,this is a private christain school after all."Reminded the teacher.
"I wish i could write about that dream i just had."Demonskates thought to himself.
Laura began playing with demonskates hair again,the reason he had been lulled to sleep in the first place.Demonskates loved it when the girls played with his hair,it relaxes him and feels really good.Like a massage puts a person to sleep at times,this had much the same affect on demonskates.He sat smiling,content.It also wasnt bad to have one of the prettiest girls in the school making the small braids in his hair.He'd always had a thing for Laura.Tall,Dark curly hair,down to her perfect rear.A nice chest and blue eyes that could melt a guy.a smile that just kills you.Demon was loving it.
he put his head down on the desk and closed his eyes and drifted back to..............

Demonskates walked into Cocytus.SO this is the ninth level of hell.Lovely.
Cocytus was quiet.it was also dark and cold.Very Odd,thought demon.
He had heared the term when hell freezes over a million times growing up.
He never expected it to be cold anywhere in hell.Cocytus was the exception.
Demon could see the outline of a castle.It was huge,the shadows it produced moved and changed,playing with Demonskates eyes.
"Man if i were Satan id redecorate this joint,post haste."Said demon.
He began climbing the steps to the castle,which looked endless in their numbers.
when he reached the top he held up the amulet to the doors.Nothing.
Demonskates knocked on the giant doors.Nothing.
Demonskates looked at the amulet.It was carved of silver,ancient letters of a language demon knew nothing of.the center had a pentagram which was raised up higher than the rest of the amulet.he touched it and found that it could be depressed like a button.He pressed it in fully and the giant doors opened.
"Like a garage door opener." mutterd demonskates.
He entered a large court yard,with various statues of the Inverted saints.
He crossed the court yard and walked into a doorway,leading down a hall to a set of doors.He pushed them open and saw a room lit by fire in an enormous fire place.
By the fire sat a man.unassuming,his hair neatly combed.He appaered to be warming himself by the fire.
Without looking he told Demonskates to come and sit down accross from him by the fire.
Demon could see his breath.He walked over to the chair.
"Are you Satan?"asked demon flopping down into the chair.
"Yes.I am."
"Ah did this section of hell not pay the heating bill this month?"asked demon with a grin.
Satan looked a demonskates,appearing sad.
"No Demonskates,this is the furthest point in hell away from God.It is cold because it is the farthest from gods light and warmth.
"OH,i see.so you wanted to see me?"
"yes,i have accepted appolyon's patition for your enrollment."
"O.K.when do i start training?"
"In a bit.just sit with me for a while."
"Sure."
"Is it what you expected."asked Satan.
"What,hell?"
"Yes."
"Ah well i wasnt expecting to be here but it matches my thoughts on what hell would look like,with some things that i just never could have dreamed mixed in with it all."
"I see."
"Demonskates.You are Hells last hope.We are going to loose the war with heavan."
"Are you sure,seems like to me youve got earth pretty well wrapped up."
"The demons are not like you,you have spirit,like of an angel,but you are here in hell.You are diffrent than the demons,that is why we rely on your success."
"well ill do my best."
"Than you except this journey?"
"I guess,ive got nothing better to do."
Satan smiled.
"Then i will set things in motion now."
"your name shall be Deccesus.Or Death.Highest of the second order Demons,answerable to me alone,Guardian of hell,and destroyer of the angel beings,the thorn in the side of God almighty,his destroyer.The world will be yours,and all within it,only under me.
Satan placed his hand on Demonskates head.
Demon felt himself and saw himself define becoming substance.His skin changing to the blackish red skin of the second order,smooth skined demons.wings growing out from his shoulder blades,his vision,clearing,and seeing all that was not seen before.He grew to a hight of seven feet.his arms,large and powerful.His eyes,no longer eyes,but flames within the eye sockets.His nails,become razor sharp talons,his face,looked like a skull with the skin streched tight over the skull,his teeth were normal other that the two large fangs that grew where his canine teeth had been.He could hear the thoughts of other demons,and see them in his mind,alarming him.
"Welcome Deccesus."
"Thank you satan,said Deccesus,with his new and powerful demon voice."
He stood looking over his new form.
"Is it to your liking?"asked Satan.
Deccesus laughed and nodded in approval."
"Its more than i could of dreamed for!"
Decessus laughed and ran,jumped,hit pillars breaking them,trying out his new form,and testing its boundries.
"You have the power of 100 men,and with practice,your magic you will find is beyond that,which has been given to even the old order demons who fell with me from heavan."
"I want to begin my training.NOW!"said demonskates,the fire in his eyes concentrating and becoming brighter.

[Smoke]

awwwww dude.... im sorry to say but if its a dream it wont be as fun to read... just my opinion other will still like it no doubt..

[Demonskates]

awwwww dude.... im sorry to say but if its a dream it wont be as fun to read... just my opinion other will still like it no doubt..
I cant give away the story line.but in this story,nothing is as it seems.dont worry,there will be plenty of wonton and gratuitous violence.its not that simple smoke,give me the benifit of the doubt,when i died and went to hell,did you see that coming?
This all plays into the story as a whole,although,i got the reaction i wanted.which means this will work out the way i wanted it to. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

The bell rang,and demonskates woke up with a start.
"you know,Demonskates,you could do so much better if you stayed awake."scolded the teacher.
"Yeah,ive been told that,what was it my biology teacher had said,oh ya,hahaha im commiting acedemic suicide."
"Well its true,pay attention will you?"
"Yeah,yeah,i know."
Demoskates picked up his book bag and slung it over his shoulder.
The kids filing out of the class room.
It was lunch time.Being a senior demonskates had senior privledges,allowing him to leave school,he had two study halls left for the day,and decided his date with the bag of grass in his car was more appealing than sitting through not just one but two study halls.
He pushed a freshman out of his way knocking his books to the floor.
"Hey"said the freshman in anger over his harsh treatment.
"What."said demonskates,looking at the kid with his peicing black eyes.
""watch where your going,dude."
"I was ,now take a hike before shit gets ugly."
The fresheman gathered his books from the floor,and walked away mumbling stuff about seniors.
Demon went to his locker,and threw another lunch that he wouldnt be eating in with all the rest.
"Next person to get this locker will hate me."thought demon,laughing to himself.
he kicked the double doors of the school exit open with a ruckous and walked to his car.
The school year being almost over,it was warm and sunny and demon thought this would be a good day indeed.
He unlocked his car and climbed in,inserting the key and turning it part way so he could run the radio.He poped in a Black Sabbath C.D. and turned it up to an annoying level.He opened the glove box and grabbed his stash.
He put a magazine in his lap so he could break up the buds.
He bagan to work,breaking the buds up fine with his fingers,throwing any seeds he finds to the floor.There must have been a million seeds down there from stoned days past.When he had a nice pile broken up he pulled an E-Z Wider 1 1/2 from the packet a dumped the pile into the paper.In a few seconds he had a massive joint rolled.He was a skilled roller for sure.
He placed the joint in his mouth and sparked it with a bic lighter.The fragrant smoke filled the car.Demonskates loves a good fishbowl.He leaned back and puffed on the joint,the soothing music of Black Sabbath cranking in his A.C. Delco stock speakers.He looked at the amulet hanging from his rear view mirror.
He had bought it at an antique shop,mainly because it had a pentagram on it,but also because it just looked cool.It was old,on an ancient blackened chain.thhe silver amulet tanrnished from age,had many symbols on it,from some language he couldnt understand.
His concentration was broken by Bart knocking on the passenger side window.
Demonkstaes pulled up the lock on the door and let bart in,the fish bowl emptying in a cloud into the parking lot.
"Dude,turn that down man jeez."
Demonskates turned down the radio.
"You gonna share that thing or what."
"Man you are such a mooch,when was the last time you bought a bag?"
said demon passing the half of joint that was left.
"Aw,man,you know how it is,ill get you back."
"Sure bart,like all the other times."
Bart puffed and coughed,laughing,Demonskates was right.
"Ill be getting some tonight,ill give you a joint tommorow."
"NO youll give me five joints tommorow."Said demonskates looking at bart with all seriousness.
"O.K.Fine!Five joints,but thats half my bag man."
"Whatever you owe me man,i didnt make the rules,thats just prpoer stoner edequtte."
"Now get out,im outa here."
"O.K.Demonskates,ill see you tommorow."
"Yeah,yeah,see ya bart."
"Bart exited the car with the rest of the joint."
"Fuckin mooch !"yelled demon behind him.
Bart flipped Demon the bird as he walked away.
Demonslkates peeled out of the parking lot,free for today.

[Cartesiantheater]

....hmmm... what is this new twist?


Demon, I gotta say, that was some sick torturing by the Dr. Man, ants in the bladder? Pretty sick... but creative, none the less. And the ashtrey bit was great. :bondage:

[Demonskates]

Decessus,Held his head,He had spaced out for a moment,remembering things out of his past life.It had come from no where.Decessus walked over and sat in the chair,
It had seemed a little too real.He sat there,a bit unsettled.
"Decessus,are you O.K.?"asked satan leaning down to look in the new demons face.
"Im fine,i just,well remembered somthing from when i had been alive.But it wasnt quite right."
"AH I understand.This is normal Decessus,it is your spirit adjusting to its new body,It happens to all spirits made demons.it will go away eventually and u will only remember hell."
"O.K.so this is just passing?"Asked Decessus.
"Indeed it is,it should last a few days or so."


(Chapter three:...and the Dead shall rise.)
Cartiesian theatre awoke in his bunk,crammed in with hundreds of other inmates at the death Camp Bathomy.
The unfortunates who had died in their sleep were left in the bunks,beginning to decay.Cartesian had been here for an awful three months.
He was considerably thinner than when he had first arrived,before trying to suvive on rations meant to slowly starve you.He climebed out of the bunk and headed for the line of people still haelthy enough to work.He was a corpse bearer.It was his job along with the rest in line to rid the camp of the dead,and haul them to the quarry that was situated next tot the camp.
He had been noticing odd things lately.
No matter how much they filled the quarry,there always seemed to be a large space to put more bodies into the quarry,when he could have swore that there could be no more room.
He would see if the body he marked the day before was still where it should be.
The camp guards did a quick head count.they were three short.The guards checked the bunks in Cartesian's barrack and found the missing three had died in their sleep.
They scanned the bar code numbers on their arms,and instantly the database was updated with their status."Liquidated."
With that the guards brought the men to the rear of the Gas chambers.There the carts would be filled with the dead.
Cartesian helped his team mate who had been paired up with him and began hoisting bodys to thew cart.It was hellish work,and he hated it,but he was alive.
Seeing men women and children in a heap of rotting dead humanity,leaves a mark on the most strong minds.It was horrific.More than once Cartiesian had broken down at the end of the day.Who could balme him.He had seen some of his freinds and family in those piles.It was heart breaking work.He had considered just diving into the barbed wire perimiter fence,which had 100,000 amps of electricity running through it.But he couldnt bring himself to.
They finnished loading the cart and began hauling the cart down the paved path to the quarry.When they got there they bagan throwing the bodys into the pit.
He looked and saw that the body he had carefully marked was not there.The rukous of birds,piocking at the reamins was incredibly loud.
He didnt get it,where the hell were they going?if birds had eaten them,the skeleton would remain.Somthing was indeed odd about it,and he was determined to find out what.Thats when he saw one.One he had marked,standing by others in one of the work feilds(Huge farm feilds for produce for the soldiers.)that was to the right of the paved path to the quarry.
Cartisian had marked two bodys with a "X" on thier bare back,he had scratched it in with a sharp rock he had found on the path.
They were being issued work tools for the feild they would be cultivating.
Plain as day,a large X on his left shoulder blade.Cartesian couldnt beleive what he was seeing.It had to be a mistake,but logic told him that that was indeed the man he had marked.he could recognize the face.he memorized every decernable feature on that man,so he would remember him,and recognize him if he went missing.
"What the fuck is going on here?!" Barked a guard whipping cartesian theatre accross the back with a phlagellum.Cartesian and his team mate grabbed the cart and hauled it back to the gas chambers rear doors for another load.
Cartisian thought they might be using the bodys for food for the dogs on the K-9 barracks in camp.This appeared far worse.somehow,they were brinnging the dead back as slave labor.Making thyis camp even more unbearable than it had been.
Cartesian was begiining to wonder if he was loosing his mind.
When Cartesian was supposed to be in his bunk at night,he and a few other brave souls risked the gas chamber,by sneaking out of the compound to smuggle vegetables from the feilds where he had seen the mans corpse working,so they could compliment their death ration.Its how he and others had managed to last for three months in this hell hole.He decided a look around the feilds may be in order,he would get to the bottom of this.Clearly it was a huge risk.He never dreamed of escaping.It was impossible.Beyond the feilds and in a huge circle around the compound were land mines.They detect body weight,they had been set for the average weight of the inamtes.It would be suicide.Others had tried and failed.Their carcases left as a reminder to those who may risk it.But nothing had stopped Cartesian and others,hell bent on survival from braving the work feilds for food to supplement his awful diet.Tonight,he would see what was happening out there.

[Demonskates]

Protostar and the others held a meeting.They needed a way to defend their camp from the new threat of these beasts.They had thought of burning fires at the entrance,but that would surely reveal their hidden location.They werent sure guns would be enough to bring down the beasts,so they decided on a punji pit.Those beasts could jump a considerable distance,so it would have to be huge.They would dig down 10 feet,and it would cover a 40 foot span,filled with sharpened sticks and bones,to impale the beasts when they fell in.It was the best they could do.They labored for a few days,bringning the earth they had removed and put it to one side of the cave,so the mounds of earth could not be seen by outsiders.
half shoveld the earth with make shift shovels made from wood and the shoulder blades of elk past eaten.The others,mostley female set to work making points on the long wooden limbs,and left over bones of animals they had consumed.when the last punji stick had been made they placed them and inch appart lining the bottom ogf the pit.On the inside of the cave they constructed a fence,so as not to inadvertantly fall into the pit and die on the punji stakes.The only way out now was a small opening that you would have to crawl through near the main cave entrance.
The hole was far to small for the beasts to get through,but plenty of room for a human to squeeze through.
With the new security precasions,they all felt alot more secure in their little commune.
It got its first test later in the evening.Two guards ran and got the slumbering protostar,and awoke her.
A pack of the beasts were climbing the face of the hill that the cave was on.
they stood by the fence armed with M-16's and torches.
the first beast came into veiw.It looked at the people behind the fence,sniffing the air.It bared its teeth,and its eyes squinted in rage.drool dripping from the sides of its enormous mouth.It let out a roar and dived for them.its jaws snapping shut just inches from protostars face.it fell into the pit and was impaled by hundreds of the stakes.It writed in pan,struggling to free its self.They all shot at it witha volly of gunfire,the sound was deafening within the cave.It finally lay motionless.
Its blood,thick and blackish red pouring from the bullet wounds.
At least they knew now that they could be killed.
the other beasts stood at the edge,pacing back and forth,not daring to try to leap at the people on the other side of the pit.They howled and growled in defeat.
They did not leve though.it would be a seige.protostar fired into the faces of the beasts,who howled in pain.they scattered and regrouped sitting at the edge of the pit.They coud go through all their bullets they figured trying to kill them.the other beast they figured,had been so wounded by the sdtakes,that it made the bullets look effective.They had to figure out a sure fire way of killing them.They needed the guns to fight the troopers.for now thay would have to wait it out.
They also figured that if enough of those beasts piled up in the pit,the others could walk accross the corpses to the inside of the cave.They needed a way to get rid of the bodys of the beasts.
they sat around the fire and tried to think of a way.Burning them was out of the question,for obvious reasons.
they decided someone would have to climb carefully into the pit,hack them up,and throw the peices out to the beasts.
They drew lots.They all picked a stone from a jar,one stone was marked in black,so as to decide who would do the deed.
Protostar drew a light colored stone to her releif.
finally a man who had recently joined drew the balck stone from the jar.
He would be the one to climb in,with a rope tied to him so they could pull him back to safety if need be.
They would try tommorow.
Tonight,they would drink home brew,and eat.playing music around the fire,comforting the children who were very upset about the scarey beasts outside thier door.
they cooked up a feast of salted meat,and passed around the brew,telling the children happy stories and laughing,tying to make lite of their situation.

[Cartesiantheater]

Wow. You've even incorporated the living dead! You CAN'T get better than that! ZOMBIES ROCK!

[Demonskates]

LOL.Glad u like it.What good story dosent have some zombies?You were wondering how Libre Dave would fit back into this all?Laz is in for a suprise.100 concentration camps,times 100,000 people a day dying in the gas chambers,over about three months,you do the math ,yeah theres going to be a population spike of undead,unrivaled in the history of zombies.Im not sure if its what you had in mind,but its what my brain said to do,so i cant argue,its holding me hostage,and has threatened me with Erectile Dysfunction if i dont do as it says.

[Demonskates]

Uki traveled by the woods.the main roads were to dangerous to trek,with all the military traffic.He had had a pretty close call earlier and decided that he was all close called out for today.
He knew the general area the resistance was fighting in and listened for the bark of machine guns.
Things were quiet.Too quiet.
He moved through the trees,in the night he looked like a shadow,moving stealthily,from tree to tree.
Uki was hungry and cold,it made him want to link up with the resistance even more,so he could get a hot meal and some much needed sleep.
He didnt even see the hell hounds tracking him.
Uki continued through the woods,carefully.
He bent down and picked up a shell casing.
He was close.
He found bodies of troopers and resistance alike scattered in the woods a few yards further ahead.
It had been a vicious fight apparently.It looks like the resistance had taken a shalacking in exchange.He counted fifteen.
The troopers added up to about seven dead.
Uki searched them for supplys.
He found a couple of Mre's on the body of a trooper,in his russack.
Uki found a spot away from the carnage and sat down.
He used his Katana to open the mre and found a package of beef and beans.
he ate it cold,and it was still good.He wolfed down the food in the packet and looked through the rest of the package to see what else was in there.
He heard a low growl from behind him.He slowly reached for the Katana.
Now in his grip he sat motionless,listening for any sounds that could inform him of where exactly the animal was.He heard it breathing.In one motion Uki roled and drew the Katana up ready for a fight.
He heared another snarl from behind him,a lower deeper growl.Apparently there was two of them.He saw another to his right and two to his left,their shadows slinking twards him.O.K. so there are six, uki thought.
Uki was surrounded.
For once he was scared,and rightly so.
These things are huge,he thought.
(more in a bit)

[krakatoa]

Hi Demonstake, i am on page 3 almost finished, i did'nt have time yesterday to read more, i had to tell you, that on Jericho yesterday night, they showed a little part of next episode, next wenesday, Guess what, Homeland Security is coming in the small town, because they received a message, from their agent it seems for now, saying that there was a treathor, in Jericho. So they showed them arrive, in Jericho, full spin, it seems that it will not be nice for Jericho, or at least for the supposed threator. When i saw that, i said whow, at this moment, your story came into my mind. i will read more tonight, i am leaving for many hours in a few. I am Anxious to know, more of your story. Ch. I should have time to read at least till the middle maybe more of p.4. Ch. I will come back to you, soon. keep up the good work. Ch.

[Stabby Joe]

Hehe, thats some crazy stuff there, nice!

[Demonskates]

Hi Demonstake, i am on page 3 almost finished, i did'nt have time yesterday to read more, i had to tell you, that on Jericho yesterday night, they showed a little part of next episode, next wenesday, Guess what, Homeland Security is coming in the small town, because they received a message, from their agent it seems for now, saying that there was a treathor, in Jericho. So they showed them arrive, in Jericho, full spin, it seems that it will not be nice for Jericho, or at least for the supposed threator. When i saw that, i said whow, at this moment, your story came into my mind. i will read more tonight, i am leaving for many hours in a few. I am Anxious to know, more of your story. Ch. I should have time to read at least till the middle maybe more of p.4. Ch. I will come back to you, soon. keep up the good work. Ch.
Cool,Ive never seen Jericho,so i hope im not sued if they Have some of the same ideas that I may have had.Glad your enjoying it Krakatoa,ill be writting more surely,so there will be plenty for you to catch up on,thanks for reading.

[Demonskates]

Hehe, thats some crazy stuff there, nice!
Gald you like it Stabby Joe,it is some crazy stuff.No one has ever accused me of being sane.Have I ever mentioned that I absolutely love your signature pic?That is some great art work there man.

[Stabby Joe]

Well considering we're on a forum all about doomsday, a thought that makes many cry, and making a joke out of it most of the time, I doubt any of us are totally sane lol!

[Demonskates]

Grendel and smoke ran like hell and didnt stop until they came accross an unattended humvee.The insurgents and Americans were now fighting against The Infernal armies together.it was a life and death struggle.Mostly involving death.
A horrible death at that.The first wave of the Infenal armys swept through the humans with ease.The appocalypse weapons made a distinctive sound when fired.
It souded like a breath except louder.Much louder.The bone spiked projectiles exploding bodies left and right.Those forced to fight by hand,were torn to peices by the Hellish soldiers.
Within minutes the humans lay in peices all over the battle feild.The Infenal armies marching through the dead carcases.
In Terhan,the nuclear devastation was abysmal.The people there who werent incinerated in the initial blast,lay burned and sick by the hundreds of thousands.
Smoke slammed the humvee into gear and Grendel held on tight.
The infernal armies detatchment of artilery began opening up from the rear.
The apocalypse artilery of the six hundred and sixteenth Malebolge division cranking Deaths head shells to the back lines where the americans were mainly based.
Artilery makes a screaming sound when it comes in.The odd thingh about deaths head shells is that they actually do scream.The entire way to their target.They are in a way alive.Homeing in on the fear of the humans with deadly accuracy.
Smoke drove as fast as the hummvee could take them.
They avoided the incomming shells wich were ripping up city block sized craters in the desert.
Every time they heard a shell scream,smoke and grendel followed suit,screaming themselves hoarse in fear of being annhilated.Desert sand and earth covering the humvee when the shells hit.They were getting close.too close.
They didnt even stop at the check point going back into Iraq.They tore through the drop gate and kept right on going.Smoke could see in the rear view mirror,the wall of black that was the infernal armies engulf the American base they had been stationed at and saw some of the feircest fighting they had ever seen,growing distant in the mirror.They would drive to Bagdhad,to the american base located there,so they could warn them what was coming their way.
Clearly communications were out.In fact the whole damn base on the boarder of Iran was out,as seen in the rear view.Now the question was,would the Brass in Bagdhad even beleive thier horrific tale of the slaughter in Iran.It wasnt likely.
They slowed down the pace a bit and looked for anything that could indicate an I.E.D. hidden in the road.One well placed I.E.D. would make swiss cheese out of them and the humvee.They arent armored very well.This one that smoke was driving,at least had sand bags lining the roll pans of the floor,making it hard to reach the pedals accurately,but was reasuring non the less.It could mean the diffrence between death,or legless life.They opted for legless life,the lesser of the two evils.
It was hot.Fucking ugly hot out.112 degrees in the shade,if there had been any.
The humvees dont come equiped with air conditioning,so it was sweltering,even without the doors on the humvee.
Bagdhad was about 200 miles to the west from where they were.
The driving was scetchy at best.Insurgents were taking pot shots every so often.
grendels arm was pretty sore as well,he was in bad need of medical treatment because of the bullet he took to his arm.
That would be the first stop at base.The M.a.s.h. unit.

[Demonskates]

Well considering we're on a forum all about doomsday, a thought that makes many cry, and making a joke out of it most of the time, I doubt any of us are totally sane lol!
LOL.how true.If you can laugh at the apocolypse,than nothing should bug you,LMAO!

[Stabby Joe]

Doomsday is future, future shouldn't bug me as its not happening right now... now lets say I sat on a pin, that will bug me as its happening present, thats my philosophy!

And your story, good old war action. :headbang:

[lycanox]

Doomsday is future, future shouldn't bug me as its not happening right now... now lets say I sat on a pin, that will bug me as its happening present, thats my philosophy!

And your story, good old war action. :headbang:


LoL

Only the biggest problem with futures is that they keep turning into the present.

[Stabby Joe]

True but most of these doomsday scenarios are unexpected so hopefully I won't have to hear about it... if I do then our jobs on this forum our done lol!

[krakatoa]

Cool,Ive never seen Jericho,so i hope im not sued if they Have some of the same ideas that I may have had.Glad your enjoying it Krakatoa,ill be writting more surely,so there will be plenty for you to catch up on,thanks for reading.

dont worry, i would be your witness, telling the court you did it first!!! hihi. Ch. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

dont worry, i would be your witness, telling the court you did it first!!! hihi. Ch. :2thumbs:
LOL.thanks Krakatoa. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

Lazserus walked his way along the path to the Medical block.
He had taken a couple days leave from his dutys at the medical block with Dr.Guderians permission.He was still deeply depressed about Libre Dave's untimely end in the gas chamber.
He hadnt eaten in those days away from his work,so he figured hed go to the medical block mess hall and get some food.
In the concentration camp,you need to keep your health up,or yoou will fade fast.This was less of an issue for Lazserus now,as he has had his rations changed to those of the guards,doctors,and directorates.
He felt guilty eating his fill while others starved.As much as he loathed Dr.Guderian,he was thankful for his kindness twards him.
Lazserus was walking past the loading ramp when he saw somthing,well,odd.
It was a man,loading one of the corpse carts.
Except he looked familiar.
He looked like Libre Dave.
Laz slowly walkeds over for a better look,when Dr.guderian walked up and greeted Lazserus.
"Lazserus my boy!You are up,so good to see you my freind."
"Good morning Dr,guderian.Im on my way to the mess hall."
"Who is that loding the corpse cart?"
"OH,just an inmate Lazserus,Just an inmate."
"He looks alot like....."
"Ah,your freind?"
"Yeah."
"There are many people here,ones who look like others,you know,easy to mistake one for another,they all look alike after a while no?"
"I suppose so."
said Laz,lowering his head.
"Come my boy,lets get us some victuals."
Laz followed Dr.Guderian to the mess hall.
The mess hall was about the nicest mess halls Laz had ever seen,they spared no expense.
He and Dr.Guderian picked and choosed their meals,and the service person behind the stainless line dished it unto their trays.
Laz ate but said nothing.Dr.Guderian,ate in his eccentric manner.
He first layed out his spoon and fork exactly one half of an inch appart.the knife,placed exactly in the middle of his napkin.His Drink placed exactly 2 inches to the right above his tray.
A ritual Laz had seen quite a bit since he was taken off the camp death rations.
Dr.Guderian ate with proper dinner etiquete.
Laz on the other hand shoveld his food in as fast as he could consume it.
Quite a marked contrast from Dr.Guderians almost feminine way of eating.
"Lazserus,watching you wolf food down like that,where are your manners son?,You look like a mother eating its young."
Lazserus smiled.
"Its hard to beleive that you could find anything disgusting."Said laz in jest.
"OH,i see,i do very hard work,not suitible for others,But i can not find things disgusting?"
Lazserus laughed."No i am not saying that at all,i find it interesting that carving people up dosent phase you,but my eating does."
"AH well to each his own." said Dr.Guderian.
"Yes thats more what i was getting at." replied Lazserus.
"HUMPhhh".
Lazserus laughed at the doctors disdain for his eating.
"I still find it rude the way you eat son."Said the doctor setting his fork down,and crossing his arms.Laz found it all quite amusing.
"Finally,ive found somthing you cant even stand."
"Indeed,it makes me ill."Said the doctor,turning his head away from Lazserus who was shoveling in food,in even bigger piles than he has started.
"Excuse me Lazserus,ive lost mt appetite."
Lazserus couldnt keep from laughing.

[Stabby Joe]

Dinner scenes always end up with one with the sick feeling, don't we all? That was great. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

LOL,thanks man,Dinner is always unique with people.Some are so proper,while others are just well............

That coment about the mother eating its young,has actually been said to me before about my eating.So thats where that all came from.

[Demonskates]

Hi all.I may need a couple days off from writting.My father is in the hospital,could be a stroke or heart attack.If things turn out O.K.then ill go on,if not,im gonna need a little bit of time.But i assure you ill continue writing.More later.

[Smoke]

dude i hope he gets better, if hes got demon blood in him then he should be pinching nurses asses and asking for beers and bourbon in no time ha ha he will get better dude its all about positive thinkin wheni t comes to that stuff.

[Demonskates]

dude i hope he gets better, if hes got demon blood in him then he should be pinching nurses asses and asking for beers and bourbon in no time ha ha he will get better dude its all about positive thinkin wheni t comes to that stuff.
LOL,thanks man,if he's any at all like me,he should bounce back.Im pretty positive in general.It just kinda takes you by suprise when its a family member.Usually friday the 13th is a great day for me.For once it took a bad spin.
Hopefully all will be well,and the gore can continue tommorow.If not,it may be a littel bit before i can finnish this story.Im curious to see how it will end myself,my brain wont give me any clues.Its a selfish bastard like that.

[krakatoa]

Hi all.I may need a couple days off from writting.My father is in the hospital,could be a stroke or heart attack.If things turn out O.K.then ill go on,if not,im gonna need a little bit of time.But i assure you ill continue writing.More later.

I wish the best for your dad, i hope everything will turn out ok. See you soon. Ch.

[Demonskates]

I wish the best for your dad, i hope everything will turn out ok. See you soon. Ch.
Thanks,Krakatoa,He's doing a bit better and he'll spend a couple of nights over at the hospital,hopefully all will be good.Not very sleepy so...................................

[Demonskates]

Uki impaled the first beast to lunge at him.He pulled the blade back spining the blade back accross his fore arm,and stabed the beast behind him.Both fell to the ground with a torrent of blackish red blood spurting from their open wounds.
The beast on the right closed in while the other two on the left circled behind him.
He swung the Katana decapitating the beast who had inched its way forward from the right,The blade ringing in a musical tone.Its warm sticky blood sraying on uki.still swinging the blade on the way around he faced the other two beasts.Uki spun the blade back accross his fore arm and then stabbed downward pining the beasts head to the ground,with his other hand he pulled out a Desert eagle, .50 cal. hand gun and blew the other beast's head off.
Uki had apparently decided that he should mabey carry at least somthing in the form of a fire arm.
Uki was a bloody,gorey mess,and he hadnt even gotten hurt.
He looked at the hand gun.
He smiled.
"Damn."
Uki was amazed with its power.It had sounded like a connon firing.
Uki looked and had seen that the bullest after blowing the beasts head of had gone through two large trees after.
It was probably still going, uki thought.
he tucked it into his belt and felt secure knowing the Israeli made hand cannon was available.
"Glad these homeland security bastards carry good shit.Well,at least the dead ones."mumbled uki to himself.
What in the FUCK ,were those things!"Uki exclaimed remembering how he had just been attacked by shit he had never ,ever, seen before.
They were repulsing.He got a good look at the hell hounds before moving on,trying to link up with the rest of the resistance.
Uki decided sleep was probably best if he wanted to be of any use.
He found two large trees that were close together.He climebed up into the tree reaching the canopy that covers the woods.
he stoped on a branch and pulled a bag from his pack.
He unrolled a sleeping hammock.(Very cool,it is all enclosed and has bug netting,its camoflage and great for keeping out of site.)
He tied one end to the tree and worked over to the other tree on a limb.
He tied the other end of the hammock to the other tree.
He unziped the enclosed hamock and climbed in.
From the ground you would never see him,the leaves and branches hiding him in its natural foliage.He pulled his pack off and layed it down as a pillow.His Katana he layed by his side lengthwise.He pulled the left over Mre out and snaked on the crackers and desert.He wiped himself off with an extra shirt and the pulled up his blankets around him.it was colder at night,especially when blood soaked.
He let the creaking of the trees and their swaying motions lull him to sleep.
He slept deep.this past night had been a bastard.
Uki awoke in the morning.His hammock had warmed up in the sunlight.
He was way to warm and cozy to think about moving any time soon.
Its like sleeping in a warm cacoon.
He peered down to the ground below to see if evrything was as he left it.
It appeared to be.
He put on his pack and Katana,and climbed out.He untied the hamock putting it back in the pack and climbed down to the ground.
"What the fuck do i have the pleasure of dealing with today?"asked uki to whatever thing he may be facing.
Nothing answered so he hiked for a couple miles and made it to the base camp of the resistance.
His first priority was to warn them about the beasts he had encountered,but seeing a lot of warm breakfast being dished out took precedence.
He grabbed a plate from his pack a got in line mingling with the resistance.
They all sat down and ate.Life was good for a moment.
Uki filled them in on what he had seen and killed and found out that the resistance had been encountering them too, sporadically.Always not far from homeland security patrols.there had to be a connection.
They would figure it out soon enough.They sat and talked and ate until they were full and cleaned their gear.
They would go out on ambush and see if they couldnt get more intel on the beasts.

[Stabby Joe]

"Life was good for a moment."

Considering the nature of the story, I'm guessing 1 10th of a second right?

[Cornish Maid]

I hope your dad pulls through alright.

I lost my dad when he was 58 from a heart attack.

Bloody shock or what.

[Jupiter]

Yes, good luck to him. My uncle had a stroke about 5 years ago, he was debilitated for a couple of months, now he's just about completely back to normal and full of life. After recovery, watching one's diet can be very useful I think, for example taking 'LoSalt' - a Potassium Chloride/less Sodium Chloride mixture (Potassium salt itself has good properties). I talk this kind of salt anyway, although I am healthy. Plus, my Dad took my uncle (his brother) out on a boat trip; the fresh air, adventure and fun seemed to do my uncle a world of good.

[Jupiter]

Back to topic.. Really good reading (I haven't read all of it). As Skynet12 said it would be good if you could put it all into one document, eg. a typeset PDF file. Meantime, it's fun even if just like this.

[Stabby Joe]

Wouldn't be hard, just a matter of copy and paste really... but yeah that would be cool!

[Demonskates]

"Life was good for a moment."

Considering the nature of the story, I'm guessing 1 10th of a second right?
At least as long as it took to wolf down a warm plate of breakfast anyway,lol.
Its funny,the little things you do that will take your mind of the hellish things we sometimes go through,that make you say."Hell,this aint to bad,i can do this."

[Demonskates]

I hope your dad pulls through alright.

I lost my dad when he was 58 from a heart attack.

Bloody shock or what.
Im very sorry to hear that Cornish Maid.My dad is around that age.
he seems to be doing better now.Thanks for the well wishes.

[Demonskates]

Yes, good luck to him. My uncle had a stroke about 5 years ago, he was debilitated for a couple of months, now he's just about completely back to normal and full of life. After recovery, watching one's diet can be very useful I think, for example taking 'LoSalt' - a Potassium Chloride/less Sodium Chloride mixture (Potassium salt itself has good properties). I talk this kind of salt anyway, although I am healthy. Plus, my Dad took my uncle (his brother) out on a boat trip; the fresh air, adventure and fun seemed to do my uncle a world of good.
Thanks Jupiter,I will keep those things in mind.
As far as putting this all in one document,i may just do that,but i dig the fact people can post between writing,it's so much more interactive than a book,and that is an aspect i really dig about doing this online.
Glad your enjoying it.I know I am. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

(Picture this dialogue in Uncle Jessy's voice from the dukes of hazzard.He is our guest Narrator.)
So i bet your thinking things are looking pretty bad for the boys.Well it seems like things are about to get far worse.
America is where the Hells army was getting their orders from.America was already in hells grasp long before any of this nightmare began.
England was the staging point for the army's in Eroupe,and the middle east was the staging point for that side of the globe.
Well it seems things are about to turn real ugly in Hazzard county.....

(Demonskates)Ah uncle jessy,thats eroupe,not Hazzard County.

AH,right,eroupe County is in for a real bad suprise....

(Demonskates)Eroupe isnt a county.

Hey,are you narrating this?
(Demonskates)No you are but you keep mixing up the dukes of hazzard with my story.

Well.i suppose you can do this better?

(Demonskates)Ah,no thats why i asked you to narrate.

Well than son let me do my job,and quit interupting me dang it!

(Demonskates)Right,my bad.

Can i git on with this now?

(Demonskates)Yes,please im sorry.

Anyway,things are about to git real ugly in Eroupe.

(Demonskates)Great thank you uncle jessy.

Damned Kids,think they know everything,always interuptin,disrespectin their elders why i ought to....

(Demonskates)Uncle jessy,the story is about to start again could you.....

I SEE! IT's cuz im old,or its cuz your a yankee,aint cha,yeah i can see it,your one of tham danged mamby pamby blue bloods ,well let me tell you somting you hippie bastard........

(Demonskates)Is that really neccesary jessy?

Come here you little Grant loving son of a bitch ill tan your yeller yankee hide...

(Demonskates)OW!Hey NO! Put that down,your being....AHH!!Quit it you son of a.....

Ill Squeeze your hippie brains out of your head yeller bellie....

(Demonskates)Thats it,you want some of this you old goat!....Give me that.....
Ahhh,Ow !damn it you red neck prick!There,now just sit down and control your self.

Not until you give me my cane back.

(Demonskates)Will you behave?

I recon i will.

(Demonskates)You promise?

Alright now just give me that cane there son.

(Demonskates) O.K.Here you go,cool?o.K.?

Why ill kill you you pole cat,THE SOUTH SHALL RIZE AGAIN!!!!where are my nephews,they'll beat your hide too!

(Demonskates)OW!!!Ouch,son of a..... Give me that you crazy bastard,stop hitting me!

YAAAAAAHAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! HA! NOT SO TOUGH NOW ARE YE!

[Demonskates]

Logan Osborn managed to get out of england away from the death they were raining down there.He wasnt sure where to go,but after a while decided that he had some freinds in Holland.He would try and meet up with resistance there.
That part of eroupe at least wasnt being mobbed by the Infernal armys.Yet.
It was a good a plan as any he figured.He needed to stash the canoe he had swiped.
The english channel was a bitch to traverse with a canoe.But he mannaged after some time.In france he figured he could catch a rail to holland,if they were still up and running.
(More later)

[krakatoa]

Dinner scenes always end up with one with the sick feeling, don't we all? That was great. :2thumbs:

hhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, i dont want to go to the next chapter to fast, it makes me a little on edge!!!

ok then i will plundge into it. hihi. Chant. :yikes:

[Demonskates]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, i dont want to go to the next chapter to fast, it makes me a little on edge!!!

ok then i will plundge into it. hihi. Chant. :yikes:
LOL.its not for the faint of heart,lol.i think you can make it through in one peice though.

[Stabby Joe]

Not for the faint of heart? Bah, so is this site!

[Demonskates]

Not for the faint of heart? Bah, so is this site!
This is true.This site i imagine ,can keep people from sleeping at times.

[Stabby Joe]

Really? I can't sleep without checking messages, regardless of what they say!

[uki]

hey demon... is the references to meth in anyway's connected to your sleepless nights of pure creativity? keep up the good work... it's kind of like red dawn, braveheart, and the patriot all rolled up into an episode of the twilight zone...
:schizo:

[Demonskates]

hey demon... is the references to meth in anyway's connected to your sleepless nights of pure creativity? keep up the good work... it's kind of like red dawn, braveheart, and the patriot all rolled up into an episode of the twilight zone...
:schizo:
I can be sure and say that the referances to crystal meth in no way bear any meaning to my life.It purely came up because i know ORIGINALY,the use of crystal meth was used in the Wermacht,or german army.they used it to "stimulate the troops,and to keep them alert."
Now truley,that stuff keeps u up for days.paranoid about everything in the universe.In this story............................................. ......
I used it to counter the effects of the chemtrail sedatives,because it it the best known apmphetimine there is.It will jump your heart up 10 fold.
It kills in the long run,so if any of u youngins are readin' keep the fuck away from crystal meth,It has ruined the south,and is makin its way east as we speak.It is hell and you want nothing to do with it.It was used purely as a fictional hypothetical in this story.

[Demonskates]

Uki thanks,because i realized i was glorifying drugs,bad shit too when i should be encouraging people, escpecially young impresionable minds to keep clear away from the bullshit that ruined me in my teen years.I am not a perfect being,and what i choose,is not what is cool or right.So please take this all as a fictional form.

Any way,
Logan Osborne figured point Le Harve was as good as any to land in.
France was for all intents and purposes deserted,never ones to stand up for them selfs,they had deserted.
He canoed accross the english channel much on the same route the Americans and British had nearly 90 years ago in world war 2.
he landed on the beach in point Le Harve,about three kilometers away from where the Americans had landed in Normndy on D-day.
I t was the secondary beach front the allies established after June sixth,1942.
Where they had pushed the Krauts back to Berlin in their victorious spearhead.
Logan couldnt feel but that he had a long impossible mission before him,much like his ancestors had felt 90 years before him.He made land on the beach and was releived to leave that aluminium peice of death trap behind.
He had almost flipped the boat 3 times in the channel.
He enterd the town and saw that the streets were desrted.
He figured that he may come accross somthing he could possibly drive rather than walk.
he had freinds in Holland,who were resistance fighters.
he had no better plans.now he was alone.
If he made his way to Holland,he could be part of a network,stilll uneffected by the Infernal armys presence in Eroupe.
Riding rail was out because the town was abandoned.
He took what he needed from unattended stores and found a BMW tour bike.With nobody attending the gas pumps,Logan was free to fill the stolen bike,and fill
two Jerry cans,that were easily attached to the bike with bungee cords.
He had enough fuel to go 600 kilometeres with out refueling.
he had cut the wires going to the ignition,splicing them together so he could run the tour bike without the key.
he had nothing but the open roads of Eroupe to stop him.
Or armed millitary,or the infernal armies.
He worried little over any of it.
For now he was alive.
And lucky to be so.
He motored down the roads on the BMW touring Motor bike and loved every second of it.He was traveling faster than most resistance fighters ever got the chance for in Eroupe.
He was a lucky bloke for sure.
Logan had his M-16 ready,for any shit up the road that decided to be a cunt and gave the gas a tweek around every corner.
He was loving the thrill of being on a motor bike at 100 kilometers per hour,and no law chasing him with the blues going.
Speed was claerly no longer a factor in driving in france.
It was entertaining for sure.the thrill of speeding into turns on a bike,the power of the engine,the wind in his face,he shold at least have worn a helmet,but no one was preventing him from not wearing one.
he would pilfer and plunder his way through all of eroupe,till he reached Holland.
One of the most beuatiful of all countrys in Eroupe proper.

[Demonskates]

By the way Uki,im glad your digging it.I only hope i am giving you and your martial arts skills justice in this story. :2thumbs:

[Protostar]

Keep up the good work demon! It gets better all the time. Hope your dad is
doing better. ps/ loved the sleeping hammock thing. Very creative! <now where do I get one?> hehe.

[Demonskates]

Keep up the good work demon! It gets better all the time. Hope your dad is
doing better. ps/ loved the sleeping hammock thing. Very creative! <now where do I get one?> hehe.
They actually exsist.Check my post below for the link,for some odd reson this double posted.the link for a survival hammock is below.

[Demonskates]

Keep up the good work demon! It gets better all the time. Hope your dad is
doing better. ps/ loved the sleeping hammock thing. Very creative! <now where do I get one?> hehe.
They actually exsist.They are so cool,if no trees are around,you can peg it to the ground like a tent.Just enough room for one person.They were designed to keep you off the jungle floor ect,away from animals,ect.Ill look online and find a site that has one so u can check it out.
I read about them first in a Viet nam book.Special forces used them.They are small and dont weigh much,some boy scout troops are out fitted with them now.Great if you like to hike.Very practicle survival gear.
Found this one out of a british catalog but if you type survival hammock in the search function,their are U.S. makers and wholesalers for them.

http://www.whipperleys.co.uk/acatalog/survival_gear_hennessy_hammocks.html

[loganosborne]

Im still lovin it Demon :2thumbs: . I enjoy reading every post.

[Demonskates]

Im still lovin it Demon :2thumbs: . I enjoy reading every post.
Thanks man.Think we'll see how Demonskates is making out at the Infernal university in Cocytus next. :2thumbs:

[Demonskates]

The war academy in the Infernal university was huge.It had every weapon ever produced by human,angel and demon hands since the dawn of time and warfare.
From the stone that Cain killed abel with,to the apocalypse weopons of the infernal armys.
Deccesus was in heavan.(well actually hell,but you know what i mean)
He walked over and picked up a rifle,an apocalypse weapon,new to the infernal armys.
The handle instantly wraped around his hand,securing itself to Deccesus.
Deccesus was shocked and startled by it,shaking his hand trying to get it off of him.
Satan laughed.
"Deccesus,its o.k. they were made like that.Its black magic,keeping it attached to you."
Deccesus looked at it in awe.the gun opened its eye and peered back at Deccesus.
It was very unsettling.
"this thing is looking at me!"
"Well yes,of course.it is a living thing."
"Damn!How do i fire it,it has no trigger."
"Aim at the back wall,and with your mind,picture shooting the target."
Deccesus aimed the gun at the back wall and visualized the target being torn to shreds.
The gun fired,making a very deep breathing sound,like a long out ward breath and the bone projectiles barbed with spikes tore the target to shreds just how he had seen it in his mind.
"HOLY SHIT!Thats just what i saw in my mind!"
"Hahahahaa,yes it does exactly what you envision it to.It is linked to your mind once it attaches it self to you,like a parasite.It feeds off of your hatred."
"Amazing."
"Can i keep this one?!"
"Of course Deccesus.All these wepons are at your disposal."
Decessus looked at two targets hidden by pillars.
He envisoned the bullets streaming around the pillars tearing the targets behind them to peices.
The gun reacted and did exactly what he saw in his mind.
Deccesus was in love with this odd fire arm.It was nothing less than amazing.
"How do i get it to let go?"
"Think it."Replied Satan.
Deccesus thought of the gun letting go and it did.
he imagined it clinging to his back,and placed the gun behind him,and it attached itself to him.
"No sling needed."Said deccesus with a grin.
"HAHA,yes,you learn quick.That gun will be your best freind.Your true commrad at arms."
"Too fucking cool."
He walked over to one of the towering apocalypse artilery peices.
He ran his hand over its smooth surface.
"Damn,these are huge!"
"Yes Deccesus.They are our new artilery line.They fire those Deaths head shells which will lock on to the enemys fear and guide itself in to the target.The shells are alive as well."
"Amazing."
"How would you like to do some live target shooting?"asked Satan.
"Id love it!"
Two Angels captured earlier in the week by the infernal secret police were forced into the room.They had been caught and charged as spies.
Deccesus held his hand behind him and the gun attacheed itself to his hand.
The angels picked up swords and began to close in on Decessus.
"Deccesus,you have to kill them,if not,they will surely kill you."
Without hessistation Deccesus imagined the two angels heads being torn of by the bullets,and instantly the room was splattered with their blood.The corpses dropping to the floor with a thud.
Deccessus squinted his eyes,the flames concentrating and turning brighter within his eye sockets.
"O.K.Who's next?

[Stabby Joe]

Death! Death! Death! Yaaaaaaaaaaaay!

Good part there.

[krakatoa]

This is true.This site i imagine ,can keep people from sleeping at times.

This is very hard for me, to imagine somebody, loosing sleep over AO, and also the news, but then again, probably people go to AO, because of that, it could be, frightning , entertaning, and informative. Ch. :2thumbs: :schizo:

[Demonskates]

This is very hard for me, to imagine somebody, loosing sleep over AO, and also the news, but then again, probably people go to AO, because of that, it could be, frightning , entertaning, and informative. Ch. :2thumbs: :schizo:
What are you afraid of krakatoa?Is there somthing u loose sleep over?
some folks just need a reason to be insomniacs such as myself.
I sleep little.But whAT KEEPSyou awake at night?
Every body fears somthing.Things that make you not sleep at times.

[Demonskates]

Smoke and Grendel layed in a tattered bloody heap in the desert.
The humvee they were driving had been hit by and rpg,on the road to bagdhad.
The insurgents left them for dead.
Smoke coudnt feel his legs.His vision was blurry,and every ounce of feeling he still had,consisted of excrutiating pain.
Grendel was uncouncious but breathing.His shoulder was broken,and his ribs were smashed up pretty bad on his left side.
They both had many small wounds where shrapenel had entered their soft flesh in the explosion.
Smoke couldnt see Grendel,and tried to call out to him.Smokes legs were still attached he noticed,which he thought was good.But he couldnt move them,or feel them.
He dragged himself up to the wrecked hulk of the Humvee and leaned against it.
Seeing the tattered vehicle made him realize just how lucky he was to be alive.
Smoke was looking for the first aid kit in the humvee.
He couldnt see it.
he felt around with his hands and his fingers passed over a box.He manipulated the box up on its side and pulled it from the vehicle.
He opened the first aid kit and found three morphine syringes.
He pulled the cap off of the syringe exposing the shrp needle point and stabbed it into his leg,depressing the plunger.
He felt the warm fluid rushing into his muscle.He had atleast a little feeling he realized.
in a few seconds he felt the warm and fuzzy feeling of the morphine wave over him.
IN shock,and now delerious on morphine smoke tried to get to his feet.
his legs wouldnt support him.They were broken.Shattered in a few places on both legs.
He dragged himself around the Humvee wreckage and saw grendel,unconcious but breathing.
He pulled himslef up to Grendel and began tending his wounds.
Grendel began to come to.
Grendel moaned in agony as smoke patched up his battered freind.
He gave Grendel a morphine injection,and grendel became more comfortable in a few moments.
"What the fuck happened Smoke?"
"Easy bro,i think we got hit by an rpg.The humvee is wrecked,were lucky to be alive."
"Great."Said Grendel,a little woozy from the morphine.
"Were gonna die out here smoke.Its 112 degrees now,but its gonna drop below 30 degrees tonight.well freeze to death."
"Dont worry Grendel,were gonna get out of here."
"Im glad your so optmistic."
Smoke and grendel layed silent for a while.they were physically exhausted,thier bodys trying to mend.
Smoke gulped some water from his canteen and passed it grendel,who gratefuly took the canteen and took a long gulp.
They could hear very faintly in the ditance the battle still raging between the infernal armys and their commrads.
"What in the fuck were those things back there?"
"They looked like sodiers from hell or some shit.Demons mabey."
"UH,Yeah i guess.whatever they are they got way better weapons than we do."
Smoke ran his fingers through his hair,thinking of the carnage they witnessed in Iran.
"So is this Armageddon do you think?"
"Thats as good a theory as any smoke."

[Stabby Joe]

I said it once (no wait 5 times) and I'll say it again, nice plot so far...

[Demonskates]

I said it once (no wait 5 times) and I'll say it again, nice plot so far...
Thanks man.I appreciate all the kind words.Im having fun doing this too.

[Demonskates]

Cartesian theatre awoke and got to his feet.Tonight he was gonna see what was going on in the work feilds.
He snuck to the door and carefully peered outside the barrack,to see where the guards were positioned.He timed his movements carefully,so as to avoid the sweeping search lights on the guard towers.
He ran to the next barrack over and slid into the darkness under the barrack.
He crawled from one to the next all the way down the line of the barracks.
He entered a hole under the last one that would bring him under the electric barbed wire perimeter fences.
on the other side he would climb out of the spider hole and work his way accross the work feild.
(More in a bit,sorry so short)

[Smoke]

da da da daaa daaaaaaaaaaa IM LOVIN IT........................

[Cartesiantheater]

Keep it up demon...

This is just too damn cool... here we are a'postin' away on AO... and then there's a fictional stroy about us and Armegeddon! Too cool, man... how many other forums had someone with the nerve to write a story about it's posters? Ha! Kickass...

[Demonskates]

[QUOTE=Cartesiantheater]Keep it up demon...

This is just too damn cool... here we are a'postin' away on AO... and then there's a fictional stroy about us and Armegeddon! Too cool, man... how many other forums had someone with the nerve to write a story about it's posters? Ha! Kickass...[/QUOTE
Thanks man.Gald your digging it.

[Demonskates]

Cartesian theatre crept his way through the work feild to the far end.
He didnt see anything until he reached a section of the feild at the far end.He saw light poking through some well placed trees.It was a warehouse.Pretty big in size,hidden behind the tree line.
He crept along the wall to where he saw some crates stacked,just under one of the windows.
He climbed the crates and peered through the window,and what he saw in side,shook him to his very core.
Tied to a wooden cross,or crucifix was a giant being.It looked human but was clearly not.It had giant white feathered wings coming from where your shoulder blades would be.He had a certain kind of glow to him.There appered to be surgical tubing,and I.V. lines running from the winged creatures arms.The I.V. and hoses ran to a machine.It had all kinds of pumps,and gauges,lights and indicators.
To his horror he saw, also tied to the machine was a corpse.
The man operating the machine was carefully studying the gauges.The blood of the winged creature was being transfused to the corpse,who began to twitch,Slowly at first,then his muscles began to spasim.Suddenly the corpses eyes opened and the corpse took in a deep gasping breath of air,its chest rising until the lungs were full.
It exhaled and vomited blackened bile from its stomach.
The man operating the machine stoped the blood flow from the creature to the corpse and quickly administered a shot of some kind to the newly revived corpse.
It was unstraped and brought out of veiw,probably to a room out back.
In a moment the technician returned with another corpse on a cart.
He grabbed a pail from a trash barrel with saw dust in it and threw it down over the corpses vomit.
He washed his hands at a sink and bagan hooking up the next corpse to the machine.
A voice called from out of sight somewhere and asked if they needed a new angel yet.
The technician said there was enough blood left in this one for three more corpses.
Cartesian couldnt help but shudder."Angels?" he thought."is that what he said?!"
Corpses being brought back from the dead.Cartesian ran away as fast as his legs would carry him.
He didnt stop until he climbed into the spider hole and crawled back through the tunnel.
His mind was racing.This was serious.What he just saw negates everthing he had grown to accept as truth.It was perception shattering stuff.The stuff of nightmares.
Cartesian really thought he would loose his mind this time.In fact he thought he already had.
When he reached the end of the tunnel he poked his head up and carefully peered across the court yard.
A gun barrel was placed to his temple just as the search light focused on him.
For a split second he heard a loud ear shattering bang,and felt pain,tremendous pain.The last thing Cartesian theater saw was the grin of the guard holding the gun that had killed him.Smoke slowly pouring from the barrel.After that his vision slowly faded to black.

Cartesian theatre awoke on a gurny,gasping for breath.He then proceded to vomit blackish bile to the floor.A technition administered a shot of some kind.The I.V.s were removed from his arms and he was lead to a room out back with hundreds of the living dead,sitting in front of screens with head phones on.They were being programed.The corpses only had the mental capacity to follow the vague images and sounds coming through the screens and head phones.They were essentialy zombies.In death,their brains lost t vital oxegen,and it destroyed a large part of the brain cells within.
The troopers with help from demon physicians were taught how to transfer blood and life,to a corpse,and reanimate the dead.For this they needed Angels.Their blood has the very breath of god within its cells.Very potent stuff.The demons provide the angels,and the troopers gained formidable labor that does exactly as it is programed too.In return,those killed in the gas chambers,were killed cerimoniously as sacrafices,which fueled the black magic of the under world.It was a mutual and beneficial arrangement for both sides.
Cartesian had no concious thought.His brain (Or what was left of it)had enough capacity to run his vital organs.He stood and drooled until he was placed in front of a screen.Headphones placed over his ears.He sat blank and expresionless,drooling.They reset the video,and it began his indoctrination and brainwashing sequence.It taught him basic language.It taught him that he was a tool of hell.He was taught to always obey demons and human troopers.He was taught that he was expendible.Over and over.
His blank eyes staring at the screen.Cartesian had found out what was out there all right.He got more than what he had bargained for.Now he was one,in 10,000 legions of the undead.

[krakatoa]

What are you afraid of krakatoa?Is there somthing u loose sleep over?
some folks just need a reason to be insomniacs such as myself.
I sleep little.But whAT KEEPSyou awake at night?
Every body fears somthing.Things that make you not sleep at times.

Sorry maybe i did'nt express myself clearly. The only thing i can say for myself, what keeps me from sleeping sometimes, Money issue, and my back, pain.
What i was saying was, even if we talks about serious and frightning, subjects, for now, i dont loose sleep over these posts, when and if some of it happen. then, it will be another story, about the sleep.
I hope you anderstand what i mean. Ch. :2thumbs:

Oh i am about to read the last post you made for the book. i will come back to you on this. tks for that story Demon very good. very intertaning, very scary.
If it was true, i would loose sleep over it, for sure. ch. :amaz:

[Demonskates]

Sorry maybe i did'nt express myself clearly. The only thing i can say for myself, what keeps me from sleeping sometimes, Money issue, and my back, pain.
What i was saying was, even if we talks about serious and frightning, subjects, for now, i dont loose sleep over these posts, when and if some of it happen. then, it will be another story, about the sleep.
I hope you anderstand what i mean. Ch. :2thumbs:

Oh i am about to read the last post you made for the book. i will come back to you on this. tks for that story Demon very good. very intertaning, very scary.
If it was true, i would loose sleep over it, for sure. ch. :amaz:
I understand.some people really get worked up over things.If anything i wrote about in the story turned out to be real,id never sleep again,lol.I know all about the back pain issue,i had surgery on my back 2 years ago,im still in alot of pain.
There are certain things i get thinking about that wont let me sleep at times.
I was just curious what does that to you.

[krakatoa]

Now i have read the last post, your story is really good, it is still my kind of book. Everything that i like or frighting me, is there. It is really easy, to picture all of it, in my head, as all good books, that would be, an awsome movie.I know it is not over, keep up the really good work. I really like AO. and i really like your writing. Ch.

Oh and i remember about your back pain, i knew you would anderstand, but yes now, what keeps me up, is back pain, and money, and culpability, when i know i have to cancel something, because of my back. ok now. i let you go. see you on the forum. Good Writer. hihi. Ch. :2thumbs:

[Stabby Joe]

Getting good.

Hmmm, it seems the characters may end up killing eachother at this rate, probably not though for obvious reasons... but atleast some others are getting hit hard lol!

Some others once said that if it were doomsday, we'd gather up go crazy on a truck like the rest were zombies... :headbang:

[Cartesiantheater]

First of all, I gotta give you props for the inventive way that zombies are formed in your story. I don't think Angel blood has ever been used before.

Second, I must say, I never thought I'd end up as the undead... (well, actually, I had a dream once where I was, but I eventually was able to gain conciousness as I became a demon... but that's a tangent.)

Too cool, again...
the mystery of the zombies is coming to light...

Now I must go attend to my funeral in the AO body count thread...

[Demonskates]

Thanks man.Everyone has done zombies, so i tried a diffrent idea as to where they come from.it ties in with the whole hell on earth scenario.You said you dig zombies so i figured hell,ill make you one,lol.

[krakatoa]

Finally Demonskate, on Jericho, the homeland security, where only on the computers screens, tv, and phone, after they restored the electricity (Gov'nt). So no copyright or anything like that hihi. Ch.

[uki]

i can't wait for the ork to manifest in this story... and then of course the fairy, the drunk grim reaper, and the spinning mushroom guy. oh, and don't forget that FBI-like stellar.

[Smoke]

Thanks man.Everyone has done zombies, so i tried a diffrent idea as to where they come from.it ties in with the whole hell on earth scenario.You said you dig zombies so i figured hell,ill make you one,lol.


dude the only thing iwas ever scaed if was zombies... i used to have nightmares evrynight... and some one should make a flash cartoon of this it would be bad ass :)

[Stabby Joe]

Zombies seem as a conventional but effective way of juicing up a doomsday esc story.

[Demonskates]

O.K.,Uki's post gave me an idea,i have mentioned how i dig people posting inbetween
bits of story because it makes this far more interactive for the readers and myself.
So im gonna do requests.So for today,if u got an idea,post it then we will take a poll,and you all can vote on what comes next based on your ideas.The option with the most votes gets written in.
This should be interesting and fun.
Tommorow,we will do the poll,ANd it will be my job to find a way to work the most voted option into the plot.Just think of whatever scares the crap out of you.
O.K.....Ready........set........GO!

[Demonskates]

In the meantime...............

God sat among his war cabinet.There were strategists,generals,weapons advisors,
and Angels all arguing about the current situation on earth,and what that means to those humans who still had faith in God.
God sat upon a humble throne,not garish or golden,just a basic throne denoting his status.God was never for showboating his authority.
"We have to act now,the rules have changed,Satan may be bound to a certain degree,but he's finding to many loopholes."
"He's already broken the arms treaty,by killing humans!!"
"I say we crush hell now before its to late,our weapons are inferior."
Hear,hear,just look at the middle east said a general,pointing to a display ,"Its all but fallen into Satans Grasp."
God rolled his eyes listening to the cacophony of excited argument.
"I say we rapture those who are left,and just destroy earth,before its too late!"
"Gentlmen."Said Jesus as he took up his seat next to god.
"We all know my fathers promise to the humnans to not destroy the earth again.So lets not be silly.Besides,i have implemented an idea,one that may suprise some of you,I have placed an operative in hell."
The generals and tactitions,angels,all stood in silence.
"the thing of it is,that the operative,dosent know i have picked him."
"Who is this,this operative you speak of Jesus,why were we not informed."
"He is a unique spirit.He was a human who fought in the resistance.he was killed and made demon,by satan himslef.His name is Deccesus."
"Decessus!The one who killed two angel spies for sport?!!And he has no idea that you have chosen him?!!How is he to be an operative on the inside of hell,while he goes about killing our kind?!!Have you gone mad?!!Screamed a general.
Jesus raised his hand silencing the infuriated general.
"First of all,he was coerced to become a demon in the first place.Second,i happen to know that he is thinking of killing Satan anyway.Third,what better way to over throw hell,than with one of their own.He was made a second order demon!With more power than the old order demons who made the fall from heavan!"
The generals gasped.
"You understand the implications of this do you not gentlemen?"
They did.Deccesus was the strongest spirit in the spirit world,other than God and jesus,and as powerful as Satan,although he would need to complete his training,in order to use the full scope of his abilitys.
"He could,decide to overthrow Satan,but then what?"Asked an angel advisor.
"Well two things could happen.He could be working in gods name and we dont know it,or he could become the next ruler of hell.At which point we could be in trouble here."
"What makes you so sure he would kill Satan."
"During certain times of day,as you all know,hells thought protection sphere flucuates in power,thus enableing us to listen in on thoughts of certain key elements within hell.We intercepted a thought from Decessus,and it is clear,he intends to destroy Satan,but what we do not know,is what is next course of action will be."
"So you are suggesting we wait and see what he is up too before we decide to commit to ground forces being deployed?"
"Precisely."
"This is insane,every day hell gets stronger,already we are having trouble,it can only get worse.!!!"Yelled a general,clearly distraught.
"I only ask one month.If i am wrong,then you can deploy the might of heavan,and do as you will."
After some thought the cabinet agreed.

[loganosborne]

I love that last bit Demon thats brilliant. You know how God's seems to be everyones favourite fictional character :D .

Just to let people know I am joking since there has been a lot of misunderstandings recently.

[Demonskates]

I love that last bit Demon thats brilliant. You know how God's seems to be everyones favourite fictional character :D .

Just to let people know I am joking since there has been a lot of misunderstandings recently.
HAHAAAA!Good one,lol.thanks logan.
So nobody has an idea they want to see written in?I want you all more than just reading it,i want you to participate!So lets get some ideas here so we can do a poll.
If not i guess ill just have to keep writting.Ill give it a couple of days.If no one posts an idea,ill have to send a note home to your parents for not participating in class damn it!(Hehe.Always wanted to say that.)Dont make me break out my progress report slips people,ill use em,i swear to god i will!!!!!!!!!!

[lycanox]

Well, the bible speaks off pretty wild stuff in Revelations,
I remember stuff like volcanoes erupting, mega earthquakes lifting up entire continents, asteroid showers, the moon turning red, the sun eclipses and flesh eating swarms of hornets.

Since these are also discussed on AO, and this story is clearly going into that direction. you might consider showing some of them.
they don't even have to get an significant role in the story to add suspense.

P.S. I love the way you added Jesus and god into this.

[Stabby Joe]

Don't forget water into blood... imagine what the rain would be like then! Freaky! Zombies would end up licking the sidewalk lol!

So far so good with the story!

[krakatoa]

About the concentration camps. Maybe, the prisonners, found a way to be able to escape, one camp or more, and being able to take arms, and become aid, for God, as resistants.

[Demonskates]

O.K.cool,all good ideas.Ill give evreyone else a couple days,and we'll put the ideas to a vote.In the mean time ill keep going.

[Cartesiantheater]

I got one...

PLEASE DON'T LET MY DISGRACEFUL ENDING BE THE END OF ME! I still wanna be n da story... :bncry:

...hehe...just kidding... do what your mind commands...

but it would be nice if some of the zombies are commandeered by the good guys... (hint...hint... :nudge: )

...maybe they could be used by the surviving AO members to walk through hell fire to turn a lever or something...or maybe as foot soldiers or something...
...thought it would be cool for the good guys to use a few of Satan's undead army against him...

[Demonskates]

If America wasnt hells capitol on earth than nothing was.
1/3rd of the population was a slave zombie now.1/3rd was intered in a death camp,and the other third were loyalists to the new regime.Anyone else sliped through the cracks and were either resistance fighters or christians in hiding.
The Death camps took a more sinister role as food production sources for the undead third of the poulation.Who were purely canibalistic.The larger compounds added large warehouses housing Giant machines made to grind humans to a nice meaty pulp,essentially large meat grinders.Now at the large compounds,out of every 100,000 people sentanced to die,50,000 were to meet their end in the grinders to become food pulp for the undead.The gas chambers were now only running at half capacity.
The undead had a short shelf life if they are not fed.Being a souless being,the zombies require cells with fresh blood,and life in them in order to sustain any worthwhile life.Human flesh and blood was perfect when processed into the pulp.
It was easy for the undead to digest,unlike whole flesh.In a pinch they have been known to take a whole living person down,but only if they are truely starving.
The process was awful.Those who were lucky,were smashed in the head with a hammer,knocking them unconcious.Then they are fed onto a conveyor belt,which brings the uncouncious people up to the mouth of the grinder,where they then fall into the chamber and are minced by a series of industrial,revolving blades.After being minced a Giant piston,forces the minced people through a series of holes about the size of a button.The compressed streams of meat come out of the holes in a long rope like thread of meat.Those hundreds of ropes of meat are then pounded by a series of masive crushing weights,until the meat is almost paste like.
The unfortunates,those who are political prisoners,or resistance fighters,are lowered in slowly feet first.You cant imagine the horrific screaming and suffering.
The camps were making tons of the food for the undead,stored in giant grisley cases in one end of the ware house.
Trucks would come and pick up the cases they need for the day,and bring it to the undead barracks,Men in the back cracking the cases open,and dumping the pulp out while the truck kept driving.The zombies would eat the pulp from the road.
It was a horrid scene.Many of the undead had horrific facial wounds,or rotting limbs.'Eyes missing,noses gone,or teeth showing though holes in their cheek.
It definatly sticks in your head when you witness it for the first time.
Some troopers actually went insane the first time they had feed duty in the udead compound.They were just thrown to the zombies who ingnored them until the pulp was gone.After that they were engulfed in a sea of zombies who pulled them apart,the troopers screaming their last pleas.The one thing about zombies that requires a truly strong constitution,is their smell.They smell like death.Reek of it.Breath it out from their lungs in a hideous invisible cloud.When they speak,its just few word sentances,but it is always frightening.Their vocal chords usually are in some state of decay.Their eyes are the glassed over look of the dead.Like they arent seeing.most walk rather normal.contrary to horror films depictions.
They all are wearing the orange pajama like death camp uniforms,in various states of wear and decay.A repulsive lot.
Satan,as president began addresing the public.They were told of the new system of cashless society.They were to be loyal,or they could not buy trade or sell anything.They all were implanted with RFID chips within days of the declaration.
Churches were banned and demolished.The public was encouraged to turn christians in who were in hiding.Or to give up members working for the resistance.
Public hangings,crucifictions,and murders were cheered on by loyalists.
Synagogs and mosques,all religions were banned and the followers percecuted.
All sins were encouraged,and advertised 0ver the media,alultry,sex,porno,murder,rape,pedephilia,dru gs,torture,stealing,evrything that is wrong,was now right.
Marrige was out lawed.Parents with more than two kids were visted by the Department of Population Control,and forced to pick which children lived and which would die so as not to exceed the limit.The child,or children then are taken and shot execution style.
Food was rationed by the state,and given to those who did not end up on the black list for violations against the regime.
Sacrafices to Satan were big public events,in which evryone was given a number,and if your number was picked you were dragged to the stage and debouled for the pleasure of the crowd,and for the glory of Satan.
Rats and vermin choked the citys,and spread plague through the crowded citys.
Riots and police clashes were common.
The elderly were sytamaticaly being euthanized in hospitols,and sanitariums,and abortions were as common as air particles.The fetuses packaged and used to feed the undead.Water was tightly controled by the Regime,and was easily denied if a person was found to be unloyal.
The old football and baseball stadiums were once again a place for gladiators to entertain the blood thirsty public.Useing all vareity of weapons,from flame throwers and machine guns,to axe's and swords.It was widely popular on television,and the lucky ones who see it live in the stadiums go mental with delight.
The radios played a continuous program of music with underlying subliminal messages,the popu;ation un aware of the madness it was spreading.
Yeah.Shit got real ugly alright.

[uki]

The old football and baseball stadiums were once again a place for gladiators to entertain the blood thirsty public.Useing all vareity of weapons,from flame throwers and machine guns,to axe's and swords.It was widely popular on television,and the lucky ones who see it live in the stadiums go mental with delight.
The radios played a continuous program of music with underlying subliminal messages,the popu;ation un aware of the madness it was spreading.
Yeah.Shit got real ugly alright.holy shit!!! i was thinking about the future yesterday while i was at work across the street from the pocono raceway(nascar). i was looking at the track and the grand stand an i wondered if there will ever be gladiator matches in there or would it be used as a detainment camp... and then this morning you write about old stadiums being used... interesting to say the least. ever think you might have the ability of foresight and discernment? what you write of is not far off from the truth... perhaps people might grasp what is in store for them in the near future by reading your work. keep up the good work... and personally, i believe you have atleast foresight... i doubted my abilities for awhile(years), now they are being fine-tuned. :jap:

[Demonskates]

holy shit!!! i was thinking about the future yesterday while i was at work across the street from the pocono raceway(nascar). i was looking at the track and the grand stand an i wondered if there will ever be gladiator matches in there or would it be used as a detainment camp... and then this morning you write about old stadiums being used... interesting to say the least. ever think you might have the ability of foresight and discernment? what you write of is not far off from the truth... perhaps people might grasp what is in store for them in the near future by reading your work. keep up the good work... and personally, i believe you have atleast foresight... i doubted my abilities for awhile(years), now they are being fine-tuned. :jap:
Im not sure,fore sight or a good imagination.Im hoping the latter.I thought of how Satan would use what is available to him here.The stadiums we have now,are very reminicent of the colluseum.The games we watch such as foot ball,ect.are watered down versions of gladiator games.No one dies,but violent none the less.The public loves the games and the atmosphere of the stadiums,just as ancient society went crazy over gladiators fighting and loved the colleseums.It wasnt hard to draw that comparison.Its what made ancient civilizations civilized.a status symbol of their societys wealth and prosperity.And a gift to the people from their emporors,for the entertainment of the public.Not much diffrent today except we pay lots of money to see the teams,where the ancients only needed citezenship to attend the games.
One day in the future mabey blood will be spilled once more in the stadiums.
For the peoples entertainment.Society now is so desensitized to violence,that i think it could swing that way in the future.For whatever reason some where in all that madness long ago,peoples thirst for blood declined,and other games became popular,maybey thier thirst for blood had been quenched.But now,our society appears to be thirsting for it again,in video games,horror films,movies and television.
Mabey your right Uki.Mabey in the futre,there will be blood sport again.Its not hard to imagine it.I only hope its my imagination,and not foresight.

[lycanox]

Kinda reminds me of "the running man".

Love the zombie part. I got to get the rest of Romero's movies sometime.

[Demonskates]

God was tired.Sick and tired of all his creations running amuck.
There were the handful that loved him,which he really relished.Free will hadnt ruined them as it had others.
He was in his private room.Looking at thousands of spheres which were little universes,filled with people,creatures,and life.They were slightly egg shaped,holding billions of stars and planets,moons and cosmic dust ect.They all were his creations,when he made the universe that humans exist in,it was a large scale of the thousands of other universes he had built in minature as expirements.
Some were given free will,with much the same results,others were not,and blindly followed God.He studied the progress of all the little universes,who were unaware of their size,or relationship to the universe that they inhabited.
Some,the more succesful civilizations were far better off than the large scale universe,dubed"Project human being."
Where had he gone wrong he wondered.
He picked up a universe and held it in his hands.He peered into the tiny worlds and veiwed their advancement with wonder and pride.This particular one had done quite well.Albeit they had no free will.
He bagan to wonder if it was better to have never invented free will.
It was too powerful for his creations to handle.
But he felt it was the only real way that a person could truely love him,which is what he truely wanted.
God was sad,but the company of the little universes,and the life forms within,never ceased to cheer him up.
This was worthwhile.And he would see the big project through to its conclusion.No matter how horrific it was turning out to be.
He placed the little egg shaped universe back in its place,the inhabitants not even aware that beyond the end of their universe was a shelf,that their whole existance sat on,besides thousands of other universes just like thiers.
God remained silent.He hadnt spoke to a human in over 10,000 years.
A short time for god,but long enough on earth for him to be considered mere legend,rather than reality.
He wasnt sure what he would even say.The bad on earth was far outweighing the good now,and it disgusted him.He had never felt such revulsion for a creation of his ever in the history of infinity.
It sadened him,and he did not know what to do to correct it.He wanted only those that choose to love him,but the suffering of the majority that did not was almost to much to bear.Hell was not his creation.It was Satans.It was a place of refuge from God,and anything to do with him,the ultimate insult to his glory.That man would choose hell over heavan boggled his mind,even his amazing complex omnipotent mind could not grasp that shear uncareing,unloving decision to withdraw from eternal life in happiness.By choice!
He took solace in the fact that the expirement,although mostly bad,had some good in it.Those were the people who he kept the universe going for.They were the reason he had promised not to destroy the earth again.
He cupped his hands and created a new universe.In the center of his hands,a bright light formed.It grew and grew until it burst forth,in a mini explosion that threw dust and matter,elemnts and stars in all directions,the outer edges of black space expanding until it reached its pre defined boundries,taking the shape of a slightly egg shaped universe.
He never grew tired of doing that.It was just darn cool stuff.
He smiled and peered into the newly formed universe.He set it on a shelf and let the universe tend to itself,evolving through devine providence,the wheels of life set into motion.
He walked out of the room and the light of god going with him.
Zillions of tiny people were turning in for the night,while others were just waking to the light of a new day.Wondering what today would bring. Thier little universes carried on as they had for thousands of years.
Those with free will,were usually in one state of war or another.Those without,had nothing but paradise to tend too.When the door closed,you could see thousands of spheres with little lights and suns stars etc. illuminating the dark room.

[Cartesiantheater]

God the scientist.... Now I like that....

[Demonskates]

God the scientist.... Now I like that....
LOL.I thought some might.Who is to say that isnt how it works.Mabey he started the program,to let it run itself.Interesting thought anyway.Thats why i dig fiction.your only bound by your imagination.

[krakatoa]

Very creative thinking, makes very good, creative, book. Good work. Ch.

[Demonskates]

Lycanox awoke ontop of the back of a 110 Leapord-2A6 Main Battle tank in the forest outside of Delmenhorst Holland.Not all that far from the famous city of Bremen.The Korps Commandotroepen of the Royal Netherlands Army was gearing up for the day.They were busy building emplacements and preparing for the infernal armys.Lycanox yawned and streched sitting up on the back of the leapord.
He had fallen asleep on the warm metal plating over the engine during the night.
He watched as a column of 60 Cheetah Pantser Rupstegen Luchdoelen(anti air craft tanks)placed themselves in a denfensive posture,not aimed at the skys,but in the direction the infernal armys would be coming from.
The Korps Commandotroepen are the netherlands special forces.Formed in WWII
they had fought in D-Day.The modern special forces are Highly trained,and had recently seen some combat in afghanistan,before that war had gone to hell in a basket and they and the Americans were repulsed.
They were well equiped with Diemaco C7/C7A1 5.56 MM assault rifles,FNG MAG 7.62 MM Machine guns,Browning .50 Cal. heavy machine guns,Steyer SS-669 sniper rifles,AG-36 40 MM grenade launchers, and L16A2 Morters.They also had a detachment of artilery joined with them consisting of 100 72-M109 self propeled howitzers.They were far better equiped than most resistance units taking up arms in eroupe.
Things got real noisy once the heavy equipment fired up thier engines and moved to their diffrent positions through out Delmenhorst.
Lycanox hoppeddown of the back of the tank and grabed his Diemaco asualt rifle,slinging it over his shoulder.
He needed coffee.He walked over to a command bunker and saw the Eerste luitenant(first leutenant)already pouring a cup of coffee for him."thought you might need one of these sergeant."
Lycanox smiled and took the warm tin cup of coffe from the leutenant.
"Any word on Stadskanaal?"
"We heard that our troops there are already emplaced,and work is also being done in Papenburg to fortify that area.They pretty much have to roll through the pincer we've created in order to move into eroupe any farther."
"Great."said Lyacanox setting his coffe on a small table.
The port towns in Holland were abandoned,to give the invading armys the idea that they can just roll through.The defenses at Delmenhorst,Bremen,Stadskanaal,and papenburg were so heavily entrenched they doubted God himself could get through.
They were going to see anyway.
Miles of trench had been dug,reminicent of the WW I trenches and wooden bunkers within.Cocrete pillboxes dotted the landscape,and heavy artilery of many sizes and description were in place all over the place.
It would be one fuck of a fight for sure.
There also had been word of a lone cycleist from england who had been intercepted on a major road outside of Amsterdam.He claimed to be with the british resistance,and he was looking specifically for lycanox.He told of the horror he had seen in london,and described the Hairy Demons who had invaded killing his unit.
Lycanox couldnt beleive it.He had chatted with Logan Osborne on the computer at Armageddon onlinewhen the internet was still up.He was shoked he had traveled all this way.They could use all the help they could get.Lycanox decided to catch a ride in a YPR-765 armored personel carrier to Stadskanaal where Logan was being brought.Hed catch breakfast there and catch up with Logan on things.
He would take a few E-2's(Soldat der 1st klasse,Private first class)Along for fire support should he need it.Looting and riots have been taking place in certain towns and citys and the crowds were largly unpredictable.
They climbed aboard the A.P.C.,and proceded on the road to stadskanaal.About an hours ride from delmenhorst.The sun rising over the trees was beautiful.It was shaping up to be a nice day.
Lycanox had a heavy heart though.He knew that the beauty of holland would change when the Infernal Armys arrived,waging a war that would be for their very survival.He was scared.They all were.But they would not give in.They would rather die fighting than to give in to the evil hoards of hell.The special forces motto was "Nunc aut nunquam"Latin for Now or Never.Well it appeared to be now indeed,that they would have a showdown with the Infernal Armies.
Lyacanox sliped back in his seat,putting his feet up on the dash,and slid his cap over his eyes.He could catch a catnap on the way.He hated early mornings,even though he had seen plenty in the special forces.

[Smoke]

i wanna read soem more about smoke n grendel... my eyes ae burnin and i got a bit of catching up to do..... im goin to bed for now...ez

[Stabby Joe]

I just want to re say the zombie thing is great, since last night I had the most cool dream 've had in a long time, basically me and a load of others were under siege by zombies at what oddly enough, came off a the local retail park lol!

[Demonskates]

I just want to re say the zombie thing is great, since last night I had the most cool dream 've had in a long time, basically me and a load of others were under siege by zombies at what oddly enough, came off a the local retail park lol!
HeHe,zombie dreams are cool,theyve been advertising dawn of the dead for halloween on t.v. alot.Great film.I had a dream last night i wish i could remeber,it was cool,but when i awoke i coudnt remember it.Bloody sleeping pills.

[Demonskates]

O.K. four people have come up with ideas.So we will vote on them,Ill number them 1 thru 4 and you all pick the number you want to see written in.


1)Lycanox:Revelations style natural disasters as seen in the bible.


2)Stabby Joe:Water turns to blood.


3)Krakatoa:some prisoners of one of the concentration camps somehow escape and join the resistance.


4)Cartesian theatre:The good guys use some of the undead against Satan.


Those are the options.Ill give it a couple of days so everyone can vote.
(In the event of a 4 way tie,ill write in all the ideas.)

[Protostar]

Great! I vote w/ lyconox. Natural disasters. heh. maybe from the sun and/or
the earthquake of biblical reknown? hehehe, great story. Is there gonna be
any aliens? heh

[Demonskates]

Smoke did the best he could to get the rusacks from the wrecked humvee.Mabey there were extra cloths in there from the soldiers who had previously driven the stolen vehicle.He went through them both and found one wool blanket,and a couple of changes of cloths.The hard part would be getting the cloths on and getting grendel inside the wrecked hulk of the humvee.They would try and hide in the wreckage,when the Infernal Armys passed through here.It was a long shot but its all they had.They managed to get the cloths on,which was agonizing,and rested a few moments before attempting to get into the humvee.
After alot of pain and agony,they managed to situate themselfs in the wreck,twards the back, out of sight.They huddled close and shared the blanket for warmth.The sun had set and the temperature was dropping rapidly.
Smoke gave grendel a cigarette and lit it for grendel.
He layed there,quietly smoking the cigarette.
Lighting a fire would have been great,but it was out of the question.It would give away the fact that they were there,and alive,to either the insurgents,or the demon army.
They could hear the rumble of the demon hoards boots,like thunder coming closer.
Grendel finished the cigarette and put it out against the side of the vehicle.
The morphine had worn off and smoke and grendel were both feeling the extent of their injurys.
Smoke pulled out the last syringe,and gave half to grendel,and injected himself with the other half.At this point safe needle practice was the least of their worries.
They both felt a bit better,and they sat nodding off.
The demons would soon be passing their location.
Smoke wondered what he had done in this life to deserve this.
Grendel pulled out his pistol,and kept it handy.If they were spotted,they would put a bullet in their temple,rather than facing the horror of the hell hounds or the Infernal armys.
All they could do now was wait.
After a half hour,they both drifted into a morphine induced sleep.
For the moment,they were in happy places away from the harsh reality they were currently in.
Smoke awoke to the sound of hell hounds running through the sand close too the vehicle.
He jolted Grendle awake,putting his index finger to his mouth,to tell him to be silent.
The jumped when the heard a bang above them,on the roof of the vehicle.
A hell hound was checking out the wreckage.They heard it sniffing.Its paws making noisy foot steps on the metal.
Smoke and grendel huddled closer,and watched as the beast jumped to the hood of the vehicle through the shattered windsheild.In a bound it was off,continuing on its course,running.
Soon they heard more of them.They all walked around the vehicle.One stopped.It lifted its leg and let loose a long stream of urine on the side of the vehicle,occasionally splashing through holes torn in the metal,hitting smoke.
He tried not to move but he was clearly disgusted by this.Grendle cupped his mouth and tried not to laugh.Despite the horror they were facing,the morphine had found its way to grendels funny bone and he stiffled his laughter.
It hurt like hell to,grendels ribs being shattered and all.It did not deter his laughter.
They then heard the Infernal armys commanders barking orders.
They stopped right at the vehicle.
They could hear the demons conversing with one another.They would be taking a break here it looked like.
Grendel cocked the pistols hammer back as quiet as he could.
They jumped slightly when they heard a load thunk on the metal roof.The roof dented slightly from the4 weight of whatever it was.
They coud see a human arm,fall limply down over the window where it stopped and hanged.
The could hear a demon carving the dead human up with a blade,blood running into the compartment where grendel and smoke were hiding.They could see it running down the inside of thew wrecked humvee.
Apparently the demons were preparing dinner.
They watched as hundreds of bodys of soldiers were dragged past them.
This army was huge.They were sitting smack in the middle of the infernal armys.
Legions upon legions of them.They were setting up camp right here.
Smoke and grendel layed there shivering.This would be one hell of a night.
They prayed to whatever was listening,that they wouldnt be found.
They jumped again when the demon carving up the human slamed his blade into the humvee's roof,the tip just missing grendels head.
They saw the leggs of some of the demons approach,apparently to get tjier share of meat.

[Demonskates]

Great! I vote w/ lyconox. Natural disasters. heh. maybe from the sun and/or
the earthquake of biblical reknown? hehehe, great story. Is there gonna be
any aliens? heh
Dang! I was saving the Aliens for last.LOL.

[krakatoa]

i would want all of the ideas, but the bible apocalyspse, is always my first choice, having read a part of Left behind, The water turning in blood, is also in the bible. So these two ideas very good, for me.

My suggestion, and Cartesian Theather, is more about taking what is aready existing, in the book, as concentrations camps with their prisonners, and the zombie to make them go against the one that gives them back their live.

So i like all of them. but the idea of the bible armageddon, and water turn to red. Is my first choice. :band:

Aliens how about tripods hihi. Ch.

[Demonskates]

LOL,man i got to say Lycanox,i had to work to fit Holland into this.I really knew little of it other than mabey Amsterdam.I had to study up on Holland.Im glad i did now,it seems like a great place.Somplace id like to see one day.

[krakatoa]

Can you imagine, writers had to do their research, without computer, without internet. It is easier now to do research because of internet. Altho, i took some informations in books, for my story. Ch

[Demonskates]

Can you imagine, writers had to do their research, without computer, without internet. It is easier now to do research because of internet. Altho, i took some informations in books, for my story. Ch
Id imagine it would involve endless nights at the library,or interveiwing people.
the internet makes life alot easier.

[lycanox]

Thanks, You did an great job,
I even didn't know some of the stuff you described.

I just finished copying the story from the site into an word document. Your now on page 64, and over 36.000 words.

Cant wait to see whats next.

[Demonskates]

Thanks, You did an great job,
I even didn't know some of the stuff you described.

I just finished copying the story from the site into an word document. Your now on page 64, and over 36.000 words.

Cant wait to see whats next.
LOL.glad you like it.The commandotoepen was an intersting read.I new little of the millitary in the Netherlands,had no idea they were involved in D-Day.
I knew some of the fire arms ect. but the heavy equipment i had to look up.
Im suprised ive got 64 pages already.very cool.More in a bit.

[Smoke]

gotta liv the acidic piss from hellhounds earrrly in the night... enough to wake any man.. the suspnce.. ha ha awsome :) now the ending of this should be awsome too,

ill read check for more later.

[lycanox]

At least you wont die of thirst.
:2thumbs:

Anyway, Demonskates. Does this story have an title or are you just planning to go with the threads title?

[Demonskates]

At least you wont die of thirst.
:2thumbs:

Anyway, Demonskates. Does this story have an title or are you just planning to go with the threads title?
Honestly i never thought of a title.Haha,i was thinking more about the story line rather than its name.Im open to suggestions though.Looks like you won the vote Lycanox.So,Revelations style natural disasters will be written in.

[Demonskates]

When the infernal armys disapeared all of a sudden in England people were elated.
What they did not know was that engalnd,through black magic would be destroyed.
At five a.m. the entire country of England began to rumble.Within 10 minutes,the heaving earth had reached 11.6 on the Richter scale.Unheard of in england.
Millions died through out the country during the quake.It could be felt in france,spain,holland and as far as germany.
One hour after the quake,England sliped beneath the ocean surface,causing a tsunami of uncalculable preportions.The wave destroyed the coast line of Eroupe in a mater of seconds.The water covered all the towns along the coast as far as 300 miles into the interior of Eroupe proper.The total estimated death toll between england sinking,and the tsunami it produced was estimated in the high millions range.About 356,000,000 people to be exact.The mainland was covered in about 60 feet of water for a distance of about 300 miles.The bodies and debris threatened
petulant outbreaks of thousands of diseases,and plague.
The smell was horrific.Bloated bodies floating everywhere.The Tsunami also caused a human wave of and people fleeing the water,those lucky enough to escape into neighboring citys ect. were now refugees.There numbers were in the hundreds of thousands.
The Infernal armys reappeared through some type of portal,caused by the blackest of magic hell had,and they infested france and the main land in eroupe,just past the 300 mile mark,past the floods and water.France fell in four minutes flat.There were to few to resist the hoards.They were killed and made into the undead at faciltys set up for such things in France.
The news of england traveld fairly quick despite the internets unavailability.
The phone lines were jamed with people from all nations looking for loved ones.
It was hopeless,and the panic that ensued was truly amazing in its preportions.If the infernal armys can sink england,then they could do it else where.
Even the illuminati troopers were frightened.None of Illuminatis in england had been spared.They began to realize that their place on earth was being threatened despite
treatys with hell and Satan.They realized that their safety was all but an illusion.
They had been duped into letting hell take control of the governments of the world.

Skynet was clinging to a peice of drift wood.All he could see was ocean.nothing but ocean for miles and miles.Ocean and bodies anyway.The piece of wall he was clinging too was just big enough that he could sit on it.He sat in awe.His country had just slipped under the ocean and he had survived it.He was the only survivor of Sanguinarius Death camp.He sat shivering,crying and begging whatever god would listen to wake him from this nightmare.He was sitting where england had been,with bodies floating all around him.The ocean was so choaked with bodies that it became to exhausting to try and push them out of the way of skynets little raft.
He saw men ,women,and children,in various forms of tatter in all directions.
He avoided their glazed over eyes,which seemed to stare at him accusingly.As if they were angry he was alive.He picked usefull things from the water when he found them.Food and water mostly.He hoped that he wouldnt drift out to sea,and prayed that he could at some point spot the mainland of Eroupe.
He clinged to whatever sanity he had left.Which wasnt much.he sat mumbling to himself,occasionally yelling at the corpses blocking his wall rafts way.
The debris in the water was monumental.It was choking the sunlight out,the sea creatures below,thinking it was night.Lots of fish floated among the human bodies,their oxegen depleted from the thick brownish earth and soil,oil and chemicals ect.All things that could float added to the debris feild which had spread to a thousand mile radius.Things from england began washing up on shore as far away as iceland.Skynet had found a sealed bag of bagels,and tore into the bag,taking a bagel and wolfing it down.Skynet had never been one for praying,but he found himself doing it alot lately.
He could see smoke drifting through the air,it looked like mabey from the ocean,but hoped it was the mainland of eroupe.He found a plank and used it as an oar.The going was very slow.the volume of debris and bodys making it hard to move other than a foot or so at a time.He kept going,aiming for the smoke.

[Beatnik Bob]

Have you ever seen V For Vendetta?


And I have no protest for the destruction of France...other than that human life is being wasted.

[Demonskates]

Skynet could not beleive the numbers of floating animals and birds,of all sizes and descriptions in certain sections.It was one big nasty sea of carcases.Like a dissgusting soup,with sea gulls having a feast of flesh unimaginable.Skynet saw the birds in hoards,feasting on the dead humans and animals.Entrails and blood floating in a frothy sea of red.He could see on some bodys thousands of insects,who had managed to crawl onto the bodys and debris.He wasnt the only one on rafts it appeared.The cacophony of sea gulls was absurdly loud.
Skynet figured if hell had oceans,this was sure as fuck one of them.The sun beating down on this nasty soup of shit was awful,making the smell unbearable.
Skynet had managed to find a half of a gallon of water floating,and siped the clean water gratefuly.It had to be 90 out.An unusually hot day.He could hear the buzzing of thousands of flys of all types.He could see some of the bodys had insects burroed inside,making the flesh above writh.Anybody having to float in that sea of death and carnage would probably never be the same after.
The other bad thing was sharks.Lots of them.Eating and pulling at the bodys.
They didnt last long in the thick murky debris filled water.Quite a few sharks had died trying to feed off of the bodys and fish.Their oxegen choaked from them gradually.But the temptation of a free meal kept them coming from miles around.
When the raft bumped into bodys now,being bloated with gases causesed by the decomposition process,they would burst open around the belly,oozing entrails into the sea,and the foul smell that escaped was nauseating.Skynet could see that the smoke was closer.He figured mabey a half mile.He began the tedious task of pushing the bodys away from his raft.then he pould padle with the plank as far as he could go,and repeat the process.Even in his orange work uniform from the death camp,he was to hot.His skin began to burn,turning a deep shade of red.Bloody English complexion,skynet thought.
After several hours of this he saw that the smoke was coming from a single engine boat.The back end apeared to have caught on fire,but now was just smoldering.
It took him another hour to reach it.He had shouted but no one had answered.
He pulled his food and water aboard and walked the deck,looking for anyone.
He ventured into the hull through a small hatch and found a body.It had a revolver in its hand.The mans brains appeared to now be on the starboard hull wall.
Apparently the sea of death had been to much for the poor bloke.
Skynet hauled the man up to the deck and let him slip into the sea of muck and grisly remains.These were far superior accomadations than the peice of wall he had been siting on.He now had a place to sleep,eat,and keep out of the sun.
He started going through the cabinets and compartments.He kept the mans revolver,which had five shots left.A nice snub nose .38 special.
He found food,that would last him about a week if need be.He found flares.A radio,some rope.toilet paper.a few magazines,of the porno nature.
He found a fire extinguisher,and some cooking things.
He used the fire extinguisher to fully put out the smoldering back engine.
He wondered if the batery for the radio was good.He turned it on and got nothing but static.he clicked it off and threw it into a cubby hole on the wall.
The food in the mini fridge was still cold,and he found some nice steak meat.some eggs,and bacon,some crumpets,butter,marmalade.
he cooked one hell of a meal,steak ,eggs, bacon,with crumpets and jam.The best he had eaten in a month.He also found a bottle of glen levet scotch.The sales tax stamp had a date of 1978.This was a treat indeed.he poured himself a tall glass of the scotch,and plunked down in a chair.He held up the glas in a salute."To England."He said and drank half the glass in two large gulps.He finished the glass a bit slower,savoring the nicely aged scotch and layed down.For once, in a comfortable rack,with a matress.He was soon fast asleep.The bodys and debris gently banged off the hull,but not loud enough to wake Skynet.The booze and the sway of the ocean was enough to keep him out.He was exhausted.The Blood red moon cast an erie light on the sea of fetid carnage.

[Demonskates]

Have you ever seen V For Vendetta?


And I have no protest for the destruction of France...other than that human life is being wasted.
That is one i have not seen.Im suprised too because i like natalie portman.Ill have to check that one out.

[Smoke]

That is one i have not seen.Im suprised too because i like natalie portman.Ill have to check that one out.

thats a pretty awsome movie :)...............................

[Demonskates]

Demonskates awoke next to his current girlfreind,Laura.
She was sleeping next to him.He had lucked out and managed to get her in bed,and her sister,the week before.He grinned thinking that he had just pulled off the greatest deception of all time.If Julie found out,hed be strung up by his balls for sure.He looked at the amulet hanging from his neck.This thing had been bringing him some unbeleiveably good luck.He looked at her naked body.She was amazing.
long dark curly hair,blue eyes,her body was just flawless.So was her sisters.
A little shorter,brown eyes,a smaller chest, straight brown hair,but beautiful just the same.
Demonskates lit a cigarette and walked into the other room to pour himself a burbon.
The amber liquid of knob creek slowly poured into a tumbler.He turned on the T.V.
and watched the news footage for the tenth time about how the berlin wall had been torn down.The music of the Scorpions,the winds of change,playing dramaticaly in the background.
He was glad his folks had decided to split for the weekend.He took a pull off the burbon and looked for his stash.some real killer buds he scored at the Iron fence erlier in the day.He packed a bowl in his glass peice he had gotten a couple of weeks ago at a Grateful Dead show.
He kinda felt bad about cheating on Julie with her sister,but Demonskates was really in love with the both of them.If asked to pick one or the other,he would not be able to choose.So if he played it right,he hoped he could have them both.
If it went to hell,hed have the memories to brag about with his freinds at least.
The sweet smell of marijuana drifted from the bowl,filling the room.
Demonskates was going to................................................ .......

Decessus had spaced out again.It was at an unopertune moment too,his demon instructer gave him a feirce blow to the face with Black magic,knocking him to his rear.he sat on the floor stunned.
"Damn it Decessus!You must concentrate!"
"Im sorry,its just thst......"
"Never mind that shit!Get up."
Decessus thought with all his strengeth,and his body rose to its feet with just a thought.
He focused energy through his hands repeling his instructor back against the wall.
"excellent,now you are paying attention."Said the instructor with a grin.
"We shall resume tommorow."
"As you wish instructor."Said Decessus,who bowed with respect to his teacher.
Decessus's training was almost complete.He had mastered the apocolypse training.
All that was left was for him to finish his acedemics with black magic,and hell power and he would be a true second order demon,of the Infernal Army's.
He had thousands of scrolls and ancient manuscripts,black arts books,the lost sections of the necronomicon.A wealth of evil rites and magic.Vast volumes of grimoirs written in blood by demons from the old order.All were at his disposal.
He would study for hours.deep into the night,reading in the arcane language,of the old order.
Alot of history as well.The true history of mankind.How hell was behind every conflict ever in the history of man.Egypt,Rome,Greece,Eroupe,the new world.
It was a veritable who's who of old order demons,and their roles in the deception of mankind.They were behind the inquisition.The crusades.The revolution of france,the fall of the british empire.The killing of the Tzar of russia.Napoleaons defeat.The blitzkreig.They were as much a part of human history as humans themselves.The beauty of it was,that most humans werent even aware of them.
That is, until the infernal armys began to appear.The world was well aware of them now.

[Stabby Joe]

The Tsar eh? Interesting concept there... well done with the rest!

[Demonskates]

Somthing was going on in the death camp of Gehena.Lazserus looked out the barred window of Dr. Guderians office and saw that the inmates had began to revolt.They swarmed the guards in the compound and began amassing various weapons.Sharpened sticks,shovels,worl feild tools,stolen guns from the guards.It was chaos.
Dr,Gudreian ran into the office and slammed the door,leaning his back against it,a look of horror on his face.
"dr.,what is going on out there?!"
"Lazserus,its a revolt!They will surely kill me!,You must help me my boy."
The doctors face was white,the blood had ran from his face,he was terrified.
"Here,sit down doctor.Take a seat,i wont let anything happen to you."Said lazserus reassuringly.He walked over and took the doctor by the arm,leading him to his leather office chair.The doctor slumped down,beads of sweat driping from his brow.He was clearly distraught.
Lazserus sliped a letter opener shaped like a sword into his hand,hidden from the doctors view.It had been sitting on the doctors desk.
"Lazserus,Lazserus,what am i to do?The will surely come in here.the will accuse,they will propegate lies!They will use deceit and trechery!!!!Lazsurus,they will kill me boy."
Laz walked behind the doctors chair,massaging the doctors shoulders,making him more at ease.
"Doctor,they cant get in the medical block,im sure they have closed it for security."
"Yes,yes security,i soppose you are right my boy.........."
Lazserus plunged the letter opener deep into the doctors lower neck,right behind the collar bone,and pulled back as hard as he could,preventing the doctor from moving forward in the chair,possibly allowing him to get to his feet.
The doctor howled in pain,gasping in panicked breaths.
"Lazserus!!!NO!WHY!!! AH,OOOO..........
Lazserus pulled the letter opener from the doctor,producing a jet of blood,spurting from the wound all over the ornate victorian desk.
Lazsers stabbed the doctor again,then again,stabbing him on the doctors way down to the floor,the doctors eyes wide with suprise and horror,a pool of blood forming around him.
"Lazserus my boy...........my...........what have you done...............this,this is treasonous........treas.......son......trechery... ...........trechery........."
Lazserus stood there watching as the evil doctor lay bleeding.
"Now docter,i must bid you farewell."
Laz droped the letter opener to the floor and walked out of the office.
The doctor was gasping for breath now.He was crying.tears ran down the old mans face.
"Gooddbye Lazserus........my boy.....it h..hhhur........hurtsss............"
He breathed his final breath,his eyes staring at the open door to his office.

Lazserus ran to the mess hall in the medical block.It was empty.He found two giant
kitchen knives and held one in each hand.
He ran down the hall,burtsing through the doors to the medical block and entered the fray raging out side.
An inmate fired off an M-16 indescrimanantely hitting guards and inmates alike.
It was chaos.Laz stabed the crazy gunman in the neck,dropping him to the ground.He picked up the rifle and began shooting at the guard towers.
He made light work of the guards in the towers.
He looked around in the madness that was going on around him and spotted a truck.
That would get him through the electrified gates.
Just as he was going for the truck he spotted the zombie that looked like liber dave.
He was being pummled by a croud of inmates.When he saw the tattoo on daves arm he knew it was him for sure.He ran and smashed the butt of the rifle of the closest inmates face.He grabed the once alive libre dave and dragged him out of the frenzy twards the truck.He proped him upfront in the cab,and quickly ran around to the driver side of the truck and hopped in.The keys were not in the ignition.He checked the visor,flipping it down, and the keys fell into his lap.
He fumbled for the keys and sliped the key into the ignition.
The truck roared to life and lazserus floored it.He was in third gear in a mater of moments,crashing through the crowd, who was basically killing anything that moved.
Its like they had gone completely mad,and were no longer distinguishing between inmates or guards.
He smashed through the main gate,and kept right on going.
The inamtes cheered and ran behind the truck.Lazserus could see the angry mob running behind him.It was like a black wall of chaos.He could see that the death camp was begfining to burn in a firey conflagration,smoke billowing high into the morning sky.
He had to get far enough away to ditch the truck.Then he had to figure out what he could do with libre dave.If there was a way to help him.
Libre dave turned his head and stared at Lazserus,He sat drooling into his lap.

[Demonskates]

Uki was now beginning to see the practicality of using fire arms.He had the desert eagle,which was extremely powerful.He now had taken to carrying a rifle.An M-16 he taken off a fallen commrad.He still would carry his Katana.He was more at home with edged weapons,but had had one too many close calls to rely on the Katana alone now.
They were waiting in ambush.There had been movement along the highway all morning.The plan was to hit the lead vehicle in the convoy with such a barrage of bullets that it would stop the convoy.
then they would hit the rear vehicle,effectively blocking the rest of the trucks from moving.Then it would be like shooting fish in a barrel.It was a proven way of hitting the troop transports that were running up and down the highway.
This would be ukis first ambush with a rifle.
It felt a little starnge in his hands.He had to remember how to quick load under fire.
How the slide works ect.
It wasnt long before they saw what they were looking for.The troopers had began staggering their trucks in the convoy,in an attempt to not be boxed in when ambushed.It was useless.Every gun in the resistance was trained on the first and second trucks in line.The windsheilds of the two trucks were ripped appart,the blood of the troopers blowing all over the cab of the truck,and what was left of the windsheild.
The trucks slammed into one another,and rolled to a stop,blocking the other trucks from going any further.
The hit the last two trucks in line next,making the trucks in the middle a veritable shooting gallery.The troopers began jumping from the back of the truck,and returned fire.Most were cut down in a hail of gunfire.The intensity of the ambush was undeniable.In 10 minutes the whole thing was over.They had decimated over 50 homeland security troopers.They lay scattered all over the road,in twisted tattered heaps.It was quite a gory mess.The resistance began taking the fire arms and supplies from the backs of the trucks.They had enough stuff now to fight for another few weeks without resupply.
Uki was impressed with how he had handled the M-16.He had taken out a dozen troopers himself.They took the jerry cans with extra fuel from the trucks and sloshed it over the dead troopers and the tattered vehicles.When they were at a safe distance,they lit a road flare,and threw it to the gas soaked ground.The flames shot into the sky in a split second,smoke trailing into the sky.They began burning the the vehicles and dead,because it could be seen for miles.
It would invariably bring other troopers to investigate.Thus eneableing them to kill more troopers.They would hide up the road from where the original ambush had taken place.Just as the troopers could see the firey carnage ahead,the resistance would open up on them,uping the body count for the day.They had refined this tactic to a sceince.
The resistance had been making signifigant advances in all states lately.
It was getting easier to supply the resistance now,through trails in the mountains they recieved all they needed to wage war on the troopers.
The only disadvantage the resistance had was the fact that they had no air support.The troopers had a wealth of bombers,drones and jets.
They began archlight bombing campaigns against the resistance.The troopers had underestimated the volume of resistance within the u.s.
They were dropping mostly the 1000 pounder veriety of bombs.Some times napalm.
They were using defoliants on a daily basis over the woods and forests where the most fighting had been taking place.It wasnt eneough to detere the resistance though.They had a wealth of radio equipment taken from troopers in combat.
They usually were able to avoid the archlight missions being flown,by listening in on what the troopers thought were secure channels.
The resistance were making a mess out of the troopers communications capabilitys.
Cutting land lines,and c-4ing radio towers.
They were getting a steady flow of people joining all the time.Some who had been loyalists until they were black listed from food and water for infractions against the regime.A few who were lucky enough to escape the death camps were also in the mix.They were very valuble,They knew the layout,and locations of the various camps they had fled from.Out of 100 known camps,they found that 75 of them were in the u.s.The other 25 they had heard in various trooper chatter on the air waves had been in England.
They had heard about the infernal armys in eroupe and the middle east.Although,it appeared that they were in the u.s. in limited numbers.Mostley working within the govt.The resistance's main goal was to eleiminate any possibilty of having to face the infernal armys in the u.s.It seems as though the infernal armys were keeping a low profile in America.

[Demonskates]

God hadnt noticed what was going on with one of the thousands of little universes in his giant room which warehoused all of the little universes.
This particular universe was the first he had created.
It had evolved for billions and billions of years.
Its people had been given no free will.They to had eveolved on their own for billions of years.They developed technologies through advanced computers to help them reach their level of understanding that they now posses.They are the most advanced living beings within the cosmos.They not only unlocked the way physics and sceince truely work,they had broken the advanced sequences of D.N.A. relative to angelic beings,and amazingly,God himself.They were the only race of beings to have solved the puzzles that plague every other society since the dawn of time.They no longer were reliant upon God for anything.Their advanced optical equipment had seen past the edge of their universe,and into not only the room that contained them,but into some of the other galaxys within other universes beside them on the shelf.You can imagine how they reacted when they realized their whole existance was found to be sitting on some shelf,in some room.It was profound.They also knew God hadnt payed thier little universe any mind in millions of years.Their religion had become science.Their knowledge in mathmatics,physics,
sceince,medicine,were what had shaped their moral views for billions of years.
They were a collective mind.That is,they communicated by thought alone.
they all agreed to break free from the little universe that contained them,and they had for millions of years now.They mastered space travel,the enigmas of vortexes,black holes,worm holes,light speed and size manipulation.The had visted earth as early as when the dinosaurs existance began.Seing humans,millions of years later was like looking back through time billions and billions of years ago,to when their race had been just simple,non evolved creatures.Their technology could figure out complex algorythims that would take earths modern computers billions of years to calculate,in thousandths of a second.They had spread through their own galaxy,filling planets within many diffrent galaxys,any at all that were inhabitable.Even ones that were considered unihabitable.They set up elaborate bases that were self sustaining.food,air, water,light.They knew how to create stars.utilizing planets that would other wise be uninhabitable.They were in a sense,Gods themselves,through super advanced technologys.They were on the same playing feild as God himself.They then spread to other universes.Using what planets they could there.The population count of the original universe they were in was zillions.Through time manipulation,and advanced dimensional shift travel,they spread throughout most of the other universes on the shelf.Thats when they discovered that they could manipulate the very fabric of existance,and resize themselfs for existance within the big universe,the one that had earth in it.Project human being.They had refined these technologies over a million years or so,interacting with earth,and its peoples,begining just after the expulsion of adam and eve from the garden of Eden.They were every bit as capable in knowledge as god.The ancient civilaizations on earth had been visited for centurys by these beings.There population now was a zillion times a zillion.They had propogated their kind to the point where they needed to expand into the universe that had earth in it.They had filled many planets all ready.They intend to fill more.Their complex minds viewed anything else other than their own kind as usless life.They destroyed two ancient civilizations in zeta reticuli,filling it with their own species.they were populating the universe at an exponential rate through their advanced technologys.
They had beat death.They figured out how to live immortaly.Which means space became a problem after a while.They knew of the struggles with angels and deamons,god and satan,and by this point had them all outnumberd a million to one.
They clearly were on a mission of conquest,to make their kind,the only kind.
They had made whole worlds of people extinct.whole universes.They had strived for billions of years to reach this point.They had developed weapons,capable of destroying everything on the surface of a planet,and had used them over and over.
In their language they were refered to as world wreckers.Mars once had great civilizations.They were destroyed before humans were even a thought.The entitys were well aware of others visiting and studying humans.They were suarian grays as the humans described them.they were billions of years behind these other entitys in technology.They were trying to warn humans about this race that destroyed whole worlds.The governments knew about them,but were powerless to stop them,as were the grays.Thhe government had covered up anything to do with the grays,and the other race,was so frightening,that they were above top secret.
On earth,they were a security level of 100.the highest security clearance rating in existance.The public was only aware of security levels up to 35.Even the presidents,were only cleared up to aboput 40.They knew little of the suarian race,let alone the other race,which was named G.O.D.s,or godly ,omnipotent dietys.
They had been present on the moon when neil armstrong had done the apollo 11 missions.They were the ones who in no uncertain terms told them to get the fuck off the moon and not come back.After that,all other moon landings were staged in a secret N.A.S.A complex.

[Demonskates]

The Saurians, Americans ,and russians were working in joint subteranian bases,trying to come up with technologys capable of holding back the G.O.D.s.
They new they had a timetable of about 1 more year,before earth would be invaded.There was somthing on earth,that was so rare within all the universes,that it was earths only saving grace.It is why the G.O.D.s hadnt used a world wrecker on them.They were feverishly working to figure out what that somthing was.
It was the one thing they would be able to tie together all the other worlds that had been destroyed.provided they could figure it out in time.
Once they had earth,it would be the staging point for all their kind to swarm heavan,and take over that dimension.This was the only thing god did not know,other than certain problems that had arose concerning free will.The demons of hell would be nothing more than slave labor for the G.O.D.s.
they were more in line with their thinking,because they openly reject Gods authority.Humans,angels and God himself were of no use to them.Once they had what ever it was that was keeping them from destroying earth,they would use a world wrecker on it,and re -terra shape the planet to suit ther own needs.
A process well suited for the hoards of demons,now waging war on the earth's people.If humans,the general public knew just how crazy the fabric of exsistance truely was they would die from shock.They were just begining to except that god and the devil were real,let alone a race capable of destroying universes of people,and inevitably God himself.The few who had security clearence that high to know of them,rarely slept.they lived very short,stress filled lives.Aging 20 years in the course of months.Most died from heart attacks and strokes.the truth was too much for many of them.When crop circles began to appear,they were partially decoded and realized the time was close.The circles were advanced instructions that gave the time frame,and other valuble information to G.O.D.s stationed on the moon from the high command of invasion forces.A worm hole was constructed,from all the galaxies and universes to the moon,which would be the jumping off point for all G.O.D.s to invade earth.By the time God almighty realized all of this it was too late.Earth,and its people were now truely on their own.Heavan was too busy trying to figure out how to stop this seemingly paradoxical danger from ever taking place.The sad thing is,is that it really was too little to late.They had the clear advantage.Angels began abandoning heavan.Somne joined Satan,others left,never to be seen again,to far away civilizations in other solar systems.It was futile.They could only hope to live a whaile longer by doing so.
The chatter that was being intercepted by illuminatis millitary bases around the globe was increasing to a fever pitch.They communicated with powerful laser beams,encoded with instructions and information concerning the earth campaign.
It was to complex for them to decipher as of yet,but they were working night and day trying to figure out the content of the communications.They barely could grasp
the meaning of but a hundred words from their complex language system.
The crop circles they figured wer somthing similar to coordinates for certain areas to be hit.They were slightly easier to interpret,with the help of the suarians.
The light codes were far more complex.If they could crack the the crop circle codes 100% they could then figure out some of the encoded messages within the laser communications.Earth was truely in peril now.More than humans had ever dreamed was possible.The macines for riding the planets of their inhabitants were truely horrific.Like giant insects,with every type of unimaginable weaponry,for use in any configuration to meet what ever problems arose.The hulls were impervious to any known weapon,on earth,hell or heavan.Even magic.Once they started,they would not stop,until every living thing was exterminated.The world would be covered in a thick coat of blood.The blood of billions of people,live and undead.
The automated machines were programed to hunt human ,angelic,and undead blood with ruthless efficiency.This was a fate far worse than anything the demons had ever devised.Far worse than any punishment God almighty could fathom.
For once,God was aware of his own mortality.He didnt like it one bit.Now he truely knew what it was like to be human.His head was every bit as much on the chopping block.He was out sourced,out manned,out witted and now,merely mortal by the standards set by his first creations.He had never dreamed of anything like this being capable.Her wished he had payed closer attention to them now.

[Demonskates]

P.S. PROTOSTAR wins a Demonskates cupie doll for realizing that aliens would indeed become a good part of the ending of this story! And you all thought i was kidding. :2thumbs:

[Protostar]

Great! Thx demon. This is awesome. Can't wait to read more....
Keep em' comin' heh

[krakatoa]

I just wanted to tell you Demon, i could'nt read the 2 last pages yet. When this is done, i will come back to you, on this. Ch.

[Demonskates]

Ill be writting more in a day or so.Sorry for the delay,life has away of getting in the way of things sometimes.Glad you all dig it.

[lycanox]

Its Ok.
You promised only one part per week anyway. I am surprised you kept up like you did. i am trying to get an storyline together for an year now. and still got only one chapter.

[Demonskates]

Its Ok.
You promised only one part per week anyway. I am surprised you kept up like you did. i am trying to get an storyline together for an year now. and still got only one chapter.
Thanks man,I had Jury duty,leave it to me to be picked for the jury.Bloody hell.
All part of my civic dutys as a American citezen i suppose.Well,tonight is Halloween,or Sam Hain to some,old hallows eve,and this is the night where this story comes to an end.So im going to get to some writting.Got alot of ground to cover,so with out further adue.................................

[Demonskates]

Demonskates murdered Satan without much fanfare.He simply walked up,summoned all of hells power and ripped Satans black heart from his chest.When Satan died he took his angelic form,he was more beautiful than handsome some would say.
Hells bells tolled 13 times,and all in hell knelt before,Demonskates.Which he took for his name again,rather than Deccesus,a name given by Satan.
The souls in hell were no longer to be tormented.The Infernal armies were called back at once and the misery they were causing on earth stoped.He destroyed the Old order demons one by one.Starting with Philatanus.The High demon of perversity and pedophilic behaviors.It was a bleek time for the old order............................

Lazserus was driving the truck he had stolen,when Satan died,the undead became mortals again,their wounds healed.Libre dave was back to his old self again.
They planned on living out the remainder of their lives in hidding...........................

Skynet reached land and was grateful to be out of the murky reeking soup of corpses he had been floating in for days now.He started hiking twards holland......

Cartesian theatere looked at himself and saw that he had reverted back to being a live human again and laughed and cried.He was so releived...............................

Protostar watched as the hell hounds dissapeared before their eyes.The danger was over apparently.The group went hunting,they were in desperate need of food.
They preapared a feast like non before it,upon their return.They partyed well into the night............................................. .................................................. .........

Uki was in the middle of another fire fight with troopers.They had the upper hand until archlight bombings resumed.The resistance was pummeled with 500 pound bombs until every last one of them was dead.............................................. ....

Lycanox met with logan osborne and they enjoyed seeing one another in person.The celebration in Holland was like no other in the history of eroupe.The hordes of demons had all vanished.They both were very drunk,and elated that it hadnt come to fighting.......................................... ......................................

Sadly,Grendel and smoke passed away from their wounds.They went peaceful in thier sleep.Gangreen had poisened their systems because of the compound fractures they had suffered.infection also had a role in their deaths...................................

The other A.O. posters had met thier fates in concentration camps.They had been made into food pulp for the undead.At least their suffering was already over...........

God,Jesus,the angels that were left,along with the souls of heavan were feverishly trying to find away to stop the onslaught that was sure to come from the G.O.D.'s..

The Suarian grays and illuminatis troopers had made a fatal error in their translations of the G.O.D.'s language.They didnt have a year.they had one day.when it passed the invasion happened.Their ruthless machines killed everything that lived on earth.They then destroyed God,jesus,all the angels and the souls ceased to exist in heavan and in hell upon gods death.heavan was in ruins.
The earth was litterally covered in a knee deep ocean of blood.6 billion people met their fate in the most gruesome,feindishly painful ways imaginable.far to exotic to describe here.when they were dead,it was as if they never had existed,becuse god no longer existed.The inhabitants of the tiny little universes on Gods shelf were destroyed with ease one by one.
They then went to hell,and all demons were enslaved.Demonskates was in shock,he was treated slightly better than the rest but it was still slavery.For eternity.
The g.o.d.'s used a world wrecker on earth,and anhileated everything on its surface,and the demons began terra shaping the earth to suit the G.O.D.'s needs.
This was a most unhappy ending to perhaps the most amazing stuggle for life the world and parallel universes had ever witnessed.Now their were no witnesses.
No trace they had ever exsisted.The G.O.D.'s were the eminant force in the universe,and one by one,other universes fell to their hoards.A new begining,coming from a horrific end.Demonskates swore he would have revenge.He would learn their ways as long as it took him.He hated them for what they had done.Now he would study them.Find their weaknesses,and exploit them.For now,he worked hard reshaping the once beautiful world he had once known.Demonskates wept bitterly.


THE END
........Or is it????.......
Happy halloween everone,thanks for reading.
I soppose you all thought it would be a happy ending?
(Cartesian theater,is there enough room for about 6 billion people in your A.O. body count thread?If you start logging them now you may finish before you die,lol.)

[Smoke]

oh no, ha ha earth is gone, i thought the ending to this would have gotten more than what it did.

[Demonskates]

oh no, ha ha earth is gone, i thought the ending to this would have gotten more than what it did.
The earth is still there,its just being reshaped to suit the needs of the aliens
with demons as the slave labor.Its human beings and all other species including god who are gone,lol.I only planned on writting until halloween.But there could be a sequel,or perhaps a diffrent short story soon.

[medicvet]

WOW! Just finished reading this..and thought..my GOD, isn't there a way to stop the G.O.D.S. ????

oh don't leave us hanging like this..if they had no free will and managed to take over everything..maybe those with free will who know how to use it could come together and manage to still win and escape their torment somehow????

What a story and what an ending!

you have managed to inspire me..I am going to write my own totally fictional story..

[iulian28ti]

The earth is still there,its just being reshaped to suit the needs of the aliens

damn... similar to my mind

[Demonskates]

Holy shit. where did this come from? This hasnt been up in a while. Thanks for whoever is responsible for getting this back up. God forgive me if your reading this.
It was abfore i became a christian. uh........i am a sick puppy.

[Smoke]

The earth is still there,its just being reshaped to suit the needs of the aliens
with demons as the slave labor.Its human beings and all other species including god who are gone,lol.I only planned on writting until halloween.But there could be a sequel,or perhaps a diffrent short story soon.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

[Demonskates]

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

LOL. Perhaps. I really havent left much to work with. God the angels, Satan, and 6 billion people are now gone. I wonder if i can tie the hockomock story into this one some how, that would be trippy.

[Smoke]

LOL. Perhaps. I really havent left much to work with. God the angels, Satan, and 6 billion people are now gone. I wonder if i can tie the hockomock story into this one some how, that would be trippy.

I think grendel and smoke should return... something good.

[medicvet]

time travel to prevent that from happening somehow??? Besides, how could you have God not exist..it would be a paradox..especially if killed by creatures without free will...that would mean that they would never want to kill God and always obey God..

so you have a paradox that creates a vortex/warp in the space time continuum, and demonskates uses that to try and get to a point before the G.O.D.S. escaped from their own little universe on the shelf!

just a suggestion...


because I want to see a sequel too!!!!

[Demonskates]

i never finnished the hockomock story, but it could tie into this somehow.

[Smoke]

just givin this old man a shock with the defibrilator, incase any new members wish to read it.

[Cartesiantheater]

bump... one of these days we'll need more of this...

[Demonskates]

bump... one of these days we'll need more of this...

hahaha....yeah.....i need some damn motivation..ive been lazy.

[Protostar]

yeah demonskates, when are you going to give us a story?
<yawns> We really like your creative writing stories......






incoming message:

March 2009

"The Bubba Effect"

:: refers to citizens who believe themselves to be wronged by their
government and whom posess the ability to defend themselves.


Clunk.
Eye's open in the dark suddenly ripping away the sweet slumber
of A weary mind. Protostar's eye's gleaned in the night, pitch black and no
light to try and focus. Thinking that sound was "metal on metal" and
guessing it to be a turrent of ice "whizzing by" as 150 mph wind gusts
"tear up the atmosphere" 500 ft more above.
No electricity has left the place cold and damp with some heat from candles
battling the single digits outside. Heating fuels long gone, the down
bedding allows a somewhat comfortable sleep. Starting the fire is always
the first job in the morning, the makeshift bathtub "camp fire" is complete
because there is a satellite window in the roof there..
indoor/outdoor thermometer has a "solar battery" attached and that thing
is reading -45 and wind velocity relatively slow at 35 with wildly fluxing
wind gusts at 75-175 mph.
good. fire on. next boil water. The ice is the only water we get, our life
line; yet our deathline. How ironic eh?
looking up through the little plastic window and makeshift stackpipe,
all I see is black. Seemingly unreal blackness.

Sitting down now protostar pours the hot water over the packet of
"stuff" placed into the cup. Old dried out coffee beans scraped up from
the back of the kitchen cabinet and crushed. And listening to the movement from the critter that had somehow gotten into the house.

It had been 3 months since the incident and there had been hide nor hare of any human activity "down the mountain" since then. Pulling on a blanet
for that extra chill, proto sat back down thinking these thoughts as
the extreme exhaustion took over and sent her back into dreamland......

[Protostar]

psst. this is where someone else continues the story.
Using members of AO, you create the story...
we all do!

[Demonskates]

Thats actually quite an awesome idea, im sure with the talent here, it would be one hell of a read....Im Game.